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hi friends thnaks for ur comments and support and here is the other update hope u'll like it😊

Scene 2

After completing the pooja which was done by the new couple all gathered in the hall then Rishabh,Vikram and Neha were smiling looking at Ram and Priya and they both were looking here and there as they were unable to meet each others eyes during the pooja also

Ram irritated:tum sab log kyun has rahe ho kya hua hai and then he remembered and suddenly he became quite

Vikram: kuch nahi hum tho tum dono ko ek saath dekh kar kush ho rahe hai ab is me galat kya hai

Ram was unable to say anything so he dragged Vikram to his room saying he has to discuss something related to the meeting here in the hall daadi asked Priya to prepare her first dish in the house which should has to be a sweet and asked Neha to help Priya. Neha took Priya to the kitchen and once in the kitchen she said how did Ram get that mark on his shirt

Priya:Neha tum bhi na ab muhje suggest karo muhje kya banana chahiye

Neha: wohh fatty ko na sooji ka halwa bahut pasand hai kyun na tum wohh banao

Priya:theek hai mein halwa banaogi

Neha: accha tho apne pati dev ki favorite dish hi banaogi kya

Priya:aisa nahin hai agar tum kuch aur kahogi tho mein wohh banadungi

Neha:nahin mein tho mazak kar rahi thi tum na halwa hi banao

As soon as Ram and Vikram enter Ram's room Ram gives him angry look

Vikram:ab meine kya kiya tu muhje aisa kyun dekh raha hai

Ram:tu kyun neeche unn sab ke sath has raha tha

Vikram:Ram tu na ek baath bata wohh shirt par wohh color kaise laga and he starts to laugh loud

Ram:bas kar ab chup rahega chal wohh aaj dophar ko meeting hai na uss ki tayari karthe hain and they become busy in their work

In kitchen Priya finished preparing halwa and she brought it to the hall and served everyone present there as daadi tells to call Ram, Neha replies that they all will take it to the Ram's room and have it there itself so that Ram and Priya can get some time to which daadi happily agrees and she likes the sweet prepared by Priya and she gives a beautiful necklace and Niharika was also forced to give something by daadi to Priya which she gives it unwillingly.Then Neha asks bansi kaka to bring the halwa for 4 of them to the Ram's room and takes Priya with her

Ram and Vikram have finished their discussion about the meeting and were getting ready to leave for the office when Neha and Priya enters the room followed by bansi kaka who was bringing them halwa

Neha: arre tum dono kaha ja rahe ho

Ram:kyun koi problem hai hum office ja rahe hai ek important meeting hai

Neha:haan ek problem wohh kya hai na hum tum dono ke liye halwa laye hai agar nahin khana tho theek hai tum log ja sakte ho to which Priya gives her a surprised look and Neha gives her I know what I m doing look

Ram:halwaaa' muhje bahut pasand hum kyun nahin kahayengi agar tum hamare liye laye ho tho

Vikram:haan Neha hum khaye bhagiar nahin jayehge

Then they all have halwa and Ram,Vikram and Neha really like it lot and Priya is pleased with herself that she was able to make everyone happy

Ram: arre aaj kisne banaya ye halwa uss cook ko bulao mein ussse kuch gist dena chahata hoon

Neha smiles: sach me Ram jisse ne halwa banaya use gift dena chahte ho

Ram confused why Neha is smiling replies:haan kyun

Vikram:Neha Ram saahi tho kaha raha hai sach mein halwa bahut acchi hai kisne banaya hai

Neha: yeh halwa tho Priya ne banaya and waits for their reaction with a big smile on her face

With both Ram and Vikram surpised say at the same time:kya

Vikram first says:bhabhi aap ne tho bahut accha halwa banaya hai kya aap Neha ko bhi sikhadengi please

Neha hits Vikram and says:kya mein itna bura khana banathi hun kya

Vikram realizing it says:nahin Neha mein tho bas e kaha raha tha ki bhabhi ne bahut hi achha halwa banaya

