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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: everestlove

Nice update.😊 Continue soon, waiting to see Riya in a new role. Loved the moment between Ariya.😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Nice story dear....read all parts in one...

Ariya's first meet. Riya ke past main kuch huya hai kya ...?? Vo apni momki vajah se tense h ya kuch aur reason h...???

Their friendship....

Ayesha's entry in etf....love her bonding with sam n arjun...

Riya's promotion...

So sweet ❤️ arjun ne riya ke liye coffee bnaye...aur head massage....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Arjun riya se baat karne ke baad happy mode mein bechare choree confused arjun ke changing behavior ko dekh kar ariya moment beautiful wow riya ka promotion fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Jaan001

Loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Serialbestfan

Part-4


Awesome and mind blowing...

Loved Arjun talk..

It's so emotional...

Finally Sam ko akal aa gayi...

Arjun goes to meet riya in her office to surprise her....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Serialbestfan

part-9


wow dear...

amazing...

day by day i am getting hooked to this story...

its amazing....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Serialbestfan

wow dear.....

its awesome and mind blowing update...

just loved it...

horror movie??

mujhe bhi bahut dar lagta hai...

riya and her antics arjun ko darana chahati thi but nahi dara payi...

so riya help them with this case...

loved sasha and arjun moments


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awsome update


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Riya wapas aayi usse Arjun kitna khush he..


Ke shree chotu bhi hiran pareshan he🤣


Aww..they told each other that they miss each other's company..


Wow..riya ko promotion mila n now she is going to be trained..


Riya ka bhai Ishan riya ke ghar aa rHa he.


Kahi jelilousy track toh nahi aane wala..🤣


Waise jelious Arjun jab office pagochega toh choree ka kya hoga🤣


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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 10

Riya(shocked and happy):Kya sach..

Ishaan:Huh bhul gayi na bhulakkad..teen din baad raksha bandhan hai aur meri vacations bhi start ho jayegi to socha tere ghar hi aa jau.

Riya:Great jaldi aiye i will be waiting..flight kitne baje ki hai mai lene aa jaungi.

Ishaan:Subah ki hai..tu bas address de de mai aa jaunga khud..

Riya:Ok..key neighbour se le lena..address message kar dungi mai..

They talk for some more time then call ends and they retire for night.

Riya was very happy with the new of arrival of her brother. After sending address to Ishaan she sleeps peacefully.

Next day

Riya leaves for her office after handing over the extra key to her neighbour.

Riya's office

She meets her boss Shivam who takes her to training area along with her juniors. As she wanted to become police officer she had taken some basic training to defend herself so she request her boss to train her in some high level training.

Shivam:Okay Riya..pehle mujhe test karna hoga ki tum khud ko defend karne me kitni kabil ho.

Riya nods. Shivam calls one of the trained officer and ask Riya to defeat him. Fight start. At first Riya just keep defending herself but when she realise defending won't defeat him she start attacking him with full force defeating him at last.

Anurag (Officer):Good job Ms Riya..basic training ke bal pe kisi ko harana asaan nahi hai..but you did really well..congrats.

Riya(smiles):Thanks officer.

Shivam:Good job Riya..tumhe mai high level training ki ijazat deta hu..you will learn gun handling and few more defending and attacking techniques.

Riya nods.

Here Ishaan flight lands in Mumbai. He go to address given by Riya and takes key from neighbour. He enters the home start roaming inside.

Ishaan:Hmm jaisa maine socha tha..iss hygiene freak ne ghar ekdam saaf rakha hua hai..lekin mai yahan akele kya karu wo bhi shaam tak.

He thinks to visit some tourist place to pass the day.

Here Riya's training continues for 2 hrs. After that she take a break and do research work till evening.

In evening she go to market to buy rakhi for her dear brother.

Riya(giggles):Iske liye ye rakhi perfect hai. (Will give you its description later on)

After buying necessary things she return home. She keep stuff on table and search for Ishaan.

Riya:Ishaan..Ishaa..kahan hai yaar.

Ishaan(shouting from one room):Idhar hu Riyu..balcony me.

Riya(shouting):Riyu nahi Riya..kitni baar batau.

She goes to balcony and what she see make her surprise and stunned.

Ishaan was playing chess with Arjun and it seems Arjun is going to lose but at the end Arjun wins.

Ishaan(shaking hand with him):It was tough game ACP sir.

Arjun:Yes..you are good player Ishaan.

Riya:Arjun sir aap yahan..

Arjun:Haan..bas tumse milne aya tha aur tumhari jagah tumhara bhai mil gaya..ab tumhara wait karte karte bore ho gaye the to socha chess hi khel liya jaye.

