Stupid Heart.....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii guys i am new on this forum, i have decided to write a ss based on ARJUN - HAR YUG MEIN AAYEGA SERIAL. happy reading...
PROLOGUE

For some person's love is life, for some love is beautiful feeling that tickles our heart and make us feel as if we are in cloud-9. for everyone love has different significance in life. Its not necessary that love always has to be romantically involvement with opposite sex, it can be parental love - when parents are overwhelmed by love when they hold there new born for first time, it can be sibling love - those silly fights between siblings over petty issues and always having each other back, it can be friendly love - love between friends our own chosen family... love is all around us, it depends on us how much we can grab it!!!!
its a journey of two persons who build their relationship while coming across all type of love sometime in positive making their life more cheerful and sometime in negative giving more mental boost to tackle it and move ahead...


PLEASE GUYS TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT. YOURS REVIEWS DO MATTER A LOT...

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swethalovely thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi welcome to the forum
Concept is nice
Please do continue soon
Please do pm me for the updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii Dear!!!
Welcome to Arjun Forum
Really Interesting Concept👏
Waiting for the story to progress...

Plsss continue soon...and pm me for the updates if possible😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome dear
Concept is amazing
Continue soon
Please pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART ONE

"Kya musibat hai?? Sam tujhe ek kaam bola tha woh bhi nahi kar paya, ab ghar jaake sabke pachso sawaal ka jawab do". Arjun yelled on the phone at sameer...

"Oye mujhpe kyu chila raha hai! Maine toh koshish ki thi na, ab pata nahi koun sa, kab ka tumhara bhula bichara yaar tapak para aur saari sacchai ghar walo ke aage ugal di. Tumhari wajah se mujhe bhi shikha aunty aur suryakant uncle se free fund me jhar sunna para. Waise bhai tu aa kab raha hai? Hum jaise gareebo ko bhi kabhi darshan de diya karo". Sameer asked...

"Arre yeh commissioner meri jaan chore tab na. Pata koun sa naya pyaar jag gaya hai inka mujhse wapas aane hi nahi de rahe hai. Lets see phir se ek baar baat karke dekhunga " arjun replied and after a bit he added "chalo ab phone rakho. Bye. waise bhi paise ped pe ugte hai nahi"

"jis ladki kit ere jaise kanjus se shaadi hogi na, woh toh har pal aapne kismet ko hi kosti rahegi... bye" sameer replied laughingly cut the call...

Sam's pov:

Well that was my best friend ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte, 27 years old,extremely intellingent (he is known to have 10 brains like ravan in the department due to his sharp brain)and devilishly handsome. He is a man of every girls dream tall, handsome, softspoken and well-cultured type . he was second in command of ETF(Emergency Task Force) and currently he is in delhi from 1 year, initially regarding some case commissioner of delhi police asked for his assistance there and he kept on getting pile up with cases resulting in his transfer.

Well regarding the conversation we were having before, the matter is currently arjun is undertaking some dangerous mission which will require his 3-4 months disappearance, and he didn't want his family to know about this because his mom will then worry a lot , so he build up some stupid story regarding his dissapperance and told them and asked me to do the same. Everything was going according the plan but at last moment his frenemy sahil turned up and blurted the truth...

You all must be wondering that who i am as i haven't given you my introduction. I am ACP Sameer Dam Singh Rathore, 27 years old, Chief of ETF Mumbai. My father Mr. Dam Singh Rathore is a businessman and he didn't wanted me to join police, so i had leave my home to full-fill my dreams, but i am still in touch with my mother and occasionally talk to my father also on phone. I am engaged to Aisha Kapoor who is in MBA final year...

So as you all now know about the awesome twosome i.e. me and juno (i love to call him that and he hate this name) lets start to know others then...

Mr. Suryakant Rawte: Juno's awesome dad, he is more like a friend to Jun then his dad. He is owner of Rawte industries and supported Juno's decision of joining police whole heartedly...

Mrs. Shikha Rawte: Juno's mother, very loving,caring and extremely emotional but fiercely protective of her family...

Mrs. Sarika Rawte: she is Juno's adorable dadi, she is a sweetheart and kid at heart...

Mr. Subhas Rawte : Suryakant uncle's younger brother, he is a replica of uncle naturewise. He along with uncle handle the business ...

Mrs. Reena rawte: subhas uncle's wife and extremely fun loving and help us in playing pranks and trouble subhas uncle. But when it comes to the family she is also protective like shikha aunty...

Last but not the least the last member of Rawte family till now.

Mr. Karan Subhas Rawte: cousin of juno. Recently completed his MBA and was forced to join business, due to some recent crisis. Love his family a lot but the person he loves the most in the family is juno. Karan considers juno as his role model, and can never hear anything wrong about him...

So this is Rawte family and i am also considered as a member of this family because uncle-aunty considers me as their own son and strictly ordered me to call them mom-dad...

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Love,

Swati

Guys this is it, the ending of part one... no proof reading done, so forgive me for any mistakes...

Your all opinion matters the most , so please comment and let me know your opinions... add me on your buddy list list for pm...

p.s.- please can you all refer some good ariya's stories as i am new on this forum so don't know much about it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too short update
Amazingly written
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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like d prologue and 1st part too
nice starting
and love d way u keep secreat that story will be ariya, arni or arkashi
aisha ko police wali hi rehne deti mba student bna dia chalo koi baat nahi
karan ko arjun ka cousin bna dia
ye interesting lga mujhe
sam ne apna ghr chod dia job k piche
ab arj k parents k sth rehta hai
interesting concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome update
loved it
continue soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome dear
Awesome part
Loved the way you present the story
Really well written
So arjun is going for mission but he want to hide this news from family
Who is this sahil
Sam pov is nice
Con soon
Thanks for pm And buddy request
Because of my Id problem I dont have chance to send br to anyone
Bye

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