RaYa SS- Tu Hi Mera Last Part Pg 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maris08

Mayu

The vidid scene you have described stay put in my inner eyes.. What a lovely Rayalicious moment..
Great going..Thanks for this beautiful update.👏👍🏼.



Maris🤗

Thanks so much for the reply!😳I am honored!😃

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love4raya

mayu awsum update.. the part wer ram entered vid veggies reminded me of the sabji promo.. pls update soon.. :) u have asked weather u shld write an epilogue.. actually nt now.. but yes dont pull it too much also.. :) u write really well have u written ffs before?? pls let me knw if u have.. wld like to read ur work. :)


Thanks so much🤗

Well I have not written any FF but mostly OS on RaYa! Will send you a link for that!😳

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaviya10

Mayu awesome update...Loved it completely...


so beautiful Raya moment...Thank you for such an awesome update...




Thank you again for sucha lovely update...why didnt you send me a PM for this update???
But next time do send a PM bcoz i dont want to miss any updates of yours...😃


Kavi🤗

Thanks so much! I loved to write it very much!😳

Surely I will send you a Pm for the next update!😃

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago

🤗Hello Peeps🤗


My story takes a leap of about a 2 years when Ram Kapoor gets back to being the Ram Kapoor, builds his entire empire with Priya by his side! They are back in the Kapoor Mansion after throwing out Niharika, Siddhanth and Mamaji!

Priya is 9 months pregnanat and both are living life to the fullest! Ram was more than happy with the news and he took extra good care of Priya! He was soon going to be a father! So here you go guys!

Wish me luck for my Practical Exams commencing from tomorrow!😳


Part 5

Priya had a nice shower and then joined her husband for breakfast. Ram wanted to spend the entire day with his wife! He waited for her as she descended the stairs leading to the dining. He saw she was looking extremely gorgeous in her ninth month also. He was again mesmerized by his wife. She was the love of his life; though he remembered nothing; one thing was for sure. Destiny had treated him like his favorite child by giving him Priya in his life!

Today was special. Today was different. Today was the day when he had married Priya Sharma, now Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor. And they were going to celebrate it! It was their unison, their day, their celebration.

It was their first marriage anniversary. Both were equally excited. So much had happened in this single year. Priya had left him after their fight; the bankruptcy and then finally she came back in his life!This day was truly special for both of them!

Ram: "Good morning Priya!"

Priya: "Good morning Ram!"

He pulled a chair for her. But before she was going to take a seat; she caressed his cheek;

Priya: "Aaj aapke baby ko good morning nahi kahenge?"

He smiled at her; it was a daily routine for him to talk with his baby right from the morning till the end of the day. He knelt in front of him and placed his warm hands on her belly;

Ram: "Good morning baby! Aaj na main aapko ek kahani sunanewaala hoon. Aapki maa aur meri!"

He looked up to see tears brimming from her eyes; ready to spill anytime.

He got up and held her closer. He looked into her eyes; which showed the love she had for him; the trust that she had in him. She believed that they will be together forever!

Ram: "Happy Anniversary Priya! Aaj ek saal huya hai ki hum ek saath hai. Par aaj bhi hamara pyaar nahi badla; hamara ek doosre par se vishwas nahi badla."

Priya: "Haan Ram. Sahi kaha aapne. Hamare pyaar ko kisi ki nazar na lage!" she said as she landed in his arms.

Ram: "Haan Priya!"

"Waisi mera tohfa kaha hai Priya?" he said looking intently at her!

She placed his long; slender fingers on her tummy; and looked at him with all the love; admiration and longing she had for this Man!

Priya: "Yahan hain Ram! Bas kuch dinon ka intezaar aur aapka tohfa aapko mil jaayega!" she said smiling in between her sobs!

He gently wrapped his muscular arms around her inflated belly; he pressed his neck in her hair and took a good whiff of her shampoo.

Ram: "Priya waise tum kyun nahi batati hamare baby ko."

She turned to face him;

Ram: "Kya bataoon hamare baby ko? Ki us ke pita kitna snore karte hai? Ya phir ye bataoon ki aap kitne mote hai par cute hai? Ya phir ye bataoon ki wo mujhse kitna pyaar karte hai?"

Ram: "Priya'" he said covering her mouth with his hands.

Priya: "To main kya bataoon Ram?"

Ram: "Tumne wo jo mujhe kahani sunayi thi na hotel main; wo suna do!"

Priya: "Theek hai Ram! Par wo to adhoori thi na."

