RAYA Os:A Promice To Keep - Page 3

Beautiful os Neel. Loved it.

very interesting beginning and awesome ending.. What i liked most is presentating. Constant changing of states was beautifully written.. Thankx a lot 4 pm and sorry 4 commenting so lately Neel di..

Loved it! Excellent!!! Really neat FF... Yes, I can only imagine what Priya must have gone through hearing "Hum unhae bacha nahii paaye"... Very nicely written trance state!

Yes, ofcourse the Queen of RaYa Union is you and you have written their unanticipated consummation after the 5 plus years long yearning in a jakhaas manner! NEEEAT!!! And can we name the new baby boy Neal :)!

Thanks for the FF!

sorry for late reply...

Originally posted by: snehalparab

hey dear so sorry yaar ..i read it long ago but didnt commented on it it is a masterpiece neel youve balanced it so well ...he came back for her she returned because of his strong love ...he knew something is wrong because he met her ...neel felt goosebumps on me reading the souls part👏 ...really awesome and loved it and sorry once again for late reply dear hope you frogive me on that

Awww snehal dont be sorry dear ..If you read and gave your feed backthat is enough for me Thank you soo much

Originally posted by: saniya9919

Beautiful os Neel. Loved it.

Thank you Trupti..Plz continue your FF ,Im waiting

Originally posted by: D4BALH

very interesting beginning and awesome ending.. What i liked most is presentating. Constant changing of states was beautifully written.. Thankx a lot 4 pm and sorry 4 commenting so lately Neel di..

Thank you soo much dear ,i also like the same portion ...Dont be sorry ,you have read and liked it ,Thats enough for me ..Thank you

Originally posted by: malickhabiba

sorry for late reply...

woww lovely post...it is awsomeee...

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: jayashs

Loved it! Excellent!!! Really neat FF... Yes, I can only imagine what Priya must have gone through hearing "Hum unhae bacha nahii paaye"... Very nicely written trance state!

Yes, ofcourse the Queen of RaYa Union is you and you have written their unanticipated consummation after the 5 plus years long yearning in a jakhaas manner! NEEEAT!!! And can we name the new baby boy Neal :)!

Thanks for the FF!

Awww ,well who im seeing here after long gap ..
tHANK you so much for your lovely feed back ,,
Lol yah you can expect the baby boy name Neal .. btw good choice ..