ariya ff JAHAN PE BASERA HO part 8 on pg 18 4 jul - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb story
Read all the parts together
All the parts are beautifully written
Something has happened to Ariya and etf is doing the investigation
Love Arjun's letters to team members
And love the covo between Arjun and shree
So RK and RM are twins
And Riya is pregnant
Did Arjun know that something is going to happen
That why is recorded the DVD
Very eager to know about Ariya's love story
How Arjun became Shaleen and quite opposite of his character
Hope etf will solve the mystery soon
And will find Ariya save and sound
Pls continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update..
Love it..
So finally Sam get some clue..
Yes Arjun had left them a clue..
Hope woh isse Ariya ko dund lenge..
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 8


2 year back

Arjun sit in a train after he send shree back to etf.

He reached goa n spent 2 days there but same empty feelings in his heart just like that 1 month passed n he visit many places around India .

After 1 month

He is now on ahemdabad railway station. And waiting for his train to Jaipur.

Suddenly he see a man of his age is crying. He can't control himself so he asked him.

Ar - excuse me

N man look at him with red swelled eyes

Ar - kya hua aap ro kyu rahe hai.

Man - mera naam shaleen raisingh .mai Jaipur mai rehta hu. Meri wife ko ek badi khatarnak bimari hai .or mai yaha uski desi dawa lene aya tha qki medical science ne apne haath khade kar diye par meri train miss ho gai

Ar - to dusri train 10-15 min mai aane wali hai aap usse chale jaiye.

Sha - actually ye dawa bahut sawdhani se le jani hai ac mai .or mujhe itna urgent reservation nahi mila . or na hi flight mai .to Maine Indore tak le liya waha se flight mai but abhi abhi news ayi hai Indore mai barish ke karan sabhi flight cancel ho gayi.meri wife mar jayegi.

He cry.arjun remember roshni n get sad .

Ar - mr shaleen ap aisa kijiye mera ticket le lijiye dekhiye train bhi aa gayi hai.

Sh - sach thankyou bhagwan aapko wo de Jo aap change hai .ye mera ticket ohh par apko to Jaipur Jana tha

Ar - its ok mujhe kahi bhi Jana tha Jaipur na sahi Indore sahi.

He take his ticket n left for Indore train.shaleen look at his back confusing.

Arjun enter train .its from ahemdabad to Indore .so right now he n only a girl is present in compartment .

Arjun look at girl n get shocked

Ar - riya??

Girl looked at him n then compartment its empty n he is staring her. She get afraid but compose herself.

Ri - excuseme dekho akeli ladki dekh kar kuch aisa waisa karne ki mat sochna mai karate janti hu. Abhi yahi chit kar dungi.

Ar - huh riya

He is shocked

Ri - dekho tum mera nam jante ho iska matlab ye nahi tumhara chance hai . apne aap ko itna smart mat samjho coach k bahar sabhi passenger ke nam or birth no like hai .mujhe bhi pata tum shaleen R ho. Maine bhi padahai tumhara or Baki sabka nam you know for safety.

Arjun listen her n think may be she is look a like of riya because they them self attend her funeral.

Ar - dehkiye aap galat samjh rahi hai.anyways I am not interested.

Ri - excuseme , its you jisne mera naam liya wo bhi aadha . or haa jyada smart mat bano tum jaise logon ko samjhana mujhe khub aata hai. Samjhe tum.

More passenger come so she glare him n sleep pulling her blanket. He too sit on his seat.

Arjun POV - kya ajeeb ladki hai .riya kabhi aise bat nahi karti thi.par wahi chahera awaj or nam bhi milta julta .or aaj tak mai sabko samjhata tha or isne mujhe hi samjha diya.

He don't know when he drift in sleep.

Next morning he wakeup by attender.

At- Sir uthiye ye last station hai.

Ar - sorry wo neend lag gayi.

He come out of train .n after brush he buy favourite tea.

Ar POV ye kya kal rat mai itni gehri neend mai soya kaise. Khair agla padaw Indore. Pata nahi iske bad kaha hoga.

He live in a hotel under name shaleen ( he has all records of name shaleen rawte as shree made them for case so full proof )

After 3-4 days
He actually like city n feel some peace there like his destiny take him there n up to something.

Indor a nice n big city of mp. You can see every type of life style here from traditional to modern , from fast life to normal.

Arjun decided to live here for more days. So he rent a flat for him.

He enter his full furnished one bhk flat . n rest for some time.

At evening
He is going to roam where he don't know but he collide with some one

Both - you
Yes its riya

Ri - tum yaha bhi

Ar - ohh no not again

Tabhi ek aunty

Au - are riya tum aa gayi ghar se ye naye padosi hai humare shaleen tumhare samne wala flat hai inka.

N she left

Ariya - what. No...

Both glare n walk in opposite direction

Next day

At 6:30 am
Riya is jogging in a park someone push her unintentionally n she is about to fall but same one hold her.

Yes its our jun jun

But uff both again glare each other and continue their jogging.

Precap - ariya cute fights n their involvement in each other life.n they coming closer
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update kashu
I really loved it
So that way arjun use name shaleen
Oops ariya first meet is like that
Riya is different n in first meet usne arjun ko samjha diya
Yeee arjun is in Indore
He is feeling peace there of course why not his riya is there
Ariya fight starts both glare each other n new neighbor
Mere samne wali khidki mai ek chand ka tukda rehta hai
Hehe he
Precap interesting
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update but itusa
arjun be approx pura India dekh liya
ariya meet eachother in train
ri is so funny n arjun says me SB ko samjata hu or usne mujhe samba diya
arj ko Indore accha LGA so usne flat rent PR me liya
guess what ariya ek dusre k neighbor hai
waiting for ariya fight n moment
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awsm update.
I lovd it.
But too short.

Thanx 4 the p.m.
Conti s0onish
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
Love it..
Precap is intresting..
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice...

Ariya first meeting owesome. ..

Milte hi ariya me nok...jok suru ho gai...

Dono ka ghare Aamne. ...samne...

Waooo...Ab maza aayega. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update kashu
hmm arjun takes that name shaleen
hehehehe ariya ki meeting
riya ne kya samjhaya yr heheheh sabko samjhane wala arjun use aaj ri ne samjha diya too good
hmmm arjun ko indore me acha lag raha he destiny waha layi he use riya ke paas
oops padosi he ariya
n unki glare kya baat he
precap seems interesting
update soonish dear

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