MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago
where are all the parts of the previous fanfic that u have written???? I can find only one part over there??
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the update plz continue 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. loved the upadte.. amazingly wriiten
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ank Lovely Thought and Written Pl update soon.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol very nice part plz write more soon and thnx for the pm:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey atikna ,
I just read all the 15 parts at a stretch now... its just out of the world.. dont have words to express my happiness..... remembered my friend... we both fight like saavan....
waiting for ur next part ... plz do it soon... kudos to u dear 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey!!
thanks 4 the pm, i luved the new update
awesome, SaVan cute fight
continue soooooooon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 16th

Shravan worried whole day for Sanchi

In evening he made his way towards her home and knocked

Kaka opened the door

Kaka: aao beta aao

Shravan: kaise hai

Kaka: thik hai , injection lagne ke baad se fever utar gaya hai par na dawai khana hai na khana jiddi hai na

Shravan : main baat karta hun

Shravan: aur bataiye Sanchi ji kaise hian

Sanchi: aap aap yahan phir se , kya phir mujhe injection lagvana chahate hain

Shravan : han agar app dawai nahi lenghi na khana khayenghi toh yahi karunga

Sanchi: aap ko meri itni fikra kyun hai?

Shravan more to himself,pata nahi kyun bas hai, tumko jab bhi smile karte dekhta hunt oh mujhe khushi hoti hai aur jab iss tarah dekhta hunt oh dukh ……

He was thinking like this

Sanchi: boliye kahan kho gaye

Shravan: woh mujhe aapse ek kaam tha

Sanchi: kya

Shravan: main chahata hun aap mere sath disco chalen

Sanchi: kya

Shravan: woh mere dost ki party hai usne kaha hai ki mujhe aana hoga aur mere ko apne sath ek ladki ko leke aana hoga nahi toh not allowed

Sanchi: main kyun chalun aapke sath

Shravan: aapka ehsaan hoga mujhpar, aur aap waise bhi mere liye kuch karke meri madad ka …

Sanchi" main disco nahi jati sorry

Shravan: chalna padhega, aacha bas muh dikhaiye aur wapas aa jana

Sanchi: ok lekin usse pehle meri ek shart hai

Shravan: kya

Sanchi: can we be friends?

Shravan: no

Sanchi: kyun

Shravan : hum toh pehle hi dost hain , aapko kya laga main aapki madad aise he kar raha hun, dosti toh maine bahut pehle kar lit hi

Sanchi: mujhe nahi bataya

Mujhe pata hi nahi chala hum kab dost ban gaye

God: oh my !!!!!!!sanchi grow up, aisa chalta raha toh mujhe baki saare kaam chod ke yahan hi laga rahunga,

Shravan: thik hai parson main tumko lene aaungha

Sanchi: lekin main jyada der nahi rukunghi

Shravan: good aap wahan bhi behosh hone ka , ya kuch aisa hi koi bahan banaiye, mujhe bhi discos nahi pasand hain

Sanchi: bahana kyun, aur kya sach mein disco pasand nahi?

Shravan: nahi

Sanchi: lagta nahi aapko dekh ke

Shravan : kya nahi lagta

Sanchi: yahi ki itne …..

Shravan : itne kya

Accha chodiye . baad mein milte hain take care…

God: so for shravan it has already happened but what about Sanchi, slowly but surely you'll come together

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 17th

At office

Rahul: aaj tu aa raha hai na meri party mein?

Shravan : han aa raha hun

Rahul: akele nahi

Shravan: han kisi ko sath le ke hi aaunga

Rahul: apni bhabhi ko nahi pichle saal jaise

Shravan: han bhabhi ko nahi la raha hun

Rahul: toh kise?

