ARAKSHI: Whispers of Unknown Feelings-2nd part updated

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Hey Everyone!!!
I am again here😊
To start a new story on ARAKSHI for someone very special and close to my heart...Gausiya Appiii...its her birthday gift...😃

WHISPERS OF UNKNOWN FEELINGS

INTRO PART-

She woke up at the alarm of her clock. Today will be her first day in Mumbai's Collage because she lived in Delhi and studied there only. Delhi is the city which she will never forget. Her thoughts were disturbed by the call of her Mom from living room. She got ready and looked herself in the mirror before leaving the room.

She went down and her whole family was waiting for her. It looked as if she was going on a war and that was true, she was going on a WAR. A life in this city is not that easy specially for her because she was not made for the lifestyle of this city. She took blessings of her family and then went to mandir that was made in her house to take blessings of her "BAPPA".

Her dad came with her favourite red rose in his hands.

Dad (giving that rose to her):-All the Best Sakshi.

Sakshi hugged her dad tightly.
...

Somewhere else,

He was sleeping peacefully in his room when his phone rang disturbing his sleep. He know who is the caller so he picked up and directly answered,"Aa raha hu yaar."

A female voice came in,"Jaldi Arjun.

Arjun lazily got up and went to washroom to get ready for Collage.


So here i end the Intro part...hope u will like the gift appiii😃

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Intro Part- Page 1
Part 1- Page 2
Part 2-Page 4

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Thanks for all the comments and likes to this story...so here i present the first part of the story...hope u all will like it...

1st Part

At College,

She was waiting since half an hour but it seems like ages. A girl came from behind and called her very sweetly,"Hiii Aisha".

Aisha(turning back and with same sweetness):-Hiii Shweta.

Shweta:-Kiska wait kar rahi ho???

Aisha:-Mere Shining star ka.

Shweta went from there while Aisha was standing at the college gate only. After few minutes Shweta again came there but this time with someone beside her.

Shweta:-Yeh raha Shining Star.

Aisha turned to find Sameer standing there with Shweta.

Aisha(sarcastically):-Mai chamkte huye taare ki baat kar rahi hoon tootte huye taare ki nahi

Just then Arjun entered the College.

Aisha(happily):-There he is...MY SHINING STAR.

Arjun(with same happiness):-Kaisi hai MERI JAAN??...

Sameer:-Woh toh thik hai par tu nahi rehne waala.

Arjun:-Kyu???

Aisha:-Shyamal sir tera wait kar rahe hai...jaldi jaaa.

Arjun went to Sir's office asked for permission to enter.

Arjun:-Sir aap kuch kahe isse phele mai kuch bolu...may I???

Sir:-Jaldi bolo...

Arjun(dramatically):-Sir mai aaj ghar se time pe nikla tha par aadhe raste jaa kar ruk gaya...kyunki maine road ki side pe kaali billi dekhi.

Sir:-Phir

Arjun(continuingly):-Maine billi ko dekha...billi ne mujhe dekha...phir hum dono ne ek dusre ko ek saath dekha.

Sir(listening carefully):-Phir kya hua???
Arjun(relaxing his shoulders):-Phir kya...billi bhaag gayi...(again dramaticallly)...par mai wahase nahi gaya kyunki mujhe aapki baat yaad aagayi ki agar billi rasta kaatt jaaye toh phir uss raste se jaana nahi chahiye warna accha kuch bura hota hai...maine intezaar kiya...thodhi der baad ek aadmi wahase guzra uske baad hi mai gaya...ab aap batayie maine kuch galat kiya...agar kiya toh I am ready for the punishment...

Sir:-Nahi Arjun...tumne jo kiya thik kiya...tum jaa sakte ho...tum bohut samajhdaar ho Arjun...

Arjun went out from the cabin not before having a victory smile and saying"Kuch naya bataiye sir".

Sameer and Aisha were waiting for him outside and one look at Arjun's face told them that Shyamal sir was clean bold.

Arjun(mischievous smile):-Meri isss hassi ke peeche ka raaz SAMJHE YA SAMJHAU??...

Sameer:-Bhai samajh gaye...tu firse andhvishwaas ki game khel ke aaya hai...kyu karta hai aisa??

Arjun:-Yeh sab mujhe bhi nahi pasand...par yaar sir mere peeche hi padhe rehte hai...woh hume padhate bhi nahi phir bhi unhe mujhse problem hai...

Aisha(saying in between):-Leave this Arjun.

As she was about to say something more, a girl came and hugged Sameer.

Arjun(slowly to Aisha):-Lo aagayi Sam ki deewani... Mahira .

Mahira(jumping with joy):-Sameer subah subah tumhari shakal dekh li ab mera din bohut accha jayega.

Arjun:-Abhi jab aayi tab kisi aur ki shakal dekhi nahi??

Mahira:-Dekhi par notice nahi ki na...

Arjun(again to Aisha):-Aisa bhi hota hai??

Aisha(to Arjun):-Mujhe kya pata??...(to herself)...bohut accha jayega tera din...CHIPKALI.

Aisha went to other side of Arjun. A boy was coming with coke in his hand. Aisha put her leg in between the way of that boy. Boy lost the balance and all coke splashed out on Mahira.

Aisha and Arjun started laughing and Sameer was trying his best to control his laughter while Mahira who was frustrated by all this went to washroom to clean herself properly. Aisha also went from there with her other friends.

Arjun(controlling his laughter):-Isska matlab tu samjha ya mai samjhau???

Sameer(confused):-Kya bol raha hai???

