Raya cute moments*A COMEDY OF ERRORS*Pg.45 (01.01) - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
m adicted to ur writting.. gr8 work :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey swati lol that's the shortest but sweetest complement anyone has ever given me! Hope u keep reading my work with that much love..always!
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Thank u dear! Hope u keep reading!
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Update : *RUMOUR HAS IT*

Its evening and ram had returned from the office..and finds priya was dressed in a pink saree and standing in front of the mirror she was busy doing her hair..seeing ram enter priya turns to face him and says-woh..aapko pata hai na..aaj ghar pe hi hai..christmas party..aur vikram bhi neha ke saath yahin aa rahey hain..achcha hii hai..sab ek saath hi iss tyohar ko mana leingey..PRIYA SMILES WHILE RAM SAYS COLDLY-hmm..main..fresh hokey aata hun..RAM TURNS TO WALK AWAY when priya recalls about her decision to tell ram about natasha's pregnancy face to face..and calls out to him-arre..Mr. Kapoor..RAM STOPS AND TURNS to find an elated priya hurries upto him and ram says sternly- abb kya hai yaar!..THE SMILE VANISHES OFF from priya's face as she gets agitated by ram's rudeness but says frowning- itni achchi good news na hoti na mere paas..toh na bataati..RAM LOOKS AT PRIYA GETTING IMPATIENT..while outside..you see neha had come up to greet raya..with vikram but daadi who was passing by stops and they exchange wishes..when they hear priya say-bahot achchi khabar hai aapke liye..aur iss good news par sabse pehla hak aapka banta hai!

They all listen as priya notices ram getting restless and so she fumbles..more than sure that ram was about to shout at her..yet again- woh..pregnancy ke baare mein batana tha..woh..RAM WAS STUNNED AS HE REPLIES INSTANTLY-What!? PREGNANCY? Tum pregnant ho? Ram's words were all the three listened and THEY ALL SMILE AT EACH OTHER! STEPPING BACK vikram laughs..while neha hugs dadi as she gets emotional and was crying! INSIDE A SHOCKED RAM gets ek dum hyper and blurts out while priya was too speechless by ram's irritating habit of jumping to conclusions- what the..aisa kaise ho sakta hai priya! I DIDN'T even touch u on honeymoon! Toh..yeh sab kaise?! PRIYA WANTED TO SHOUT BACK at ram telling her what she actually meant but seeing how the colour drained off ram's face she couldnt help..but not resist the uqge to trouble ram and making an innocent face she says- Mr. Kapoor..uss din..jab..jab woh vidya balan aayin thi na..uss raat..uss raat aapne..(RAM STARED AT PRIYA open mouthed as priya goes on)..abb mujhe kya pata tha Mr. Kapoor ki sharab ke nashey aur vidya se milney ki khushi mein..aap..woh sab..RAM INTERRUPTS ANGRILY-what rubbish! TUM..TUM CHUP RAHO! I Dont want any details! Frowning..ram turns to look away from priya while priya finds it hard to curtail her laughter!
Hope u enjoyed it !😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
rofl! bechara Golu🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL... SUPERB.. I CAN VERY CLEARLY SEE RAM 'S SHOCKED FACE... AND PRIYA AT HER WITTY BEST...

BECHARE GOLLU KO ATTACK HI AANA JAYEE...LOL...

CONTINUE SOON DEAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣👏 gr8 update so funnyy update sooon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb ...even i m not able to control my laughter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so awesome.i can imagine both raya's expresion in this case.keep updaing soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey neha so glad u enjoyed it that much! Next part asap hope u lyk it too!

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