FF *Diya aur baati* .. Always By Your Side..Pg 34

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juhi jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

👍🏼wow...really exciting...👏

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Shiya1206

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Hey i liked ur ff... 😊
Plz continue soon...

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alu5123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Awesome akwardness!!!! loved the way you expressed it. Thanks for the PM.

Alpa

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Shamma Vanat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Thanks for the PM...loving the update and as usual you incorporated the current story line into your FF 👏...can't wait for the next part...btw what happened to your other FF's??? They're not finished yet! 😕

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avivakirk

@avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesome update Ashima!👏 continue please!

The lines I liked the best were:

1)Priya could feel the same awkwardness which she often felt when ram was around..and she didnt knw what to say too... Yes, agree we are awkward around a person we like till the awkwardness vanishes to settle into comfort level

2)while ram just gazes at priya and admires how beautiful she looked even with no jwellery and accesories on..he fumbles-kya main..should i?..😍
Too good statement! many men are impressed with simplicity
3) Ram helping her with her stuff and making place for her things

4)You see priya had begun to yawn and soon she falls asleep and when ram is done with his work he finds priya fast asleep..getting up he walks upto the bed and picking up the book lying next to sleeping priya he keeps it back in the shelf and by then as he was tired too

Sooo sweet scene Ram is so tender and 😆 poor guy had to sleep on the sofa

Loved it .Good job!

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Shee_xaan
👏

Thanks dear😳

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: amiee
wonderful part dear
lekin ye kya ram ko sofa pe sula rahi ho bechare ka banvas pura nahin huva lagta hai🤔
cont soon i mean very soon

😆Banvaas😆Well said...there's a right time for everything hope u will like the way this comes ram's way!..Glad u liked this part..😛Next part asap hope u keep reading it dear!😳

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jingjing
👍🏼wow...really exciting...👏

Hi...😊Glad u liked this update too..Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it dear!😛

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Shiya1206
Hey i liked ur ff... 😊
Plz continue soon...

Hi shiya...😊Glad u liked this update too..Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it dear!😛

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: shamma92
Thanks for the PM...loving the update and as usual you incorporated the current story line into your FF 👏...can't wait for the next part...btw what happened to your other FF's??? They're not finished yet! 😕

Hi shamma...😊Glad u liked this update too..Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it dear!😛I knowww bahot saari pending updates hain will update them asap...😊

Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago