# T3 JID TERE PYAR KI last part on page 52 6/8/2020

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Sana Tabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: manasvi..
Hi all

Sorry lfor late ..was stucked in some personal reasons ..n seriously was not able to update.
But now I'll give regular updates ..
Jid is two or three parts more ..n give next one in a or two days for sure..
Hope you are not angry on me n understand my condition ..

Thanks...

wow didu u r back

missed u alot

no problem didu

hope ab sab thk hai

bye take care

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aashi24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Nice update

Thanks for pm

Waiting for next part

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Aliya Tarannum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#203

awesome update dee

wecome back dee

hope ab all is well hai

loved the update

ansh apne babase milna chaha par wo ri ko tension dekar chala gaya

bechari kitni pareshan horahi hai ansh ke liye

aur ansh wo schoolse kisi ko kuch bataye bagair nikal gaya aur use goons lejarahe the par acha hua ke waha raid padi aur us wajah se wo mumbai pahuncha

ansh arjun se takraya hai na

cont soonish

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ramshaasrar

@ramshaasrar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Arre hum.bilkul bhi gussa nahi...
N that man is non other than Arjun...haina...bus jaldi wala.update

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Amazing yet emotional update Mini Di.

Loved it.

Ansh prayed god to bring his babasa back. But get in trouble and got kidnapped.

But god made him reached his destination.

Riya get back in action becoz a mother cant take chance.

the man who was blank till now rushed towards Ansh as his heart varified Ansh.

I'm teary to read the first meeting of Son and father. Finally Arjun got some emotions and maybe varified his son and Ansh reach his father. Loved it.

Superbly written

Scene and moments were nicely described.

Thanks for PM

Do update soon whenever u get time.

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#206

It was very interesting but very small

Poor ansh was determined to get his babasa

So without letting riya know he went to the tample

But poor baby got kidnapped by those disgusting pigs

That was not enough unknowingly he reached in Mumbai

Poor baby got so scared hungry & at last he got hurt

On the other hand riya ritz & Karan is in miserable not knowing why ansh is

I think the men who hugged ansh is Arjun I really hope ansh reach to his babasa

Update soon dear can't wait to long

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manasvi..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Part 40

All are shocked to see the whole scene infront of them .only one word come out from their mouth - its a miracle ..

Same time samsha reach to see arjun but they are so many crowd outside his room so they get panic n run but a look of scenario shocked them to core.

They are shocked to see arjun is holding n hugging an unconscious kid like a kid hold his favorite toy...Dr n they rush to him..Sam hug arjun but arjun don't react still ansh is in his hand.

Dr try to take ansh from him but he tightly hold him..n tell in childish tone

Ar - mai nahi dunga mera hai..

Dr - use or aapko treatment ki jarurat hai..

Ar - nahi ye mera hai..mai nahi dunga..

Sam - Arjun plz ise inhe de do

Ar don't react...so Dr inject an injection he start loosening his conscious ..sam support him n Dr take Ansh n rush to treat him..,

Arjun's Dr do all of his checkups n test...

Sometime later in Dr cabin

Sam - Dr I hope its a good news

Dr - hai bhi or nahi bhi Mr rathod

Sam - means

Dr - means k arjun mai definitely sudhar hua hai..or wakai mai hum ise miracle kahenge..wo ek jinda lash tha uske jeene ki koi ummed hume nahi thi par aaj is lash mai jaan aa gyi hai ..

Sam - means ye to bahut accha hai na

Dr - hai to par us waqt wo jis tarah react kar raha tha wo ajeeb tha...or jo abhi uski report aayi hai wo bhi uske mind mai blockade show kar raha hai..I am not sure but abhi inki state dekh kar lag raha hai wo physically to thik ho raha hai par mentally hum kuch nahi keh sakte..let see wo hosh mai aane k baad kaise react karega..

Sam - mera arjun thik nahi hoga Dr..

Dr - hope Mr rathod..hope par to duniya kayam hai..

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manasvi..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#208

Scene shift Bhopal..

Riya is crying like hell

Ri - pura ek din ho gaya mere ansh ko gume hue ..ab tak kuch pata nahi chala..ansh us bus se signal par utar kar kahan gaya kuch pata nahi chala..

Rid - di mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai. Plz bhaisa ko phone Karo na ..wo jarur help karenge..

Kar - haa di ridz sahi keh rahi hai ..unke pas power bhi hai or team bhi wo jarur ansh ko dhund nikalenge

Ri - tum log sahi keh rahe ho apne bete k liye mai kuch bhi karungi..

She call etf...

Ri - hello etf.

