Tumko Dekha Toh.. Season 2 Updated: Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Namaste Everyone,


This is the Season 2 of Tumko Dekha Toh.. Lesha and I built it together and yes we are back with it.. We would like to know if you would want us to continue this FF..


With one condition.. Continuing this FF will mean..

* HumRaaz.. Will end abruptly.

*Benaam Rishtha and Kuch Dil Ne Kaha.. Will continue with their story..


Lots of Love,

Lesha and Mann.




Raath kaafi dhal chuki thi.. Ram was standing at something like a wooden gallery.. A beautiful open balcony walking its way into the sea.. It was dark.. The winds were cold.. The temparature was low.. Ram stood in silence.. He had come for a holiday.. He smiled at the moon.. His heart ached of sorrow.. She was a dream he said to himself.. A dream well cherished.. The first time he had actually touched her.. Was the last time he touched her..


There wasnt a single day he hadnt thought of her.. A single moment hadnt passed when he didnt miss her.. He remembers her last words.. Her voice was fresh in his memories.. He heard her say.. Mein laut ke aaungi Ram.. Toda intezaar kijiye..


Do leave your comments and let us know what you would prefer.


Man here..

Benaam Rishtha and Kuch Dil Ne Kaha are very close to my heart.. HumRaaz - Will have no time for it if TDK starts..


Love,

Mann.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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ma opinion is to continue this.. :D :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looking forward to season 2 of this but plz humraaz ki happy ending kar dena or suspence bhi khol dena nd continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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count plz but one thing i tell u plz dont stop story in middle it is a request i really dont like it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start u guys write beautifully
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz plz plz continue soon. Tumko dkha toh season 1 was my fav ff. So I am looking forward to it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Namaste all,

Tumko Dekha Toh was an FF etched by Lesha and I.. Yes we know that we had left a lot of questions unanswered.. We do not know what drew you to our writing.. Unfortunately.. We have decided to end HumRaaz.. And yes to all the PM's I am getting.. Lesha is the co-writer of Benaam Rishtha and Kuch Dil Ne Kaha.. And yes that's why the style of writing is the same..

Lots of love,
BawraMann.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome back guys, as for my opinion I was very disappointed when season one abruptly stop so I would like this to continue, am waiting for another memorable journey of RaYa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BawraMann

Namaste all,

Tumko Dekha Toh was an FF etched by Lesha and I.. Yes we know that we had left a lot of questions unanswered.. We do not know what drew you to our writing.. Unfortunately.. We have decided to end HumRaaz.. And yes to all the PM's I am getting.. Lesha is the co-writer of Benaam Rishtha and Kuch Dil Ne Kaha.. And yes that's why the style of writing is the same..

Lots of love,
BawraMann.


i remember that FF it was very beautiful


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Today was a different day he thought as he looked at his watch..00:00. It showed..The cool breze blew by again, but he widened his eyes in surprise as Priya's aroma filled the air.. He turned around.. His eyes searching for her..It was like an enwril that surrounded him.. His eyes fell on the hand rail of the wooden bridge of the gallery.. There were candles half burnt flickering with the wind.. He walked along the wooden planks bare foot.. The texture of the wood beneath his feet felt different.. He put his hands oin his Kurtha pocket and walked with a smile.. He looked ahead.. He saw the wooden house.. There was lush green everywhere around.. Huge trees swallowing the area.. The rock contour of the hill behind the house and the small stream of water to the right comming down the rock hill.. He smiled.. He came to the end of the wooden bridge and stepped on stone pavement.. A chill ran through his body as the stone was cold.. He walked along as he remembered the first time he had stepped on the marble flooring in Priya's house.. The lush green mexican grass that invaded through the spaces between the stone pavements gave a tinglish tickle to his feet.. And he smiled.. The dew drops on the grass wet his feet.. He was translated to a different world.. As he approached the house.. It had stairs that led to a portico.. And a beautiful simple door.. He walked up the stairs and touched the bronze door knob.. It was cold.. He smiled.. The door clicked open to his surprise.. He pulled in his suitcase and closed the door behind him...
The darkness suddenly dawned upon him.. It was pitch dark.. His heart felt lost again.. There was pain.. Sorrow.. There was a sense of solitude.. He let go of his suit case.. He wanted to sit down.. He walked towards something that looked like a sofa.. It was too dark to figure what was around him.. But yes there was a strange feeling that someone was guiding him.. His legs touched the teapoy.. He put his hands forward and touched the sofa.. He moved and sat down.. He felt empty.. He remembered her words..
Ram, Mein zaroor aaungi jab aap apne aap ko maauf kardenge.. Tab.. You left me with no choice.. He shut his eyes.. And all he coud see is her moist eyes.. She never said anything more.. He knew he had wronged her.. He burried his face in his palms.. His heart ached of umptiness.. His head hurt.. He let out a sigh...
Just then his phone rang..
He tok his phone and looked at the display.. Vikrams name flashed.. He picked it up..
Ram: Haan..
Vik: Arre Ram tu pohunchgaya na?
Ram: Haan.. Closing his eyes.. Itni Raath ko phone kiya.. Kuch kehena tha?
Vik: Arre kuch nahi.. Actually.. Koi aur rehene waale the waha.. Pata nahi ab kya hua.. Anyway.. Tum khud dekhlena.. Aur kaam mein sambhaalunga.. Bye..
Ram: Arre kaun.. Before he could say anything the phone beeped..
Ram was lost.. He had no idea what Vikram had said.. He was annoyed that he had to deal with someone who would stay here.. He thought to himself.. Arre mere Priya ke ghae mein koi aur koi kaise.. Possesiveness empowered his mind.. There was anger frustration and pain.. He sat in silence..
His head hurt bad.. He wished for all the pain to go away.. There was a click of the door knob..

Well.. Thankyou so much for a warm welcome.. We are glad that you all like our stories.. We live the same life.. And see things the same way.. We hope we didnt dissappoint you with this update..
All questions comments and criticism is welcome..

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