Ariya The Suspect - Page 9

Isiliye to wo arjun rawate hai.....

Case na milne ki asl wajah bata di....

Hope arjun k against koi saboot wsgaira na mile aur nahi wo fase....

Continue soon dear eagerly waiting for next part...

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Ab arjun kaise iss case handle krega dhekhne mai mja ayega

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Originally posted by: bloomie

hey guys!

Sabse pehli baat toh ye ki writing crossover stories is difficult man. Is baar kar diya, dobara nahi hoga.

So before we begin, I know you guys have a lot of expectations with the story and I hope it does meet them.

Coming to the story, I used to watch CID while I was in school and there was a period when me and a bunch of friends were crazily, religiously, devoted to it. For nostalgia sake, I have picked an older team that was really close to my heart at the time. Of course, there are other characters I love and I know you might have a soft corner for but fitting all of them in was not possible. Forgive me for that.

I have tried to give equal space to both the teams yet I think there are places where the balance might be off. I have tried my best.

Normally, I don't give prologues. Normally, I don't write crossovers either so to hell with it.

This story will start with a prologue!!!

Hey there!

I can understand. People have been waiting for this for a long time. *Sheepishly* I did too.

I mean c'mon CID, the early team, Daya, Abhijeet, ACP Pradyuman, Freddy, Salonke, Tariqa, Sachin, purvi and kavin and maybe Anjali too. The OG team was a blast. And darn.... Thinking how they'd have a crossover with Arjun.... I can't even tell you how excited I am.

I even like early Adaalat. Varun, Bilimorya and KD were also a treat to watch. Before all supernatural theme added on.

Sorry I got carried away. So I like I was saying, I can understand how you must be feeling, pursuing a different writing, managing so many characters and giving each of them ample screen time. Also staying true to the characters while hoping the high expectations of the readers are met. Difficult task. But I know you can definitely pull this off.

So with that, wishing you the bestest of luck, I'll go back to complete "Crawling to love". While you pen down this new story.

Toodles!

Thank you for the PM

Keep Writing (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Originally posted by: bloomie

The Suspect: Prologue

The shower flowed in full force, steaming up the bathroom. The one-bedroom flat was quiet except for the sizzle of the hot water and the music system singing retro tunes. Clad in a towel, she stepped out of the bathroom. She slipped into a cotton kurta and leggings. She lip synced along to the song as she dried her hair.

Sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye

Sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye

Zara uljhi late savaar lu

Har ang ka rang nikhaar lu

Ki sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye

Sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye

The doorbell rang. She wondered mv “Is waqt kaun hoga?” Nevertheless, she threw her towel on the back of the chair and went to open the door.

She was pleasantly surprised to see the man: are tum? Aao na. Kaise aana hua? Acha chodo woh sab, kya loge?

He stepped inside without saying a word. Meanwhile, she was building castles in the air. Happy that her efforts were paying off. He was finally here!

She answered her own question: tum baitho, main abhi chai lekar aati hun

She proceeded to go the kitchen. Behind her back, he pulled out a loaded gun. It took him barely a second to aim.

BANG!

She fell down in a pool of her own blood…………………….

I don't know if it happened to anyone else, but for some reason as soon as I read the last line, the "CID theme song" resounded in my head and then I got busy remembering what Arjun theme before the show started sounded like.😂

New Year brought a new writing style. I'm loving this already. Starting with the dramatic crime scene and next "A normal day at CID/ETF office"

Waiting for how this will enfold. Also I can't help but think. I have read some crossover of Arjun and CID before and both were good start but as you may have guessed, they were all incomplete. But I know I don't have to worry about that with you because you never disappoint. Anyways what I was looking forward to was. For me Abhijeet and Arjun looked a good enough pairing because of their personalities. It makes me Chuckle to think how Daya would react to Chotu. Also, Sameer and Pradyuman will be shaking their heads alot because c'mon Freddy and Choree and if there's Pankaj will bring a comedy flood. And oohh what if Sachin or Kavin decided to be cute with Riya, i don't think our supercop would appreciate that (as there's no character sketch yet, I'm not sure the dynamics and characters you're gonna use so this is just me ranting).

But then again like I said before, it's gonna be difficult to manage so many characters at the same time.

So good luck! The prologue has successfully geared us readers up for sure.

😂😂

I'm sorry. It's just... What an interesting turn of events.

Sure enough Arjun is arrogant and what not but it does make it borderline bad. And Riya defending him meekly was such classic Riya move. Arjun appeared distracted and uncharacteristically non-hyperverbal. He didn't even say his "kuch to chut Raha hai Rathod" line. Neither answered Rathod's wit. This screamed intrigue. Sameer asked for Sakshi and I was like "what if it turns out to be Sak-Ariya thing?"

But then the corpse and that "sajna hai mujhe" lady turned about to be Sakshi. I laughed so hard. I don't even know why. Anyways back to the case.

So turns out, the narcotics raid, double murder of the Couple case and now Sakshi's death seems to be related. Is this gonna be a frame case? What if Riya or Arjun gets framed for this? But then again it's just starting.

And we have VIVEK. OMG I so forgot him. His parkours were my fav back then. So you really meant the OG team. Well hats off for that. Should I imagine Salunkhe as bald too? 😂😂

This is going to be something else I'm sure. The story has just started and I'm already quivering with anticipation.

Keep writing and Thanks for the PM <3

O Damn.... Oh DAMN.... OHH DAMN!!!!

It's not just Ariya, but whole ETF is the suspect. Lol justifies the title alright.

Coming back to the case. I loved how you gave us Ariya moment before giving us the shock of why your story's name made an appearance.

Rajat, Tasha and Vivek. Damn three people that bring back memories. You know comparing to a mature team like CID, ETF was indeed filled with young and dashing officers. It was nice to know even the CID officers recognized that. I loved how Arjun spoke about how Riya needs no help but at the same time dragged her by the elbow. I guess Daya and Abhijeet knew exactly what went on there.

Rajat's reaction was exactly what I wanted to see. A little jealousy sparks romance after all. Arjun's reputation precedes him. Well CID has no idea why Arjun's famous after all. He'll do what he wants even if it's home minister in front of him. I loved it when Sameer turned to Arjun for help. He expected Arjun to cause a ruckus for the case. But he's still more calm than usual. Ohhh I'm so excited.

About the murder, It was indeed someone Sakshi knew and anticipated. Someone she was going to bring food for. But it's still too early to point finger. Something tells me it's going to be Underworld level dramatic. An interwined web of sorts. I guess ETF will get involved in the case after all.

I'm already loving this. *squeals* You are Fantabulous. I could see it happening. All of it. You made sure the essence of every character was Intact. The subtle dynamics between Ariya. The CID officers and their characters crux along with the ETF. It was wholesome. I even felt it was short, even though it wasn't.

Keep writing and Thanks for the PM.

Waiting for the next update

man I tried so hard to keep that essence, I am so relieved it is working out