Maan: "Kyunki uske baad ki kahani ab likhi jaa rahi hai. Yahan meri baahon main! Aur us kahani ke aur bahut hisse hone baaki hai."

She started;

Priya: "Ek ladki thi nilkul seedhi sadhi meri jaisi, uska bas ek hi kaam tha, sab logon ko khush rakhna, apne papa, mumma, bhai aur behen ko. Aur is sab main ek din aapke papa se mulaqat huyi. Car accident ke baad. Bas tab se aaj tak aapke papa aur main ek saath hai. Par beech main kuch theek nahi tha. Unhone mujhe jaane ke liye kaha. Aur phir sab kuch..."

Ram: "Aur phir sab kuch theek ho gaya. Aapki mumma ne himmat nahi haari. Mujhe yeh ehsaas dilwaya ki wo Ram ke liye he jeeti hai!"

"Wo sirf Ram ke liye hi bani thi."

Priya: "Aur phir aapke papa ne aapki mumma se phir se apne zindagi main pravesh karne ke liye kaha. Aur phir shuru huyi hamari zindagi."

Ram: "Aur phir jab aap ki khabar suni to papa ne aur mumma ne dobara khushiyon ke saath zindagi shuru ki."

"Aura age ki kahani likhi jaayegi jab aap paida honge."

With that Ram kissed Priya on her belly and took her lips in a sweet kiss.

She stayed enveloped in his arms listening to their hearts breathing in rhythm with each other.

"I love You" She said as she rose herself from his chest and whispered in ears. She stepped back and placed a gentle kiss on his cheek!

He invited her to a tent to celebrate their anniversary. Their first meeting was in the after the car accident; their date was in a five star restaurant and now their anniversary celebration was in the woods.

Priya goes to the tent where Ram had invited her. She has all the flashes of the moments she spent with Ram right from their first meeting to the moment she was with him in the kitchen! She chose to wear a nice embroidered white colored sari. As she was taking every single step towards the tent she was just remembering all the passionate moments she spent with him. She had a huge smile across her face.

She sees that the tent is surrounded by a beautiful garden; she could actually picture herself and Ram spending time on that huge swing which was there. She slowly enters the tent and is amazed to see how magnificently Ram had set up the tent. The candles were lit all over the place. There was a huge bed in the middle of the tent. It was covered with a white bed sheet. The bed was wonderfully decorated. It was adorned by the words "I Love you". Priya was just in awe of what she was seeing.

She decides to wait for Ram. She also sees a center table near the bed. There was a sweet card kept for her along with a letter; a rose was kept next to the letter.

Dear my loveliest wife, Priya

I have written all my feelings in this small poem I wish to dedicate to you my Jaan!!!

My day begins with you and ends with you,

Whenever I see you, my day is happy.

And when because of me you are upset, I am so upset.

I just don't how to tell you this; let my eyes do the talking;

Because silence is a language too

Mrs. Kapoor I am so in love with you.

Your loving husband,

Ram Kapoor

She is just amazed to how simply Ram has penned down his feelings. She hears the footsteps.

She could sense him coming very near to him. Very near. She was thinking of a way to confess her feelings. And when she sees him; she melts. And there is a lump in her throat. Yes he was standing right in front of her.

Going up behind her, and grabbing her waist, encircling her with his two arms, Ram pulled her against him. Leaning into her ear, he whispered "Here's to a new beginning" and turned his wife around in one quick move. He leaned down and planted a kiss on her lips, slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through.

As the candles were blown away; the couple cherished their night of unison. It was their night; their day and their celebration!

The End!


So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the RaYa fans!

Positive criticism is always welcome!😃

Please press the like button!😳

Love And Luck Always!

Mayuuu

Edited by -Mayu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Mayu, ty for the PM🤗

lemme read the update than will comment 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb As usual.. Waiting for more.. Thnks for updating..😊 Do well in ur practicals.. All the best..
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAyu first of all all the very best for your practicals..
This ending is very nice and simply wipes away all those bad drama happening in the real show..Beautiful raya moments and nice poem too.Thanks for making my weekend very wonderful..
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Posted: 13 years ago
they r so sweet ram very much love priya n i love raya and your update
Edited by viny_queen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Mayu. Loved their way of welcoming their new kid.
All the best for your practicals. Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update sister👏👏👏⭐️⭐️...all the best for your practical exams👍🏼👍🏼...very beautifully written😳😳...thanks a lot for this wonderful piece of writing...😳😃

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