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Posted: 12 years ago
this update for my sweet friend Alya
part 7

To seeing there closeness the moon become shy and cover herself with the cloud... the butterflies hide into the flowers... the surrounding creates a magical atmosphere... anyone want lost into it...suddenly the wind blew more strongly... the wind blowing the curtains of the room...ram and priya is lost into each other arms... they forget about the world, forget about the right and wrong... they dont want to think about past and future... they just wanted to live this moment... the moment which is only belongs to them... Ram hearts is a curving soul for love he always run from loves... sometime love gives us hope to live our life happily and again sometimes love gives us so much pains that it will takes so much time to forget the past...,,, so the person who got hurts from the love he or she will not be able to believe again in love... same thing happened with ram... love made him a stone... nobody has the courage to breaks the stone... but now ram is feeling weak... it almost 15 years that ram is like that... in this 15 years ram has never feels so weak and vulnerable... but today priya has successfully breaks the stone... ram does not know why the destiny plays this games again with him... is he really deserve the pain that he got... is he really so bad? is he does not deserve anybody? is he born to live a life like this? yes he had a past but does not mean that he has no right to makes a beautiful future... nobody is perfect in this world...

priya is lying on the bed under him... he trails soft kisses on her neck and shoulder... ram takes her earlobe in his mouth and bits it softly,,, priya cant control anymore she tightly clutch the bedcover... Ram huskily whisper in her that sorry priya i cant do this to you... priya istantly opens her eyes... ram is looking in her eyes with burning desire... they lost for a moment into each other eyes... rams takes his eyes and puts his head in her crook and hugs her tightly a tears escape from his eyes...,, he pulls her more into his arms... priya tries to move but ram whisper plz dont move priya... plz stay like this plz... priya extended her hands and puts it in his hairs... now she is slowly messaging his scalp,,,, now she just wanted to makes him relax...

After sometimes later ram gets up from bed and goes to wash room, before leaving the room ram said her to wear her dress... priya is now feeling confused... she does not know what suddenly happens to him.. why he is behaving like this... she is now ready to give him everything but he refuses to accept her... what is bothering him... everything is going so good but why he stops in the middle... what is he thinking about her right now... is he really thinks that she does not deserve him... is he thinking that she is a characterless women who is willing to gives him everything without any objection without any demand... is she really makes a mistakes to give him the permission to go near her... he always spend his night with many girls if he accepts those girls than what s the problem to accepts her... she does not want anything,, she just want to spend a night with her love with her man...,,, thinking all this priya brust into cry... she cant control her tears anymore... she cant face herself anymore... she cant accept the rejection... she is feeling now guilty... why she again gives him the opportunity to hurts her... now how could she face with ram... sitting on the bed priya hugs her knee tightly and starts to sobbing like a baby... she knows that the pain which is giving by the ram she will not be able to forget it... she cant let ram to see her like this... as soon as possible she has to move from here... it will be goods for am and her...

standinf in front the washroom mirror ram splash some water in his face... how could i do this to priya... how could i think about her like this... i dont deserve her... she has no fault than how could i hurt her... if today anything happened between us i will never able to forgive me... i cant destroy her life... she is born to be happy... i dont want to take any advantage from her...but what i did with her she will never forgive me... why God why thats time why i m feeling so vulnerable in front her... why could not i able to control my emotion... how could i face her right now.. what will she thinks about me... why always i m making all this mistakes... again he splash water in his face...

priya is still sting on the bed and puts her head in the headboard her eyes is close... now she has no strength to look at ram or talk to him.. she got the answer that ram will never accept her... ram comes from wash room he looking at priya she looking so weak and pale... but now he has no courage to go near her and asks her about her health... he does not want to disturb her... he walking toward the bed and sits edge of the bed... he takes his phone from the lamp table and dial to vikram numbers... after sme rings vikram takes the call

vik: yaar where r u you and priya? howz is priyas health now... is she feeling better now?
Ram: me and priya is fine dont worry... yaar plz do me a favor in the morning plz send two cars in my farm house... my phone is showing low battery and in the morning i will not able to call the driver..
vik: yaar dont worry... why you need to cars? at first you drop priya to her apartment then you will go to your house...
Ram: i have some important work in the morning so i cant able to drops her...
vik: yaar why r u sound so low.. is everything okay between you and priya?
ram: just feeling little tired nothing else and yes everything is fine between me and priya... bye yaar i need to take some rest..

vik: bye take care... after cuts the line neha stars to ask many question in one breath
neha: what does he said? how is priya now? is everything happened between them?
vik: neha plz takes some breath... yes everything is fine between them and now we dont need to go there...
neha: thank god everything is fine now i can take some rest now baby come to bed i want to hug you and sleep into your arms.. vikram lying beside her and hug each other lightly and sleep on that position

ram: priya plz lay down on the bed otherwise your will be feels pain in your neck..
Priya: i dont want to share a bed with you... i will sleep on the couch.. priya gets up from bed and lying on the couch and her back side is now towards ram...

ram gets up from bed and takes a duvet from drawer and goes near her.. he covers her with the duvet...he comes near the bed and lying there with sad expression on his face... he closes his eyes and drift to a comfortable sleep...

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Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago
Pinkjali thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like it very much.. It was short, not much raya scene yet in the update there was something that is still holding my arge to read more.. Both ram and priya needs some time to understand there feeling.. Gr8 work, Pls update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago


awesome updte dear...continue soon!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u...bt wht happnd to ram
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Posted: 12 years ago

part 7
really yaar this is it... this is very special update not b'coz RaYa didn't cross their limits as Ram now finally have feelings for Priya but Priya is broke down now she feeling herself not worthy is not gud... i hope soon will will see RaYa together as friends n then there will be new start to their relationship... NeVi is tooo cute yaar but i know they will help RaYa to short out all the things... its really cute & i loved this update... do next post soon waitinggg...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for update.. nic... but ram ke past me kya hua h..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks was so Beautifully written..
Ram has develops a different feeling for PRIYA which he never felt while taking other girls to bed..
He knows this will a Big Step in PRIYA 's life.. which she will never overcome like other women ..He Will too feel like disrespecting a Dignified woman which deserve a Happy and Loveful life with a partner... which he is unable to give..

Super emotional.. But this witness a Passionate Love Story to begin.. cos LOVE ALWAYS WINS..: )
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Posted: 12 years ago
suprb continu very well writn

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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous part both r misunderstanding that they dont deserve each other 😭superb update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
gawwwd what a 360 degree turn u have taken, I was wondering what will happen next and u gave me the answer, I just loved it, didn't expect such but I hope now everything will get sorted out and Priya along with us will come to know the past of Ram, please continue

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