Neha gets distracted and saya:wohh tho hai fatty tho bahut lucky hai

Ram then observes gift boxes kept on the table and asks:ye sab kya hai

Neha:Ram aaj Priya ne pheli baar kuch banaya hai na tho ghar ke sabhi log kuch na kuch gift diye hai tho ye sab wahi gifts hai

Vikram comes and stands with Neha nad gives a box which Neha gives it to Priya and says:yeh mere aur Vikram ki taraf se

Priya:nahin iss ki kya jarurat hai

Neha:hum bhi tho tumhare family ke log hai kya tum humse gift hain logi maana ke Vikram Ram ka dost hai par Ram humme bhi family ki tarah hi mante hai isiliye

Priya then looks towards Ram who nods his head to give his approval she then takes it from them and thanks them.Neha then asks her to open it and Priya finds beautiful pair of earrings and she thanks them

Neha turns towards Ram and says:Priya ko tho sab se gifts milchuke hai bus tumhara gift hi baaki reh gaya hai

Ram:kya' mere gift dena jaroori hai

Neha:haan bahut jaroori hai kyun Vikram and Vikram nods his head showing his approval and Priya was standing there not knowing how to handle the situation. Then Vikram and Neha leave Ram's room saying he should definitely give him gift so that they can get some time alone

Once Ram and Priya were alone in the room both look other sides not knowing how to face the situation as this was the first time they were alone in the room after morning

Priya wanting to break the silence tells:aap ko koi gift dene ki jarurat nahin hai yeh sab tho bas aise hi

Ram:nahin mein tumhare liya gift laya hoon mujhe daadi ne pehle hi bataya tha iss bare mein tho maine pehle hi gift kareed liya tha and he goes to get his gift box from his cupboard and he gives to Priya and says:tumne accha halwa banaya hai ye tumhare liye hai maine kabhi bhi kisi aur ke liya shopping nahin kiya tho I m sorry agar tumhe pasand nahin aaya tho its k and sees the packet and her face as though silently telling her to open it

Priya understands what Ram wants smiles and opens the gift to her surprise she finds a beautiful white saree with silver work on it and she tells him:its really very nice thank you for such a beautiful saree and sees towards him

Ram sees happiness in her eyes and has a smile and tells: its k maine abhi office ke liye chalta hu then again says nahin jaake aata hoon and looks at Priya

Priya smiles and says:bye

While all this conversation was going on between Ram and Priya down in the hall Vikram and Neha were planning how the two would spend more time together

Neha: aaj na mein Priya ko dinner banana ke liye kahungi aur sab ko chutti de kar ghar se bahar bhejenge aur ghar ke sabhi logo ko bi kahin bahar bhejenge tab jakar un donoko kuch time milega

Vikram:lekin Neha Ram aur Priya ko tum jante ho na phir kaise

Neha:mere paas na ek idea hai hum dono bhi unke saath rehte hai thodi der ke liye phir hum unhe akele chodd dhenge and they ask Rishabh to help them and he happily agrees to it and manages to take all the family members outside where as Neha convinces Priya to prepare dinner, when they finished with the dinner Neha asks Priya to get ready as she'll handle remaining things

Here in the office Vikram manages to convince Ram to go home early and as they both reach the house they find it empty

Ram turns to Vikram:yeh kya hai sab log kaha gaye hai

Vikram:muhje kya pata mein tho tere saath office me than a tho muhje kaisa pata hoga

Ram:haan lekin tune kuch kiya tho nahin na

Vikram:nahin yaar mein kya karunga

Ram not still convinced moves towards his room where has Vikram and Neha gets happy as their plan had worked out.

thats it from my side for now


Edited by M_n_h - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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keep it going...⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update! Loved it...can't wait to read more!! 👏 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very very good i like it very much plz conltinue writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhh nyc!!!!!!!! plzzz continue ...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi friends thanks a lot for ur comments and here is today's update i dont know but it got dragged sorry hope u'll like it

