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Well I never knew Rizz you were so good at Vampire stories. You know very less vampire stories writer impress me. And you are now one of them who got me impressed.
Anyways moving on seriously when I saw actually read the Teaser I somewhere thought that Riya was Arjun mate or something. Well at end she is but after she got transform.
Anyways the update was really amazing. The way you wrote the sexual scene which is not exactly sexual. And Riya fear of vampire was a nic touch.
And the end was amazing, transformed Riya was good and amazing.
well I just loved the story.
Ahh after ages I really typed a comment for someone and not just amazing and awsum that feels weird thou.
Anyways moving on seriously when I saw actually read the Teaser I somewhere thought that Riya was Arjun mate or something. Well at end she is but after she got transform.
Anyways the update was really amazing. The way you wrote the sexual scene which is not exactly sexual. And Riya fear of vampire was a nic touch.
And the end was amazing, transformed Riya was good and amazing.
well I just loved the story.
Ahh after ages I really typed a comment for someone and not just amazing and awsum that feels weird thou.
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