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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: name2saakshi
What do i say about the update... am short of superlatives... just hot, awesome, brilliant, amazing, superb, fantastic doesnt seem to be enough for me...
I just loved it... totally... and u know i just cant resist myself from reading it again and again,,,,😳

Thank you sooo much for you feed back dear ... muahhh i loved it ..

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: snehalparab
inteha ho gayi intezaar ki,
aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki ,
ye hamein hai yakeen bewafa woh nahi ,
fir wajah kya hui intejaar ki,
waitinggg for update neel...

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Aye hayeee superbbb ...Sorry for late ..wil try to update sooonn...Thank you for this..

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: snehalparab

goli and our junior ram

our RAYA singing love song
waittiiinng waiittiinggg ...

awww this is soo cute re...Thank you soo much ...

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: ranii.sharma
Part 36:
Father daughter scene was just too cute! I kept going awwee throughout the whole thing 😛 "He gently removed his finger from her mouth ,she still wanted to hold it opening her mouth expecting something from him..." This part was adorable! I've actually seen this happen with my nieces its just too cutee!... you overheard someones conversation about that! LOL thats awkward 😛
No yaar ,sometimes we may heard from some one..so obviously it was not akward ... But it was a nice scene 😊
Thank you ..
So I was the one the was right then? 😃 yay hahaha "and someone thought exactly for previous part.." Was that me?! lol
Yah its" You "oly dear..

Part 37:
I liked it when krishnaji came and talked to priya that was nice to see mother and daughter-in-law scene which we dont get to see in the show😭

Yah ..How nice if they could have showd..
and it was nice to see they didn't argue after that priya was understanding awesomly cute updates!! Loving these cute scenes between raya and ram and peehu and peehu and priya and then when they're all together

Thank you soo much dear ..

Neel Im sorry 😭 Ive hada busy week so didnt really have much time to be on the forum or read your updates! BUt Finally i said that I have to sit down and read them and reply! hahaha Waiting for your next update!! Jaldi jaldiii 😃

I know Princess will surely give her feedback ...Thank you soo much for taking your time to read the updates and your wonderful feedback ..😛

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
Still waitinggg

Kya karu ,me tooo still waiting for the writer's mail ..but today it will be pakka

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Dilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

lovely.. Never thought Ram will wake up at 4 but ye pyar vi na , kuch vi karwata hey.. Loving his father wala avatar.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: D4BALH
lovely.. Never thought Ram will wake up at 4 but ye pyar vi na , kuch vi karwata hey.. Loving his father wala avatar.

Thank you so much dear ..😛

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: Maya166
Waiting

Sorry the writer got busy with some personal work ... will try to give the update soon...
Plzz bare with it ...😭

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

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Special thanks to all of you my dear readers...