Scene 3:

In Ram's room Priya and Neha are there Neha sees the saree which Priya kept on the desk and asks about it

Priya:wohh Mr.Kapoor ne gift diya tha

Neha:tho tum aaj dinner ke liye yehi saree pehanna

Priya:kyu

Neha:Priya please main tumhe iss mein ek baar dekhna chathi hoon ki fatty ki choice tum pe kaisi lagti as she got the message from Vikram that they have left from the office and are on the way.Neha thinksto herself kaise bhi fatty aur Vikram ke aane se pehle Priya ko ready kar na hi hoga

Priya:abhi nahin please baad mein kabhi aur

Neha:plz Priya ek baar pehan ke uttar dena bas ek baar dekha chathi hoon and Neha got other message that they'll reach the house in 15 minutes

Neha:plz.. plz.. plz Priya jaldi jao na

Priya some reluctantly agrees and say:k theek hai mein abhi change kar ke aathi hoon

Neha: ab plan mein ek step tho complete ho gaya hai ab aage abhi sab achha hi ho and she sends msg to Vikram that their first step is complete

Priya comes out wearing the saree Neha looks at her and compliments her that Ram's choice looks so good on her and asks her to wear some jewellery and get ready

Priya confused:par tumne tho kaha tha ki tum muhje iss mein ek baar dekhna chathi ho tho phir ye sab

Neha:arre Priya kya tum bhi na agar mein tumhari jagah hoti na tho bilkul mana nahin karthi plz tum ready ho jao na chaho tho main tumhari help kar sakthi hoon

Priya:nahin its k I ll manage hearing this Neha leaves the room making an excuse that she has to arrange the dinner as she got a message from Vikram that Ram and Vikram were already at home

As soon as Ram entered his room he saw Priya in the saree he has gifted her with simple jewellery and he was just standing at the door and staring at her as she was looking gorgeous, Priya felt that she was not alone in the room she thought Neha was back

Priya:arre Neha tum aa gayi meri help kardo na mera ye necklace sensing that there was no response from Neha she turned aroung and found Ram standing at the door looking at her

Priya:Mr.Kapoor aap kab aaye

Ram who was still staring:umm kuch kaha tumne

Priya: kya aap roz jaldhi aate hai

Ram:nahin wohh office mein itna kaam nahin tha isiliye

Priya:aap fresh ho jayeye

Ram:mein abhi fresh hoke aata hoon, he was unable to understand why he was staring like that at Priya and thinks to himself:Ram tujhe kya hoga hai kyun aisa kar raha hai Priya kya sochegi tumhare baar mein and decided that he'll not let that happen again

By the time Ram comes out he finds Vikram and Neha talking with Priya and heaves a sigh of relief that now that they are there with them he would be distracted but he dint know what was planned by his best friends for him

Neha:yeh fatty chalo dinner ke liye tumhara hi wait kar rahe the kya hua tum aise kya dekh rahe ho

Vikram:haan Ram mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai

Ram:tujhe itni jaldi bhook kaise lag rahi hai yaar abhi tho jab hum office se aa rahe the maine tum se kaha kuch kaha lete hai tum ne mana kar diya ye keh kar ki tujhe bhook nahi hai aur mujhe bhi khane nahin diya keech ke le aaye ghar aur abhi keh raha hai ki tujhe bhook lag rahi hi kya ho raha hai tu aisa kyun behave kar raha hai kahin kuch kiya tho nahin na

Vikram:kya Ram kaise bhate kar rahe ho hum aise kaise kar sakte hai tum hi batao mein tho generally keh raha tha ki muhje bhook lag rahi hai aur Neha ko bhi bhook lag rahi thi bus isiliye

Ram says to Priya slowly: mujhe lagta hi ki inn donone phir se jaroor kuch kiya hai Priya looks at Ram shocked remembering what they have done in the hotel room and trying to prepare herself for what they were about to face

