#T3 JINDGI EK PAHELI-ATEET KE PANNEnew banner n teaser on pg 97 13/12 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: swatipriya

Amazing story... please continue soon...


thanks dear
will conti soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: kashvi19

awesomest update di

totally loved it
omg vikram sikna brother love roshu it seems to me
but roshu is unaware , it will create problem
wow sabko ariya k bare mai pata chal gaya
anurag ne to arjun ki legpulling bhi kar li lol
sabko arjun pasand hai or ho bhi kyu na
arjun uc ja raha hai or riya pareshan hai
sach mai kabhi kabhi aane wale khatre ke bare mai pehle andaja ho jata hai
trio girl so cute
ariya moments so lovely
di pls pls update soon
thanks for pm
n pls pm next part
mujhe to intzar nahi hoga


thanks dear
yup u r ryt
jyada intzar karwaungi b nhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97

nice story di😃😃

continue soon
pm me also


thanks dear
will conti soon n pm up
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Congratulations on new thread
Brilliant part
Totally awesome
Thanks for pm


thnnks dear
glad u lyk it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Congratulations on new thread


thanku soo much
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97

nice story di😃😃

continue soon
pm me also


thanks dear
wil con soon
n surely pm u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
part 56

present


arjun look at them angerily then his facial expression changes into pain

all look at him n feel bad for him, suddenly he hug riya. n she start crying in his arms n he hug her tightly like he want to protect her from pain n world.

ar - jiyu mai hu tumhare sath bol do sach kya hai, sabko lagta hai meri jiya bas dar gayi or usne apni behan or pyar ko bachane k liye ek kamjor kadam uthaya, bata do sabko jiya ki tum kya ho ,meri jiya kabhi kamjor nahi padi are usne to nark (hell) se bhi badtar waqt se gujarkar bhi khud ko majbut kiya hai,

ri looked at him shocked, n all also

ri - arjun tum

ar - sab janta hu,

ri - mujhse nahi hoga Arjun

ar - mai hu tumhare sath jiyu , tumhe ye karna hi hoga, tumhe humare pyar ka wasta

ri look at him with teary eyes n drift into flashback

flashback

its 3 month after arjun left for uc mission . now tani is 6 month pragnent.all are taking care of her very well. ishu start her police training preparation in given exam this month, anurag is very close to catch sikna, he has many proofs . roshni is busy in his painting n she is preparing for teachers job. karan is about to finish his training he is returning very soon,

location - riya room

time - 11 pm

she is writing her dairy

ri - dear arjun , tumhe pata hai tumhare bina kuch accha nahi lagta .tumhe gaye 3 month ho chuke hai or ek hafte se humne bat nahi ki, pata nahi q arjun mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai, mai khush hu , life bhi ek dum normal hai par dil mai ajeeb sa khali pan or dar hai,plz jaldi laut aao apni jiya k pas

love jiya

she kiss dairy n sleep.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
hello all
as you know this part is pm part. so rest portion is send by pm
i have written it by so much effort, dont know how it comes out ,

plz read it n give your comments ,n let me know its ok or not
thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
It was scary
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Wow amazing update
Bt feeling sad for riya
She has gone through a lot

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