PART-38

The beautiful sunday morning started for them with their daughter's loud pitch cry ,Both startled got up ..
Ram took the lil bundle in his arms, Good morning my Princess ,rocking her in his strong arms leand on headrest ,Priya ruffled PEehu's hair Goodmorning beta !!
Peehu smiled seeing the familiar faces of her parents ..Making fists with his finger ,kicking her legs in jolly ,sounding guaa,awuu...
Priya moved a bit , rested her head on his shoulder ..Her one hand running thrw Peehu's hair ,Ramm how beutiful the morning is ...
Ha Priya when this Princess came into our life everymorning is Happy morning ,Hai na Peehu trickled her nose with him ..AWQQQ Peehu squeled with trickling sensation.
He kissed her forehead than her cheek , Peehu cupped his father chin with in her tiny lil palms smiling sweetly for his relishing kisses ...
Priya overhelmed seeing father daughter love bonding ...Peehu engorced in her father's warmness suddenly turned to see her mother...
Priya streched her hands to reach her up , Cosily she slipped in Priya's silky hands..Priya kissed her lil bundle ...
so ab mummy ki yaad aagyi aapko ha!!!
Peehu gave a wide grin to her ,Automatically Peehu's head tilted to Priya's bossom...
Ohhh so you actually came for your feed ha ? opening her nighty zip !!
Ram laughed softly ..So she is hungry ???
our nahi to kya Ram ,see how hurry she is ...[Peehu removing Priya's nighty with her lil hands [trying]]
He Kissed her legs ,How tiny these were kissed again ...Peehu happily sucking milk ...
Priya rested her head on his chest , caressing peehu's hair , Ram I love you ...
He engulfed her in his side hug , Hmm kissed her hair , I love you tooo ...
Both eyes met for a longtime, His lips gently touched her lips for a feathry kiss..
Peehu finished her breakfast ,Munching her lips she looked at Priya ...
Hogaya ,She dressed herself properly ,so what now , When you woke up Peehu beta ?? touching her fread with peehu's...asking her lil bundle alot of questions..
Patha hai aaj papa ko holiday ..When i came in his life ,He hasn't taken a day off ,Ab aap aagayi toh everyday is holiday for him ..
He chukled for his wife complaints to his Daughter ...
He took from her , Kya karu beta ...all this for your mother and for you only na...
Peehu said "Mmm "
both laughed in unison ...Bilkul papa pe gaye ho ..Omg now itself you are supporting your dad , dont know aage kya hotha hai ??
There is knock on the door ,Ram about to get up ..
Priya:rahane do, mai jake kolthi hu ...
anyway your daughter and you dont need me ...
Ram: kya yaar !!! tum bhi
our nahi toh kya ,she finishd her milk and slipped intoo your arms, and you also finsihd your work with me [winking at him naughtily] oomm night mai!!!
She opend the door to stop furthur convo with him , adjusting her mangalsutra ,Krishuji at the door ...
She said good morning Ma,Good morning beta ,kya hai abi thak soya tum dono ...
No ma see how they were playing morning morning ...Gave space to enter in the room..
Krishuji enterd to see what actually happening ...
Ram is talking very cutely to his daughter and Peehu observing him very keenly ..saying "Mmm" in between ..
Krishuji astonished tilted her head towards Priya ,She nodded her head as approval ..Today mrning only she satred saying that ...And your son is not leaving her alone ..
Both smiled at each other ...
She left from there telling come down for breakfast ...
Everything finishd almost they spent the day pampering their lil daughter ..
The sunsetting down to earth again ... He picked her placed her in baby trolly , Priya walking beside him Hand in hand, they walked by the water, barefoot, squishing their toes in the sand and water crashing against their feet.Peehu chilled out for the cool wind , Priya adjusted baby blanket around her ..
Both enjoyed the evening beach walk..They returned back peehu slept while coming back...
Had their dinner , After some time Priya sat on sofa & Ram was sitting on the floor with his head on Priya's lap. Priya was brushing his hair with her fingers. She was gazing amorously at the man she worships..He too gazing at her with all his love ..Both gazed at their love ,who is sleeping peacefully in the cradle ..
She burst of crying , Hey ye kya hai ..what happen sitting next to her , holiding tightly in his embrace ..
Ramm i .. i ..im scared Ram , dont know what niharika ji upto , she is just waiting for a chance ..
I cant loose you or my duaghter .. you people were all my life Ramm ..Im really scared what will be her intenntions..
Dont worry Priya , as upto this property on your name so you should be more careful than us , ok ...
and dont be afraid my jaan , i wll take care of everything ...
He gave his million dollar smile to her , Plzz Ram make me yours .He looked at her surprised..
Dont knw what im thinking but im not feeling good ..Plz fill me with your love only your love..plzzz i dont want to remebr any any of the thoughts leaving you or something going to happen to my beloved ones .. Her dOe eyes filled with tears ...
He brushed her lips saying i love you babe .licking her neck with his tongue you smell so good my dear , her clasp on sofa firmed , She moand his name "Ramm"
I love you ram, she pulled him up ,kissed his M shape lips, stroking his hairs , Dont leave me ever Ram..
I should say that Priya .. plzz don't leave me ever ..
Make me yours Ram .They dont how their clothes discarded from them ,who moved first nobody knows ,all can we hear her moans and his groans..some times he said I love you while kissing her ..sometimes her husky voice pronouncing "Ramm"plzzz you are making me crazy...
Aaap ki asar hai mam...He jerked her ...she swallowd a lump ..taking his in her ..
Her innerwalls filling with him ..and the jodi slept eachother arms peacefully ...somewhere in her brain the fear had subsided her eyes drooped away ...
The clock striking 5 ...Beads of sweat forming on her forehead , She felt heavy on her chest ..
He felt her heart racing up , the lubdub sounds of her making his sleep restless,Her heart throbbing on her ribs ...
He raced his sleepy eyes to see whats going on with his wife ... Her fists clutching tightly ...He switched on the light ...
NOoo "Papaaa" "papaaa" she yelled almost her lungs out ..
He woke her up ..Priya ..priya priya ..what happen kya bath hai ??
she sat on the bed with a thud , sweating profusely ,Peehu scared listening to the pitch sound started crying , He gave the glass of water to her ,went to peehu to soothen her up with his warm touch ,soon she drifted off to sleep ...
Priya clutched her head in her palms...
he lifted her face up to look at him .. Fresh tears forming in her eyes ...
She dont need anything ,happily she slips in his arms to cry her heart out ..Ram i want to go my house ...
[astonished ]kya????
abhi ...abhi jaana hai ...plz ramm
Kya?? he asked again ...whenevr he told her go to her house ,she refused it going there because of past incidents ...Usually she will call her father to KM whenever she wanted see him , but this time she herself wanted to go there ,, he composed her asked kya ..pressing his lips on her forhead ..
I love you priya ...bathao what happen ??
I had a nightmare that my papa ...papa ko accident ..wo kuch nahi sun rahi hai meri bath .. he is bleeding heavily ..he actually ..sobbing hardly ,you know he left us, he rested forever ..
he hugged his vulnerable wife,she is shivering like a leaf with fear of losing her Papa.Plzz take me to my home ,she pleaded him with a puppy face...
But Priya i do undrstand if we will go now.they will be disturbd...
Plzzz Ram, woo mera Papa hai ...Ramm plzz ...
Ok priya why dont we call them first ,atleast you will feel relax ..He called to shrama's house...No one answering the phone ..
Priya trembled each passing sec is like hardle for her ...
Her tears trikling more ...Ram with a shaky voice he called out
Rammm ..why no one is attending the call ..why Ramm ...
some thing ..Ram bolo na ...
Priya they will be sleeping ra,see what's the time now ..and your phone will be in hall ..how they will hear in this deep sleep
you do onething , go ,freshen up and wear something ,we will go to your home ...
He made call to Karthik's cell ...who attended the call in a momentary sec...
Priya came back with in few mins , Ram rushed asked priya to get ready fast ...
They started from there ,Priya sitting beside Ram ..Is everything Ok Ram ..feeling he is tensed ..
Hope so Priya ..They reached the sharma's house ...