All four of them walk out of the room Ram goes towards hall Neha stops him

Neha:fatty wahh kaha ja raha hai

Ram:dining table ki taraf dinner khane ke liye ja rahe hai na

Neha: haan par aaj maine dinner terrace par arrange kiya hai hearing to this both Ram and Priya look at each other

Vikram:chal ram chalte hai

On the terrace there was room with large glass windows on all the sides all the windows were closed and AC was on Ram and Priya some what reluctantly move behind Neha and Vikram as they enter the room they are relieved that there were no balloons and flowers this time the atmosphere was as if arranged for a candle light dinner with the candles .

Ram:yeh sab kya hai tum dono ko aur kuch kaam nahin hai kya

Vikram wispers to Ram:Ram yeh kya keh raha hai tu hum tho bas humare liye kar rahe the tho socha tum dono ke liye bhi kar de isiliye

Ram:mere ghar mein tumhare ghar ja kar bhi tho kar sajtha hai na

Vikram:arre wahh par bache na tho yeh sab nahin kar pate where as Neha and Priya looks at them as they not knowing what they were talking

Neha:Vikram kya hua

Vikram:kuch Neha chalo dinner karte hai

Ram not knowing what to do or say looks at Priya who was is in the same state not knowing how to react sees here and there as she feels Ram's eyes on her she looks at him and then they immediately look at the other side.They all sit together to have the dinner then Vikram gets a call and he leaves immediately saying that bcoz of some work he and Neha have to go to their home immediately and they move out of the room leaving both Ram and Priya alone

Ram:main kaha raha hoon ye bhi inn dono ka hi kuch plan hoga Priya just watches as Ram starts to concentrate on his food and is completely immersed in his food Priya just smiles

Priya:aap ko kuch aur chaiye

Ram:yes wohh fried rice aur paneer ka sabzi bhi please Priya serves Ram taking a khichdi for herself

Ram: tum khana kha rahi ho tum tho raat mein ghas phoos kha.. sorry I mean salad khati ho na

Priya:kabhi kabhi kuch khaleti hoon

Ram: waise tum na khana bahut acchi banathi ho

Priya smiles:thanks

They finish their dinner and both think how to start a conversation and Priya goes to the window to open it and turns of the AC

Ram:Priya yeh tum kya kar rahi ho AC ko kyun off kar diya aur yeh window kyun khol rahi ho tum

Priya:wohh Mr.Kapoor bahar bahut achha hawa aa raha hai isiliye

Ram was about to say something but seeing Priya happy he just keeps quite and tries to enjoy the wind

Priya: Mr.kapoor aap kabhi aise terrace par khana kahaya hai kya

Ram:mein terrace par nahin par yaha bahut ajeeb lag raha hai wohh tho Vikram aur Neha ki wjah se varna mein yahan kabhi nahin and says tumne kabhi aise

Priya :nahin maine bhi nahin par muhje accha laga yahan

A cool breeze blows and Priya's hair starts blowing where as Ram just stands there mesmerized by the scene before him not knowing what are these feelings which he was feeling at the present for the person before him which he has never experienced in his life,he sees Priya turns towards Ram and smiles, he realizes she was telling something and comes back to reality

Ram:Priya tum kuch kah rahi thi kya

Priya:kya hua Mr.Kapoor koi problem hai kya hua aap ka dhyan tho kahin aur hi hai

Ram:nahin aisa kuch nahin wohh tho mein bas meeting ke bare mein soch raha tha its k tum kuch bol rahi thi and he knew he was losing his marbles for the first time in his life

There Priya who is unware of the what Ram was thinking enjoys the breeze and suddenly it starts raining Priya who was very happy puts her hand out to feel hand then she tries to step into the rain

Ram who was observing this says:Priya yeh.. yeh tum kya kar rahi ho tumhe sardhi ho jayegi

