SS-'Tanhayee-An Emptiness'update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys wont be able to reply to all comments individually... extremely sorry for that... but believe me i have read all comments, and all of them were awesome and sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys here comes the next part and i promise this is a long one to compensate for delay in update. hope you all will forgive me😉😉

Part 7

Part 8

Ram: ek baat kahu...

Priya:hmm (Still hugging him tightly)

Ram: so ab kya plan hai (Priya: kya matlab) Ram: I mean abhi bhi puri tarah se shaadi karni hai ya phir shaadi ke baad wala program shuru kare (Priya looked at him with a frown on her face) Ram leaned towards her ear and says I mean phere lene hai yaa I can start with my suhaagraat (he says this while trailing his fingers from her ear to her shoulder)

Priya: pushed Ram away... Ram aap bhi na... pehle shaadi phir yeh sab

Ram: pulled her and said arrey abhi toh shaadi ki (looking at her maang) phir kya ab toh (looking intently at her luscious lips)

Priya shyly hugged him saying Rammm

Ram laughed at her reaction and embraced in his arms my angel… and Priya hides her face in his chest with her breathes hitting directly on his bare chest

After lingering for some time…priya places a kiss on his chest… which resulted in quickening of Ram's heartbeat and his grip tightens on her

Ram: Priya please don't do this to me… I won't be able to control… his words die their own death as Priya places another lingering kiss on his chest…

Priya: Ram… dnt stop ur self (That shocks Ram to no end and he tries separate her so as to look at her face, but priya tightens her grip, seeing her apprehension, Ram stops and waits for her to complete her sentence)

Priya:Ram I love you and from now on I'm all yours

Ram placing a gentle kiss on her hair says I know, my angel only belongs to me and no one else... but priya I really want everything to be perfect for you... for us... I love you and can wait for my life... and besides angel physical love is not my only need... my need is to feel u like this (crushing her in his arms with his face hidden in the crook of her nape) I want your presence in my happiness, in my life, in my breathe and everything... I want to spend all my waking moments with you and your smile that brightens my day and my mood. And above all I want 2 of us to be one not only name or body but also by soul.

A tear rolls down her cheek giving a wet feeling on his chest... that makes him aware of her emotional state and to speak up:

Ram: 1 more thing Priya, if u want to marry me u'll have to accept my condition

Priya frowns hearing this and separates him for her and looks in his eyes, how much she wants to know this condition was equal to the her fear of losing Ram thinking what his condition might be... by she knew her heart has a blind faith on her love which makes her to give a positive nod... saying all ur conditions accepted

Ram warns her saying to think twice before her acceptance... seeing priya not budging from her stance he drews her closer saying my dear wife... do u think u'll be able to fulfill my condition... (Priya:hmmm)

Ram; okay den, my dear wife my condition is from now on I want no tears in ur eyes... can u promise me this... I want my angel to be the happiest person in the world and I dnt want even a hint of tears or sadness in ur beautiful eyes.

Priya: But Ramm... I can't help myself it's just...

Ram:sshhh Priya... u wont it do it for myself... it was my promise to myself that I'll do this for u... tell me do u want me to fall in my own eyes...

Priya: no ram never, okay I'll try not to cry

Ram: but

Priya: sshhh... topic closed for discussion

Ram: yes ur honor and they share a hearty laugh

Ram: pulled her in a bear hug, burying his head in her hair

Priya too puts her arms around him and after some time she listens to his murmurs…" uff Priya, I cant imagine, we are so close to each other, I have been waiting for this moment from last 16 years... and..." he was so emotional that he couldn't continue and Priya was shocked to see Ram in such emotional state, so to lighten the mood:

Priya: oh! Emotional and all haan, I didn't knew, the Ram Kapoor has this side also, everyone says he can be rude, rutheless, shrewd man... but emotional, lover and a kidnapper I didn't knew dat... and giggle

Ram was surprised to see Priya like this... teasing, smiling giggline and pulling his legs,

Ram; hmm, toh my angel is teasing me haan!!!

Priya: Yes, what will you do, u just know ur looking so cute (pulls his cheeks) and adorable (ruffles his hairs) a perfect GOLU

Ram: wat!!!

Priya: separates herself from him showing him a thumb and says yes… Golu... my golu

Ram: no Priya dnt call me that

Priya: wat houldnt I call u… "my"

Ram: No ofcourse u can call me "Yours" (and sudden smile appears on his face and twinkle in his eyes) but dnt call me that...