Ishaan:Tera din kaisa raha..aur training.

Riya tells them everything.

Arjun:Ye to bahut achhi baat hai..and trust me Riya gun chalani kuch mushkil nahi hai bus nishana sahi hona chahiye.

Riya:I know sir but..kisi ki jaan lena..mai kaise..

Ishaan:Ri tu kisi ki jaan nahi le rahi hai balki bacha rahi hai..

Arjun and Riya smiles hearing this.

Ishaan:Kya hua maine kuch galat kaha.

Riya:Nahi..wo kal Arjun sir ne bhi yahi kaha tha..

Ishaan(giggles):Dekh ab hum dono ne ek hi baat kahi to of course ham sahi hain..haina

Riya(rolls her eyes):Tu galat kab hota hai.

Ishaan:Exactly.

Trio laughs.

Riya:Aap log baate kijiye mai chai aur coffee banati hu.

Both nods and Riya goes.

Ishaan:ACP sir..mujhe aapko personally thanks kehna tha.

Arjun(confused):Thanks? Kis liye.

Ishaan:Riya ki itni help karne ke liye..iss anjaan sheher me koi nahi tha uska dard baantne ke liye aur tab aapne sirf uske dard hi nahi baata balki uski career me bhi madad ki.

Arjun:Mujhe thanks mat kaho Ishaan..Riya bahut talented hai..aur kisi wajah se uska talent waste ho jaye ye mujhe manzoor nahi..to bas maine wahi kiya jo har koi karta.

Ishaan smiles.

Ishaan:Waise Ri kisi pe jaldi bharosa nahi karti..par aap uske idol hain jab se aap ACP bane tab se..isiliye aapki har advice uske liye patthar ki lakeer hai.

Arjun laughs.

Arjun:Achha ek baat puchu tumse.

Ishaan:Ji?

Arjun:Riya tumhe use Riyu kyu nahi bulane deti?

Ishaan(get sad):Wo use sirf mom bulati thi..unke jane ke baad wo kisi ko Riyu nahi bulane deti..jab bhi koi usse kaaran puchta hai to kehti hai ki ye naam use pasand nahi..lekin mai uska bhai hu na sab janta hu.

Arjun:Tab bhi tum use Riyu bulate ho?

Ishaan:Haan wo to use irritate karne ke liye.

Both chuckles. After sometime Riya bring beverages and snacks for them. They chit chat for sometime then Arjun get a call so he has to leave.

At night

After dinner Ishaan and Riya talked for somtime then retired to bed.

Next day

ETF office

Everyone was doing paperwork of previous case quitely because Arjun and Rathod were sitting there. One of the desk holder Muskaan come.

Muskaan:Rathod sir..aapse koi ladki milne ayi hai.

Rathod(confused):Kaun? Uska naam?

Muskaan:Sir usne apna naam Roshni Rathod bataya hai.

(Roshni is Rathod's only sister. She is three months younger to Riya. Despite living in Rajasthan and constantly nagged by their parents Rathod managed to educate Rosh as much she want to. Now she is in first year of her post graduation.)

Rathod(surprised):Rosh yahan..bhejo use andar.

Ayesha:Roshni Sam ki behen hai guys..

Choree:Oh.

Arjun:Are haan..usne ek baar bataya to tha.. par kabhi mil nahi paye hum kyunki tranining ke baad ham sabki posting alag jagah ho gayi thi.

They all go out to meet Roshni.

Rathod:Rosh tum yahan achanak..

Rosh:Haan bhaisa..aap to mujhse pyar nahi karte par mai to aapse karti hu na isiliye aa gayi.

Rathod:Are aise kyu keh rahi ho? Aur masa aur babasa ne aane diye tumhe akele.

Rosh:Aap bhul gaye na..do din baad Raksha bandhan hai..nahi mai bhaag aayi aur ek letter chod diya unke liye.

Rathod:Kya? Rosh tum aisa kyu karti ho.. aur mai bhoola nahi bas dimag se nikal gaya tha..ab batao bhaagi kyu ghar se..

Rosh:Aur kya karti..wo nahi aane de rahe the.

Rathod:Are to mai aa jata na.

Rosh:Nahi iss baar mai aana chahati thi aapse milne..ab mai pure ek mahine yahan hu..koi aitraz ho to bata dijiye.

Rathod:Are aisa kuch nahi hai..jitne din chahe ruk jao yahan..achha ab chodo wo sab.. aao apni team se milata hu..ye hai Chandrakant Patel aka Chotu commander.. ye hai Shreekant Sen aka Shree..ye hai Ayesha ammunition and encounter expert aur..

