awesome updates
read all parts together!!!
sorry for the late reply
was out of town
so...coming back to the story
WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!?!?!?!?!
im so glad i read all of them together warna mujhe ek - ek update padh padh kar toh sach mein heart attack aa jaata
mera shak sahi nikla Sameer's dad is a villain
Arjun Riya aur commissioner ki madad se proofs ikatha kar raha hai
shit man!!! Sikandar recognised him!!!!
uska muh khulwaane ke liye kitni koshish ki par Arjun kuch nahi bola
ab woh log commissioner ko target arne waae hai...OH MY GOD!!!!!!
Arjunn sach mein gayab ho gaya hai aur Riya use dhundhne ki koshish mein hai, woh Sameer se uska papa ka sach batana chahti thi par bata nahi paayi, par i guess commissioner bhi apni jagah par sahi hai
Arjun toh case ke baad bhi udan chu hone ke plan mein hai
woh Sameer se uskapyaar nahi cheena chahta par Riya se cheen raha hai
pyaar se upar dosti ko chuna
samaj mein nahi aata uski sacrifice ki daat du ya nahi
Sameer Arjun ko dhundhne ki koshish mein hai lekin kuch pata nahi chal raha
woh Riya se kitna dutifully pyaar karta hai, on the other hand Ayesha ka dil tod raha hai, haala ki use is baare mein kuch pata nahi toh i can't blame him
Riya ne toh apni life se pura compromise kar chuki hai, sabse zyaada toh mujhe usiki haalat par taras aa raha hai, kitna sab seh rahi hai par kisi se share karke apna dard bhi nahi kam kar sakti, ek taraf Sameer ko lekar apni feelings se confused hai dusri taraf apne pyaar ko almost kho chuki hai, use insaaf dilwaana chahti hai , villain usike fiance ka baap hai aur ab shaadi mein bhi waqt nahi bacha.
use dekhkar toh mujhe enchanted ki Giselle yaad aa gayi
" to not be with the one you love and to be doomed to be with another for eternity"
but atleast that was disney...uski happy ending ho gayi...is story ka kya hoga?
oh god!!! teeno mein se...nahi...nahi ...Riya ne kaafi seh liya... un dono ladko ke bheje mein thodi akal daalo...!!!
cont soon
my god!! maine aaj tak itna bada comment kabhi nahi kiya...record tod diya aapne mera
Edited by bloomie - 8 years ago
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