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Posted: 7 years ago
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The Wait.
Character sketch-
The ETF Team :
Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte - second chief of ETF. arrogant, tough with a dreadful past. - same as the show.
Acp Sameer Rathore - ETF chief. Equally tough like Arjun but hate his guts due to their joint past.
Ayesha - Encounter specialist and recently joined ETF. Has a soft corner for Rathore but doesn't show it.
Shree - Technical expert.
Chhotu - The commando of ETF.
Sakshi - Ex- crime journalist who has recently joined ETF as well and has developed a little crush on Arjun which was known to her friends - shree, Chhotu, Ayesha, Liza.
Liza - Forensic expert. And has a tom-Jerry type relationship with Shree, whom she calls Specky.
Riya Mukherjee - a research specialist and lost her life during a case by swallowing a virus 6 months Ago.
Riya is dead as per now.
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So the story continues same as the show, like the ETF team is solving cases, getting acquainted with new members, except Arjun who mostly emerges himself in his own world after solving a case.
Everyone seemed to move on in their respective lives except the hollow space in their hearts which was once occupied by someone, and that space could never get refill again.
May be it was waiting for that person itself to come back.
So much was going to happen and no one had any idea about it.
Part 1 coming soon. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Nice cs
Continue soon
Do pm the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Nice CS
Waiting for part 1
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Your prologue is THE BEST prologue I ever read in this forum. (no offense to anyone)
Waiting to read the story. I'm sure it's gonna be a super hit.
Upadate soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: armishra

Superb prologue
Continue soon

thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: minamma

Please please do continue sooN

This is so amazing
Wow really loved it

thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: princessdivya

Superb one

Please continue soon

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: balan04

Nice cs
Continue soon
Do pm the update

sure thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

Your prologue is THE BEST prologue I ever read in this forum. (no offense to anyone)
Waiting to read the story. I'm sure it's gonna be a super hit.
Upadate soon...

That's so sweet of you 😛 thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept
Want to read more
Update soon

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