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sss283

@sss283

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

I missed reading this before !!!😭😭😭😭...i cant believe it...!!
its awesome...
every detail is just brilliant...
got two parts back to back...am too happy for that...
do continue soon pls...

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

read two parts... awesome... love it... ❤️

pls... can u change name of the thread... i mean can u add FF : ajnabi ehsaas hai ye... 😊

thank u... 😊

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joohi

@joohi5ifyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow...Very Nice...I Wish this would be the story of BALH Except Ram -Ayesha marriage. Thanks.

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sss283
I missed reading this before !!!😭😭😭😭...i cant believe it...!!
its awesome...
every detail is just brilliant...
got two parts back to back...am too happy for that...
do continue soon pls...

thanks for the lovely comment it means a lot i will try to give you more updates soon thanks once again

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Awww sneha it was another fantastic update ...
loved the convo between arpita and priya ...her cute words are soo nice..
and the photo wala scene awesome...
cont soon

😊😊😊😊thanks dii your appreciation means a lot and i was happy that you liked the update i will continue soon thanks once again for lovely comments and guidance,...

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

part 3 continued ...arpita and priya both were hugging each other just then swayam said maa beti ka laad pyaar khatam hua ho toh ab hame bhi hamari kulfi mil sakti hai kya ...priya and arpita seperated arpita went behind meeta to bring her kulfi and to bribe her for extra one ...here priya gathered herself and sat on the couch swayam and naina both sat next to her consoling her ...but priya was stil thinking of something ..why did her little princess said she needs her papa why? have i failed in becoming a good mother a strange erotic feeling was there and her ma noticed it...naina: beta aisa hota hai abhi arpita school jane lagi hai wahan dosto se apne papa ke bare me sunti hogi toh use bhi lagta hoga ke uske apne papa chahiye u dont worry normal ho jayegi woh ..priya was not satisfied by this explanation in her mind she decided to ask her pari why did she said she needs papa ...?????they both came home, ma was going to stay there with swayam for some days and then return. she changed her clothes changed arpitas clothes and went to kitchen to give her milk with extra choclate ,she knew she need to go through her stomoch to take the turth out ..she was just like him , a exact replica of him ...she brushed it off and went to her room she saw arpita was talking to her gudiya which she brought forcefully from the malll... she was saying"tumhe pata doolly aaj meli fleind ne muzse kaha ke mele papa nahi hai uske hai aul sab log muze chila rahe the dolly...aur sab ne muze golu bhi kaha dolly muze uska bula nahi laga pal mele poppa ko bula kyun kahan ..."she was sobbing holding her small doolly close to her heart just ike her father used to hug his original dolly 😳..priya for second composed herself and then went to her to give her milk she took her in her arms and looking at the doll said"dekho doolly aru se kehdo momma to hai na woh aru ko sabke poppa se jyada pyaar karegi aur ek din jaroor aru ke poppa bhi ayenge lekin agar woh aise kamjor aru ko dekhenge to momma pe gussa honge ke kyun unhone uska khayal nahi rakah momma plomisse karti hai paaka wala ke poppa ayenge jarur apni pyari si aru ko lene..." with that she planted a kiss and asked her to drink milk to be strong ,arpita followed and hugged her mother soon drifted to sleep...here in mumbai,ayesha :mr kapoor muze apse baat karni hai ram:haan bolo na kya chahiye ayesha :aap kyun karte hai aisa kya main sirf slesh ki ma hi hoon aur koi nahi kya apki sirf meri taraf sirf zimmeddari hai pyaar nahi kyun mr kapoor apki patni to apne bana liya lekin patni hone ka koi adhikaar nahi diya muzeram: mai ye sab nahi kar sakta jab tak meri yadeein wapas nahi aa jati main kisi pe bhi bharosa nahi kar sakta kisi ki nayi shuruvat nahi kar sakta jab mera ateet hi itna dhundhla hai aur muze khud ko pata nahi to kaisesuddenly ayesha felt a jerk she looked down and saw slesh pulling palllu she pushed him and went down ..in her thoughts she had questioned thousand times to ram but in reality hardly ram spoke to her on anything except when it required and that too for slesh only ...he was giving her everything she was enjoying all the luxuries of mrs kapoors life but she wasnt having that right on ram ...and for this one thing she had started hating priya although she died ...but still ayesha just hated her what kind of wall you have build priya, that i cannot brake in 4 years although he isnt remeberring you now and i promiss he wont in his lifetime( yes ayesha had forgotten everything the love ,the sacrifices,the care and the pain her priyadi bared for her ,evrything only because ram was not ready to accept her she was growing restless day by day)Ram was missing vikram and neha as they had gone for a vacation and this time vikram had demanded a long holiday of 20days so he can take neha and children to a long trip ...they had decided to go to dubai this time (vikram and neha were planning and both of them came to same conclusion to go to dubai...a beautifull place ...)but they didnt know it wasnt them it was their destiny who plaaned their trip to dubai...to be continued sooonnn...

Edited by snehalparab - 13 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hayeee sneha dear ..this time i was the one to comment first ...
oh poor arpitha ..i can't c her crying ...ram lost his memory still in touch with priya's love ..
too good dear , soo whats next .. when nevik meet priya ..
when ram will meet priya ... ????? thank you for the update 👏👏
cont soon

Edited by luvsakshi - 13 years ago

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awesome part... love it... ❤️

continue asap... thanks... 😊

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love4raya

@love4raya

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

lovely!!! very well written.. update soon.. and kick out dis ayesha from ramz life soon.. :)

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Read all the 3 parts in one go ,
part 1= touchy, dil ka rishta.
Part 2 = so sweet.
Part 3 = milenge milenge.
Total of all three a power pack story. Keep updating

Edited by Pinkjali - 13 years ago

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