Priya turns towards Ram: nahin Mr.Kapoor muhje bheegna accha lagta hai and before Ram could stop her she enters the rain, opens are arms and enjoys the rain Ram also enjoys himself by putting his hand in the rain for the first time by seeing Priya enjoying herself in the rain.Priya comes into the room after some time she was wet and she realizes that Ram was there with her and she dint know what to do.Ram understanding her situation gives her a towel which was there in the cupboard in that room Priya quickly grabs it and tries to dry herself where Ram looks outside so that he wouldn't make feel uncomfortable

Once Priya dried her herself turns to Ram: hum neeche chale muhje change karna hai

Ram:haan chalte hai and with that they move towards there room

Once in the room Priya changes her dress and starts sneezing

Ram:maine kaha than a tum kabhi bhi kisi ki nahin sunthi ab sardhi ho gayi na

Priya:nahin Mr.Kapoor yeh tho bas' subha tak theek ho jaye ga

Ram:mere phaas iss ke pills hai tumhe unke le lo theek ho jaogi

Priya:nahin wohh muhje pills lene ki aadat hain hai and thinks to herself kahin muhje ye aadat na ho jaye pills lene ki

Ram:tum kya soch rahi ho and turns on the AC

Priya:kuch nahin aap ne AC kiya

Ram: haan kyun kya hua

Priya:wohh mujhe tandh lag rahi hi tho

Ram:wohh mein garami mein nahin so sakta

Priya:ohh tho theek hai mein manage karlungi

Ram:mein na AC thoda kam kartha hu

Priya:thanks Mr.Kapoor

Ram:tum subha tho muhje Ram kah rahi thi na tho phir ab

Priya:woh tho muj.. muhje laga ki sapna hai tho maine kahe diya

Ram:tho tum sapne ne mujhe naam se bulathi ho tho abhi bhi bula sakthi ho

Priya:nahin woh tho bas

Ram interupts and says:mujhe accha lagega agar tum mujhe Ram bulaogi tho

Priya:mein koshish karungi Mr.ka.. Ram

Ram:thanks

Ram moves towards bed to sleep where Priya stands there not knowing what to do, Ram turns and says:kya tumhe needh hain aa rahi hai

Priya: aa rahi hai magar

Ram understands what she was thinking:agar.. agar tum chaho tho bed par so sakthi ho lekin right side par please kyun ki muhje left side so ne ki aadat hai

Priya:thanks and moves towards bedand sits on the bed

Ram:Priya agar tumhe kuch hug kar ke sona hai na tho yeh pillow le lo

Priya lowers her eyes remembering the previous night:nahin its k Mr.Ka.. Ram muhje laga ki pillow hai wohh muhje pata nahin tha na ki aap aa gaye hai isiliye wohh sab

Ram:k good night and sleeps

Priya tries to find cotton or something so that she can get some sleep, how ever she couldn't sleep properly whole night and woke up late again and saw that Ram was still sleeping and she gets down to get fresh by the time Priya comes back Ram also wakes up he gets down and starts looking on his shirt

Priya: kya hua Ram aap aisa kyun apne shirt ko dekh rahe hai

Ram: wohh mein dekh raha tha ki kahin kal ki tarah koi daag tho nahin hai na agar koi aa gaya tho phir se hasenge na isiliye dekh raha tha shirt ko suddenly he realizes what he said he looks towards Priya

Priya lowers her eyes as she couldn't say anything and tells:muh.. muhje neeche chal na chahiye varna koi aa jayega and leaves the room still thinking about what Ram has said here in the room Ram also think about the same.

Hope u have enjoyed it all the criticisms are welcomed let me know what you think so that i can improve it further


Edited by M_n_h - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the update! Loved their dinner...and yayy Priya's calling him Ram! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just loved it the update...thanq...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamma92

Loved the update! Loved their dinner...and yayy Priya's calling him Ram! Can't wait for the next part!



thanks i ll try to update next part by tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks hope u r enjoying reading the updates

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