Priya (understood wat he wants to say but continues): Wat

Ram: (pouts his lips) Golu

Priya: aww my baby... and suddenly adds "Golu" and bursts into laughter

Soon Ram-Priya were running around the room, with Ram chasing her while she continued calling him as "My Golu"... After some time Ram got tired so he rest himself on the bed and he was breathing hard

Priya sees this and a panic took over her and she comes near him and starts rubbing his back and loosens his tie and take off his coat... Ram are u okay... I m..

Priya was cut short as Ram made her lay back on bed and e was over her...

Priya: (shock): Ramm...

Ram;hmm... Ram haan, abhi toh bahut Golu golu kar rehi thi

Priya: shys and says haan, woh toh

Ram: woh kya

Priya: Woh toh aap hai hi

Ram: accha toh mai tumhe golu lagta hu..

Priya: bites her lower lip and nodes her head

But Ram lost his focus and now his focus was only on those luscious lips which were captive with her teeth... Ram was eyeing them which soon caught Priya's attention (making her to turn red and grab her lips more tightly with her teeth) which was doing crazy things to Ram

Ram who wasn't able to control himself moves his hand to her lips... and gently makes her lips free from her teeth (priya's breathing quickened) by now Ram's finger were caressing her lips wch were slightly red from her own assaults, his caressing made her lips to shiver wch she wasn't able to control by her will so she was abt to confined them by teeth... but before she can do anything... Ram replaces his finger with his lips... taking priya with surprises...

Initially it was just a peck of his lips on her sweet lips… but soon ram starts caressing her lips with his own... when this wasn't enough to satisfy his feeling he suck harder on her lower lip and gave a bite her lower lip which made her to give him more access to her mouth... and happy with his triumph he releases her lip and kisses her full on her mouth evading her inner sweetness with his tongue... before this feeling can sink in on Priya, he was tasting her,,, and without giving 2nd thought priya's hand moved to his hair pulling him more closer and she too started responding him... and soon her tongue started playing with her mate... Ram took a turn bringing her on top of him but without leaving her lips and his hands moved to her neck bringing her face more close to him... and soon he tug at the dori on her back and open the knot holding them together. And again took a turn and by now they were in the middle of the bed, with Ram over Priya still kissing each other...

After some time when they felt the need of oxygen, he left out a groan and released her lips but not before biting them and then sucking on her same place to stop the blood oozing b'coz of his bite...

And then he starts trailing his kisses from her lips to her jawline which ended on her earlobe.

He places a kiss on her left earlobe, while his 1 hand removed her earring from right one and then he changes side and kisses her right earlobe and bite them, and during this he removed the left earring, all the while priya was moaning and caressing his hair, he again changes the side and kisses her on left ear and made his way to her crook and started nuzzling and soon he threw away her dupatta to give himself clear access to her shoulder, neck and throat, and starts the trail of his wet kisses which started from her neck to her collarbone on left side to her neck on right-side and back to left-side.

Priya's breathing was accelerated resulted in her from rising up-down and touch his hard toned chest... Ram started making pattern with his tongue in the crook of her neck, this was the exactly where her pulse was... and Priya who wasn't able to handle his teasing anymore let out a groan followed by his name in her husky voice...

Priya: Rammm

And in no seconds Ram bite her at the same place which made a priya to arc her back touching her br...st with his chest and then Ram started sucking her on the place to soothen her from his bite and suck on her blood... Priya knew things were getting too hot between them as his hands started to roam at their will and his legs started caressing hers... but neither she has control o ver feelings nor she wanted. She was too overwhelmed with his love and the feelings wch he was arising in her. So she gave herself to her love... Ram slided the left shoulder of her kurta exposing her creamy shoulder to him and started placing wet kisses... and gave his love bite on shoulder and collar bone.

Ram look up to see her... but Priya tug at his collar and pulled him closer and touched his lips to hers... and in no time, Ram deepened the kiss...

Then...














Then...



















Rest in next partJ

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Edited by fan_forever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
osssuuum is the only word totally loved it continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update continue as soon as posible
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi kakul...how are u?...updated after a long time...
that was yummy..yummy...😛
raya chemistry..absolutely mesmerising...
raya became one...😳
ab next part late mat karna pls...😛😛😛
will be waiting for it

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Posted: 12 years ago
its nt fair to interupt like this...,it ws fabulos one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update yaar.. jaldi update karo next one.. zayaad der TAANHA mat chodna..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooo Superb but where u stopped yaar please continue as soon as possible PLEASE
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Posted: 12 years ago
Still mesmerized yaar... What a suprebbb update after a long long time... But worth wait... Plzzz next part update sooonnn...

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