Rosh:Aur?

Rathod:Aur tumhari hone wali bhabhisa

Rosh(happily):Kyaa sach.

Rathod:Haan sach.

Roshni (hugs Ayesha):Bhabhisa..

Ayesha smiles and hugs her back.

Rathod:Aur ye hai ACP Arjun Rawte second in command.

Arjun:Hi

Rosh(nods):Hi.

Arjun was seemingly impressed by Roshni by knowing how she managed to escape from her home to meet Rathod.

Rathod:Roshni tum mere cabin me baitho..shaam ko sab saath ghar jayenge.

Roshni:Ji bhaisa.

After sometime they get a case. They all get busy in that. At evening after completing all the work they leave for home.

Riya's home

Ishaan:Riya..

Riya:Haan

Ishaan:ACP sir achhe insan lagte hain nahi?

Riya:Haan..Arjun sir bahut achhe hain tabhi to mere idol hai.

Ishaan:Lekin abhi tak unhone shadi kyu nahi ki..tujhe pata hai kya.

Listening this Riya remember her dream and get uncomfortable.

Riya:Nahi..mujhe nahi pata..wo mai abhi ayi change karke.

She leaves.

Ishaan(thinking):Ise kya hua..kahin aisa to nahi ki ACP sir ki shadi ki baat sunke ise achha nahi laga..kahin ye unse pyar..par ise dekh ke lagta to nahi..

He thinks to check on Riya..he knock her room door for sometime. Getting no response he open the door and see her sleeping peacefully.

Ishaan:Kitne maze se so rahi hai..aur itni lambi smile..(smile) hmm zarur ACP sir ko yaad kar rahi hogi.

He chuckles at his own thought and go to sleep.

After 2 days

It was Raksha Bandhan.

Riya's home

Riya ties Rakhi to Ishaan then leave for office.

Rathod's home

Roshni ties Rakhi to Rathod.

Rkshni:Bhaisa..shaam ko apni team ko bulaiyega dinner ke liye.

Rathod:Thik hai bula lunga par pakka nahi keh sakta ki sab ayenge..

Roshni:Koi baat nahi..

He leaves for ETF.

Riya's office

Dhruv:Riya.

Riya:Haan Dhruv.

Dhruv:Ye koi tumhare liye chodkar gaya hai..

Riya takes the parcel and opens it. It was her photo with covered with blood. She gets shocked and scared drops it.

Dhruv(shocked):Ye kya hai..

Riya:Ek minute..isme ek letter bhi hai.

She picks up the letter and read it.

Mai janta hu wo tum hi ho jo hamare gang ko expose karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.. agar apni jaan pyari hai to turant apni research yahin chod do..nahi to aage tum khud hi samajhdar ho.

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Dhruv:Riya ye sab..mujhe lagta hai tumhe Shivam sir ko batana chahiye iss baare me..

Riya:Nahi..mai sir ko nahi bata sakti..aur tum bhi kisi ko nahi bataoge..agar sir ko bataya to wo mujhe reasearch karne se mana kar denge..mere itne mahino ki mehnat bekar ho jayegi.

Dhruv:Lekin tumhari jaan ka kya..

Riya:Kuch nahi hoga mujhe..ye log skef khokhli dhamki de sakte hain..inme saamne aane ki himmat nahi hai..please Dhruv kisi ko mat batana..promise me kisi ko nahi bataoge.

Dhruv:Ok..i promise.

Rathod's home

Whole team join Rathod and Roshni for dinner as per Roshni's request.

Next day

Both Arjun and Riya stay busy with their work whole day. Riya calls him at evening asking to meet his friends.

At evening he come at her home. Ishaan had went out with some of his college friends who were natives of Mumbai but went Delhi for studying.

Arjun:Riya abhi to Sam Ayesha se milna possible nahi hai..Rathod ki behen ayi hui hai..uski bhi vacations hai na isiliye.

Riya:Oh koi baat nahi..lagta hai bhagwan ne hamari special meet sochi hui hai.

She giggles and he smiles. Both get lost in each other but their eye lock breaks with outside commotion.

Arjun:Waise pata hai Roshni tumse sirf teen mahine choti hai..aur Rathod se milne ke liye wo apne ghar se bhaag aayi.

Riya:What..really..ek wo hai aur ek mera bhai..jo itne saal baad mujhse milne aya.

Arjun giggles and tells her more about Roshni. Riya listen him quietly but a feeling of insecurity tugs in her heart.

Arjun:Achha Riya ab mai chalta hu..kafi der ho gayi.

She nods and he leaves.

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