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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Mini1991
Waiting
waiting
waiting
waiting

kuch der aur wait karna padega baby...

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sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: aiyathasan
kuch der aur wait karna padega baby...

Ok...wait krte he

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vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: aiyathasan
nhi sweetheart out of town thi to nhi aa paiye if mai... kuch din aur wait karna padega abhi tak socha nhi kya likhu aage...😭

Ohh ok..par jaldi likhna we will be waiting..

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

PART 15

ram gently pulls her near him... he slide his hand into her waist priya close her eyes for a second... she feeling goosebumps all her body... priya puts her hand on his shoulder..and other hand is resting above his hand... music begins..

saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara
dheemi si dhadkan ko badhne do zara
lamhon ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

ram pulls her a little more.. both are looking at each other.. and taking steps in a perfect way...ram scoop her and pulls her in a swift motion..their breath is touching each other...for a second they do not break the eye contact...

aankhon mein humko utarne do zara
baahon mein humko pighalne do zara
lamhon ki guzarish hai ye paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

ram and priya is looking at each other longingly...time stand still for them, they r lost in each other eyes... ram close his eyes and takes a deep breath... priya is looking at his beautiful face... her heart and mind is fighting with each other..her heart is saying to show her loves to him and takes all his pain away but her mind is warning her that if she shows her feeling than she will loss him for forever... looking at his pale face priya can not able to control her urge anymore she lightly caresses his face... she stands on tip toes and gently places a kiss on his cheeks...placing the kiss priya realize what she done she steps back and looks around no body is noticing them all r lost in them self...priya steps back... before priya turns ram holds her hands and pulls her near him.. in one swift motion priya fall into in his broad chest... she closes her eyes tightly she clutch his coat... ram slide his hands on her waist and holds it firmly priya presses her head against his chest...

salvatein kahin karwatein* kahin
phail jaaye kaajal bhi tera
nazron mein ho guzarta hua
khwabon ka koi kafila
jismon ko ruhon ko jalne do zara
sharmohaya* ko machalne do zara
lamhon ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

priya compose her self and stands properly... ram hands holding her waist firmly...priya is looking in the floor... he caresses her waist his hands roaming her back..priya close her eyes a cold wind running through her spine...her eyelash become heavy... ram is observing her expression...her left bare neck is inviting him..he leans a little and places a hot kiss on her neck... priyas hands is running on his back..she digs her nail in his back...

chhoo lo badan magar is tarah
jaise sureela saaz ho
andhere chhupe tere zulf mein
kholo ke raat azaad ho
aanchal* ko seene se dhalne do zara
shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara
lamho ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen
hum.. hum tum..
tum.. hum tum..

when the reality stuck in their mind they separate from each other both r feeling intoxicated... they r not able to looking at each other eyes...they moves from the dance floor and stand one corner of the hall... vikram and neha witness all the things...
u have to do something really very fast before it getting late...neha says
i dont get it yaar they both love each other than why they r not sharing their feelings.. vikram sight...
insecurity, fear of losing each other for forever, ego this is the main problem... for all this they are not able to share their feelings...neha reply.. neha and vikram both r worried for ram and priya... neha goes to priya and vikram to ram...
hey whats happens why r u looking so nervous is everything okay? neha asks
yeah dont worry neha its just i m feeling little tired.. priya reply...
priya dont lie look at me neha insist..priya looks at neha.. why r u and ram punishing each other like this...you love him and he also love you than whats the problem why r not telling your feelings...plz priya before it too late takes the right decision.... tears gather in her eyes...priya clear her throat and says you r getting it wrong neha i do not love him nor he...
oh really priya r u think i m a blind person i did not see what u and ram r doing on the dance floor...neha frustratingly says..
its jussst priya is not able to complete her sentence she is looking at down..
look priya u r not a teenage girl nor ram a teenage boy..both you two need to be behave maturely..go to him and tell your feeling... he will accept you or reject you..if he accept you than you will get what you want but if denial to accept you.. than you will be able to move on in your life...life is too short priya dont waste your time...go to ram and show your love to him... i know ur love will force him to love u back...
saying nothing priya just hugs neha tightly...neha also hugs her... some moment later they separate from each other... neha wipes her tears and says.. dont need to waste your tear like this...priya please remember on thing ram is just need extra care and love...someone badly broke his heart.. after that he is not able trust any woman... i know only you can make him trust it again that true love is still exit in this selfish world...
i promise neha i will give my everything to get his trust and love...many times i tried to go away from him but every time i have failed... i have failed to ignore him... his innocent face...his painful eyes everything attracted me towards him...the thought going away from him killing my soul.... now priya become emotional.. neha holds her hand and assurance her that everything will be fine soon...

what is this ram why r u playing with her emotion when you know that,,, you do not love him... vikram asks him angrily
"what r u talking about i dont understand.. "
dont act so naive ram... i dont understand one thing if really dont love her than why r u show so much concern towards her when she got hurt... why you always tries to find opportunity to spent time with her...is it for lust? or something else? priya is very nice and decent girl so never imagine that u will use her...
whatever happened in your past just forget it and tries to move on your life... priya is perfect for you... give a chance to you and priya and stars a new life with her...dekh ram main humesha tera accha hi socha hain to iss liya kehe rahi huin priya ko apne zindegise mat janede... khoda na kare kabhi aisa na ho ki jab tujeh apni feelings k aahesaans huin to priya teri zindegise bohat dur chale gayi hain...before it too late ram holds her and tells her about your feelings...

ujjani di,viru, bg,gb,lg here is the update... i know it is not good at all...
hey guyz please leave your valuable feed back and plz dont forget to hit the like button...

Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

This dance ignited romance in these two love birds...
Thanks to neha for understanding priya's emotions...
Perfect update described with beautiful words...
Update soon darling...

Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Awesome update...wow kya super hot raya ka dance h yaar😳😳😳...maza aa gya mujhe to raya k dance dekhkr 12 march episode pr pohuch gyi thi...
wow aab raya ek dusre ko apne dil ki baat btaenge...continue soon jaanu !!!!!

Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

THANKS. ok, back to comment, thank u do much dear for this update, it's good dear, chhota hain par bohot pyara hain, no need to give long update all the time, kabhi kabhi aisa bhi de diya karo, toh I will be happy, u know I always wait for ur update, next time itna der mat karna, waiting for next part, continue ASAP 👍🏼 ❤️

Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago

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itsmeg3

@itsmeg3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

chota hain..phir bhi accha hai update..nxt time bigger one plzz

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Thanx darling for awesome update in this short time... 🤗
Raya ka dance bahot ki sensuous tha.. 😳 nd very heart wrenching convo btw ram-vik nd neha-priya... 😒
Both love each other but not ready to confess it...hopefully they will soon 😛
Cont soon plz..

Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Romantic update...thud faint...cant wait 2 see 4 raya milan...ple ple update soon..thanku so much 4 amazing update after long time..if it is possible so pm me in ur next update..i m also following ur ff in other forum..so keep it up :-)

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