Receptionist - yes

Ri - I want to talk Mr rathod

Re - sorry mam wo aa chutti par hai..

Ri - mai ex etf member riya mukharjee bol rahi hu..I want his number

Re - sorry mem ap ex member hai to janti hongi etf is a reputed crime brand ..hum aise aapko kisi member ya chief ka no nahi de sakte..

Ri - kya aap unka no ex etf chief parth shakti rathod ki wife ko bhi nahi denge

Re - aap arjun sir ki wife hai..he was great man ..maine recently join kiya hai par unhe koun nahi janta..par mam mai verify kiye bina aapki help nahi kar sakti.

Ri - its ok thanks .

She cut call..

Ridz - ab kya di..

RI- ab kya ridz ab hum Mumbai jayegi..

Ridz- Mumbai

Ri - apne bete k liye kahi bhi jayenge hum

Scene shift Mumbai...

Ansh get conscious n see his surrounding ..he get afraid n start crying ..nurse try to handle him..arjun room is near his room so he hear ansh's cry n wake up..he run to his room like child..n see crying ansh.he hug him..though ansh don't recognize him as his look change alot but he feel safe with him..so he hug him back n ansh stop crying ...

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#209

An - aapka naam kya hai uncle

Ar - naam??

He get thinking

Ar - pata nahi..

An - aapko apna naam nahi pata

Ar - nahi

An - fir mai aapko kya bulau

Ar - pata nahi kuch bhi bol lo..

An fall thinking

An - amm..ok mai aapko babu bulaunga..

Ar - thik hai..or tumhara naam.

An - aransh palth lathod ..but sab pyar se ansh bulate hai aap bhi ansh bulao

Ar - ansh..kitna accha hai...pehle wala to bada hai..

An - ale wo bhi chota hai only alansh

Palth to mele babasa ka naam hai

Ar - ohh accha..par mai ansh bolunga..

Both childishly giggles ..n Dr observe both..n call Sam

Dr - Mr rathod arjun ki dimagi halat ek chote bacche ki tarah ho gayi hai..uska dimag puri tarah blank ho chuka hai..wo kuch nahi janta..waqt or uske aas pas k log hi uske kore dimag par kuch likh sakte hai..

Sam - to mujhe use ghar le jana chahiye..

Dr - I think so...mai uske bare mai or expert se consult karunga fir hum sessions start karenge..

Sam - OK..Aap discharge paper ready karwaiye..

Dr - hmm..

Here arjun n ansh gelled well..but according to his present mental condition ansh is more mautre n smart then him .

Sam come there

Sam - arjun

But he is busy in talking with Ansh as he himself don't know his name .

Sam come forward n touch his shoulder

Sam - arjun

Ar - kaun arjun

Sam - tum ..tumhara naam arjun hai..

Ar - mera naam arjun hai..suna ansh mera naam arjun hai ...

He clap..n Ansh also..

Sam - arjun hum thodi der mai ghar challenge . Mai aata hu

Ar - ghar

Sam - haa humara ghar...

He left to collect discharge paper

Ar - mera naam arjun hai tum mujhe arjun bulana

An - mere baba ka bhi naam arjun hai..Mai aapko kaise bulau..

Ar - par tumne to kaha palth lathod

An - ale wo unka bhi ek ol naam hai Arjun

Ar - unke bhi do Nam

An - hmm to mai aapko Arjun nahi bula sakta..

Ar - to fir babu hi bulao

An - OK .pata hai babu babasa jaisa hi hai..pal aap to ja lahe ho na.mujhe bhi Jana hai

Ar - tumhe kahan Jana hai..

An - ghal Jana hai..

n he cry

Ar - ro mat mai tumhe ghar le jaunga..

An - pal aap to ja rahe hai na.

Ar - mai tumhe chodkar nahi jaunga.,chalo hum bhag jate hai,,

An - pal wo uncle

Ar - unke ane k pehle bhag jate hai...

An - pal

Ar - chalo jaldi wo aise ghurne wali aunty chali gayi(means nurse)

Both run from hospital smartly..sam search for them n here riya ridz n karan left bhopal n coming to Mumbai ...

Tbc...

Edited by manasvi.. - 7 years ago

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

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Posted: 7 years ago

#210

amazing update didu

arjun ansh mile par dono ko nahi pata ke wo baap bete hai

aur ri mumbai aane ka faisla kiya it means wo sam se bhi milegi

arjun aur ansh bhaag gaye

hope dono safe rahe

cont soonish

thanks for pm (pm bheja hi hoga par maine pehle padliya😉)

bye take care

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