Shravan: mil lena shyam ko

Rahul thinking – mujhe pata hai Shravan aur maine bahut accha kuch plan kar rakha hai us ladki ke liye

Dekhte jao

Rahul: naam to bata de

Shravan: kaha na shyam mein

Shravan reached Sanchi's house well on time

He pressed the button and kaka opened the door

Sanchi was somewhere inside and she shouted: bas 5 min

Shravan thought: ladkiyon ke 5 min toh kabhi khatam hi nahi hote

Thinking like this he turned and he faced a full length mirror which looked at the door

He was just looking at the mirror when Sanchi arrived at the door

And she looked beautiful , white anarkali suit, hair left open flowing dowm her shoulder, a silver bracelet on her small hands , and two beautiful earrings adorning her ears

A locket on silver chain in the neck .

Shravan forced himself to breathe and he was awestruck because he was sure that Sanchi didn't realize what effect she was having on him……….he was just staring at her through the mirror forgetting himself

Sanchi came inside the room and saw shravan seeing himself in the mirror: yeh ladka apne aap ko mirror mein kitni der tak dekhega

She went and tapped on his shoulder

Sanchi: agar aapne apne aap ko nihaar liya ho mirror mein toh main bhi aapne aap ko dekh lun?

Shravan who was lost , turned and said: hmmm huh , dekh lo , maine kab mana kiya

Sanchi: saara mirror toh tumne chek liya main kaise dekhun , hato

Shravan: very quietly mat dekho tumko khud ki nazar lag jayeghi

Sanchi turned : kya kaha tumne

Shravan: maine kya kaha kuch nahi and he turned back

Sanchi started setting her hair and her suit in the mirror shravan turned and looked at her again and kept on peeping

Then their eyes met in the mirror

They stared at each other for a minute and then both uncomfortable turned away

Disco

Shravan propelled Sanchi inside the disco, she was not feeling comfortable but allowed herself to be led

Rahul saw them both coming inside and smiled to himself

Rahul: hello shravan, tumhare sath yeh hottie kaun hai

Shravan felt Sanchi stiffening beside him

Shravan could feel Rahul's leered gaze on Sanchi and smelled the alcohol breadth

He protectively put his hand around Sanchi

Shravan: happy b'day Rahul

Sanchi felt a strange apprehension when she entered the disco and when that cheesy guy Rahul came and leered at her , she felt even more scared but it all vanished when Shravan put his hands on shoulder and with this gesture pushed her a little behind himself as if protecting her

She felt very happy, it was as if she belonged to him now

All her life Sanchi had wanted to be belonged, to be a part of someone else's life and somehow this gesture of Shravan just made her feel like what she had always wanted to feel

She stared at Shravan when he talked to Rahul keeping her close by and yet away from Rahul's gaze

God: han beta bas yahi main tumko dena chahata tha, security, Shravan tumhe kabhi nahi chodega , tumhari jeevan dhara iss sahil ke sath hi chaleghi ab……….

Rahul noticed this too

Rahul: milvayegha nahi apni nayi dost se(taunt)

Main jaanta hun ise: Sanchi- doon school English teacher

Wahin se padhi bhi hai , scholarship leke college bhi kiya hai…nirmala devi orphanage mein saari zindagi gujaari hai

Shravan : Rahul yeh sab tumhe kaise maloom aur yeh baatein uthane ki yahan kya jarurat , Sanchi meri dost hai

Rahul: tu toh kehta tha ki tu ladkiyon se dosti nahi karta, hmm waise aise sundar ladki ho toh koi bhi apne baat palat sakta hai , kahan chupi thi abhi tak aap Sanchi ji humse bhi dosti kar lijiye

Saying this Rahul pulled at Sanchi's hand

Shravan stopped him and said : RAHUL bas

Rahul: thik hai thik hai , tumhari hi hai main toh bas introduction chahata tha….he then again laughed

God: ab yeh jagah hi baneghi tumdono ken aye rishte ki buniyaad.. jyada acchi jagah nahi hai, romantic jagah bhi nahi hai , aur shyad conditions bhi nahi hain, lekin ab jo hai usse se hi kaam chalana padega

Hmm

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb anki... loved it... 😊👍🏼

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