FF-PAYER TO HONA HI THA(NEW UPDATE 26/10,PG-17)+VM

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Shamma Vanat

@shamma92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Awesome update!! Ram unable to see Priya's tears, them having an eye-locking session and then she having to go unwittingly...loved it all!! 👏 👏 Can't wait to read the next part!

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isha01

@isha01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: salekh1
😛WONDERFULLL
OUTSTNAINDINGGG

LOVEDD IT

pLEASE continueee

hey tnx to you that you like this part hope you will enjoy the next one also

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isha01

@isha01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

hey ashima i'm happy that you like my ff and tnx for being with me and yeah i will pm you whenever i update

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isha01

@isha01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
superb ram is getting attracted to priya... he cant bear tears... he wants her to stay... well cursing daadi and bansi kaka fr being kabab mein haddi...atlast ram too found chance to pull vikrams legs... a superb updt...

hey pls tell me your name...i'm isha...and yes this dadi or bansi kaka always maintain themselves to be kabab me haddi...hope you will like the next update also

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isha01

@isha01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

hey shamma happy that yoy like this part also and yes our golu ram is going to fall in love first but oviously not so much slowly or quikly ...hope you will enjoy the next part also

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isha01

@isha01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

part-5

on the dining table everybody is eating and priya is serving them.when she asks ram for
some vegetables ram nodes his head to tell yes but once more dadi do interfare--re
golu to ye sab kabse khane laga?kitna patla hogaya hain tu chal chod ise.priya tu isse
chiken ki ye dish de ree isme shudh ghee milaya hain.ram khake to dekh.ram-nahi dadi main
bahout kha chuka hoon ab chodo na avi ye vegetable acha lagraha hain.kya hain na itne
sare gheeke bad vegetable khanai thik hain.ram tell priya to give some.dadi:re ab to
ehi khayega teri biwi jo khati hain.ram's face become red.ram:dadi aisi koi bat nahi hain.
dadi:mujhe itna buri mat samajh main vi teri dadi hoon...sab samajhti hoon.bosco whispers
to his swetty--ye ram to mujhe ram nahi lagraha hain.niharica:mujhevi,mujhe to pehlesei
is ladki pe shak ho gaya tha.dadi:tum dono kya bol rahi ho jara jorse bolo humvi sune.
niharica:nahi mama...kuch vi to nahi.ap khaona.next morning priya comes to their room
with green-tea but she become surprise to see ram dressed.priya:Mr. Kapoor ap office
ja rehe hain?ram repiled no and remembered her about his promise.surprised priya looks at
ram without any twinkle.ram:tum jaldise ready ho jao hum avi jaker ate hain.priya:Mr.
kapoor apne itna kiya ehi mere liye bahout hain,main thik hoon or sablog to thodi der me
ahi rahi hain.nyways thank you.ram couldn't answerd and priya left the room,ram become
sad cause he was doing it from his mind but priya didn't take this serously.at the evening
ram is in his room with vikram & priya.vikram:ram hua kya hain.dekh guest ana shuru ho
gayi hain or tu avitak ready nahi hain.neha:what is this ram?r u upset?priya ke sath koi
jhagra to nahi hua?ram:kitna sawal karteho tum dono yaar!!koivi confue hojayegi ke kise
chorker kiska jawab de.vikram:ok kuch karneki jarurat nahi hain tu bas ye sherwani pehenke
a.ram become ready for the function.neha:re main avi dekhke ati hoon priya ready hui hain
ya nahi.priya was in ishika's room with her.neha leave the room.vikram:ram main tujhse
naraj hoon.tu kuch bolta e nahi hain.
ram:kya bolu...sab to tuhi bolta hain.vikram:ye vi thik hain.chal batana teri or priyaki
bat age badi ke nahi?ram:ye koi test criket hain jo bat age badegi?vikram:ram!!...chal
nutz or kartik ko hi le re kitna comfortable hain woh dono.is zamane me na logoko 20-20
se khushi nahi mil rahi hain or tu avivi test criket ke peeche para hain.ram:hum aise hi
ache hain.vikram:chal thik hain lekin ye to bata test match avi kis position me hai?ram:
avi lunch time chal raha hain priya apni or main apni dressing room me hoo.khush?before
vikram can tell something neha enters with priya.neha:hi guys...just look at priya,she
is looking awesome!priya wears a white saari and there is no doubt that she is looking
like a fairy queen.vikram pokes ram and tells--priya ramki pills kaha hain?priya:may be
in the drawer...lekin kyun?vikram:tumne ram ki face nahi dekhi kya re woh to tumhe
dekhke behosh hone wala hain!!ram:hey...neeche sab hamara intejar kar raha hain.chale?
neha:ek shart pe.or woh ye hain ke ram tum log jab neeche ao to please priyake ek hat apni
hatme pakar ke ana.ram:dekho main aisa kuch nahi karunga.vikram:to vul ja humvi tere dost
hain.neeche sab tum dono ka intejar kar raha hai.lets make this night special.neha:please ram
vikram whispers in ram ears--kisike liye na sahi priyake liya ha bolde yaar.finally
ram nodes his head for priya.ram:ok.vikram and neha leave the room.ram asks priya--chaleie?priya
with embarracing face replied--haan!ram want to tell priya that how wrong he was about
her innocent god gifted beauty.today she is looking so beautiful that he didn't see
any beauty like this.but he cant tell her anythin and starts walking.the song plays...

JAB KISIKE TARAF DIL JHUKNE LAGE
BAAT AAKAR ZUBAAN TAK RUKNE LAGE
AANKHON AANKHON MEIN IKRAAR HONE LAGE
BOL DO AGAR TUMHEIN PAYER HONE LAGE HONE LAGE PAYER HONE LAGE...
PAYER TO HONA HI THA...PAYER TO HONA HI THA!!!!

Edited by riya01maddy - 14 years ago

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Shamma Vanat

@shamma92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

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Great update!! Awww bless Ram eating veggies then being called in no certain words a joru ka ghulam!! 😆 and awww he got upset when Priya said that she was ok and there was no need to go to her house...lekin Ram if you don't tell her how you feel then Priya won't know!!! I can soo imagine Priya in a white sari and looking gorgeous!!! Ram must be having a hard time not fainting!! 😆 😳 😳 awww they're holding hands to make their entrance...soo sweet!! 😳 😳 and Ram is falling for Priya!!! Can't wait for the next part!

Edited by shamma92 - 14 years ago

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Hi Isha , I m Usha... luving ur ff to the core... the way story moving superb...

superb updt... Ram eating vegetables and not chicken... and daadi taunts him... Ram is sad that priya didnt appreciate his kindness to take her to meet her parents... poor baby Ram... Ram is bowled over by Priya... Luved the Ram - vikram convo... specially comparing Rayas and Nut-kartik marriages to cricket... wow!!! Nuts-kartik wedding 20-20 match... and RaYas wedding test match ...test match ki position yeh hai ki lunch time chal raha hai aur priya apni aur Ram apni dressing room mein hai...fabulous dialogues yaar... luved it to core... well he agrees to evrything fr priya... even holding her hand while walking down to the party... superb... looking frwrd fr nxt updt... updt sooon...