precap :Priya broken down seeing the scene infront of her ... So what''s going to happening ...

Hiii my dear pyariii readers ,,hope you had a great time ..I read your comments ,I overhelmed seeing a good responce from your side you people are so adorable ..
love you guys ,keep reading and leave your feed backs...I'm extremly sorry for late update ,Hope this will compensate your wait ...
Happy dasara to everyone , hope durga devi showers her blessings upon you , have a wonderful life , Take care my pyari's ...
I will be busy upto 25th , I'm unable to update but promice i will try my best to update sooonnn..plz hold on this space for whats coming in their life ...
Plz free to tell me are you liking this track or do you want any more scenes to add this ..plz let me know ...
Thank you soo much for your support .. Love you guys....

Thank you very much for sapring your time to read this FF and make me feel happy with your commnets ... Thank you soo much ...
🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️God bless you all

Plzplz do leave your feed back and dont forgt to hit the LIKE button...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#800

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awesome update Neel loved it once again... yaar so swetly RaYaPee spands their whole day it was awesome... love RaPee bonding awww Peehu just go to mother for food then back again with action with her father so cute ... that's why its says duaghters r always princess to their fathers so adorable...awww n Priya complaining over this haha... i think Priya needs some supports how abt mini Priya????? well time will tells... omg wat Happen at sharma house n will this Nik ever leave RaYaPee in peace or not... but loving this update so update next soon... waiting for this to unfold...

Edited by leena04 - 12 years ago

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