FF: Tera Chehra Jab Nazar Aaye..Part 3,pg.9 (24.6)

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nandinimp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

hi amby,

thanks for updating... and I love your riya...sweet, innocent and smart enough to know what her mother should not know...loved the winking part... brought a smile... and you know what when I read about Ram and riya in your FF ek ajeeb sa sukoon milta hai... ideal father daughter realtionship and you pen it so wonderfully... Your melding of past and present is absolutely fantastic to read..go man go..

now will wait for your Ram to charm the hell out of Priya...

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Amby u are a rockstar!!! love it more than anything else... Read it the moment u posted but couldn't reply as i was reading it on my cell!! Its awesome!! Continue ASAP!! Desperately waiting!!

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Hey awesome update...plz continue soon

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saniya9919

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Loved every bit of the update.Pleaseee continue soon!Waiting for RaYa scene.

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jakther7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

oye Amby now i can't wait 4 next update please jaldi de dou next update

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Evan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Amby Di, ek update to banta hai 😔 😒

waise bhi raya separation and other filthy articles dekh dekh kar bheja fry ho chuka hai... ab ap ek super cool update do plz I'm dismayed by all these crap

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Edited by evanbaxter7058 - 13 years ago

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sahana747

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

FANTABULOUS😃 Your version will be more interesting than the real story anytime, Carry on .

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shonuz_mom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Its awesome Amby. Please do continue soon.

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IndYa4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

WOW

How cute Ambs. Sweet moments between farther n Daughter. Loved lil one and her secret with Daddy.. Sooo sweeet.

Eagerly waiting for Ram to come inside and hopefully he is staying for Dinner. 😛

I want next chapter already girl... Do it .. Do it.. Now.. Now.. 😆😆