Arjun(while walking with Sameer):-Yeh sab jo abhi hua...uska matlab ki koi tera chehra dekhle toh usska din accha nahi kharab jaata hai...teri shakal hi bekaar hai.

Sameer glared Arjun at this and Arjun ran from there. Both were running in the corridor when suddenly Arjun twisted. A boy was standing with a flower there. Arjun took that flower and with a full turn he came directly on his knees.

In front of him was standing a girl with lower head. He was lost for sometime. The girl wore a beautiful blue anarkali with few accessories. She was looking like an angel came down from heaven. Arjun's trance was broken by a comment.

Boy(sarcastically):-Wow Arjun...what a proposal...issiliye tu rockstar hai college ka...well done.

Arjun got up from his knees. He actually don't know how to react and one look at girls face told him that she is not liking the things going around her. Arjun gave back that flower to the boy saying "Yeh le pakad apna phool".

Arjun(stammering):-I I am...ss.

Sameer punched Arjun from back so that he can speak properly.

Arjun:-I am really sorry...maine aapko dekha nahi...sorrry...

The girl went from there as quickly as she could and Arjun called her many times but she didn't gave a glance at him.

Sameer(hitting Arjun):-Abe yeh kya kiya tune??

Arjun(helplessely):-Maine kya kiya Sam??...maine usko propose nahi kiya...mai toh usse pheli baar mila hu.

Sameer:-Pata hai mujhe...I think she is new admission aur uske expressions dekh ke lag raha tha yeh jo bhi hua woh uske liye ragging se bhi ganda tha.

Arjun and Sameer went from there for their class. While on the other hand, the girl was really embarrassed by what happened few minutes ago. A girl who saw everything was standing with her friends and commented looking at her.

Girl:-Yaar tumhe pata hai abhi Arjun ne iss ladki ko propose kiya...isme aisa hai kya??...aur yeh wahase aise hi aagayi agar mai hoti na toh itna accha proposal waste nahi jaane deti..

Now the girl was at the verge of crying. This was enough for her. Firstly she was really nervous today as its her first day in college. Now that incident happened with her. She ran from there to go to "Information Office".

Girl(controlling herself):-Suniye mai new admission hu...mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata college ke baare mei..Kya aap bata sakte hai ki meri class kounsi hai???

She gave a file in which there is all information about her. As the man sitting on the chair took the file her name was written there in capital letters "SAKSHI ANAND".

Man:-Dekhiya Mam humare paas aur bhi kaam hai...ek kaam kijiye (giving her a photo)..yeh beech mei jo ladki hai na usske paas jaiye yeh aapko sab bata degi.

The man put that photo inside her file and gave it to her. Sakshi protested but it was of no use. She looked at the photo and her eyes captured three friends standing together. The boys who were standing at the side made her remember something but she ignored it for time being and went to find that girl. The girl's name was written behind the photo "Aisha".

She went from there and to her luck she found Aisha standing with her friends.

Sakshi:-Aisha Ji.

[This time maine Arjun aur Sakshi ko pehle hi mila diya...taaki meri first story ki tarah aap logo ko der tak wait na karna padhe😆]

Here i end the 1st part...sorry for any mistakes...hope u all liked it...plsss do comment...

Precap:-All characters in the same class.



Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Character Sketch

Arjun And Sameer:- Rockstars of the Collage. They are inseparable besties. Girls drool on them for their charm. Fun-loving guysss. Loves to flirt. They have a best friend, their JAAN, Aisha. Sameer has a soft corner for Aisha.They have a same dream ,i.e, to serve the nation.

Aisha:-Lady Dabangg of the Collage. Very close to Arjun. She has some unknown feelings for Sameer. Beauty with brains. A girl with many dreams.

Sakshi:-A girl with pure soul. Silent and Sweet. She stays in her limits. Never tries to get frank with someone. Serious about her studies. Her family means whole world to her. Shy and not have much friends or say no friends because of her reserved nature.

Baaki ki description and baaki ke characters u will get to know as the story proceeds.
Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Hey guysss...thanks for your beautiful comments and likes...keep supporting me like this😃
I m here...with the next part...enjoy reading...

So here you go,

Aisha turned back as Sakshi called her name, "Aisha Jii."

Aisha came there with a weird look on her face and said, "Tumne mujhe bulaya?

Sakshi:-Ha.

Aisha:-Toh phir yeh "Jiii" kis cheez ki khushi mei lagaya...I mean mai tumhari age ki hu...and I have such a lovely name. You should call me Aisha only. By the way...your name??

Sakshi:-Jii...thik hai...mera naam Sakshi hai.

Aisha:-Nice name.

Sakshi:-Aapka bhi naam bohut accha hai.

Aisha (smiling):-Thank you...ab batao kyu bulaya?

Sakshi:-Woh actually...I am a new admission here...aur mujhe kuch nahi pata...information centre se pucha toh unhone bola aapki madad lene ko.

Sakshi handed her file to Aisha. Aisha was totally engrossed in reading that file. Then they started walking.

Aisha:-Tumhari aur meri same class hai. Don't worry...mai tumhe poore college ke darshan karwa dungi.

Sakshi noded and then she decided to ask about the two boys standing with Aisha in the picture.

Sakshi:-Yeh aapke saath picture mei do ladke koun hai???

Aisha knew about whom she was asking so the answer was ready.

Aisha:-Yeh dono mere besties hai...jo right mei hai woh toh meri jaan hai...he has a heart made of gold...(then she decided to do something mischevious)...and jo left mei hai woh bhi mera dost hai par bikul accha nahi hai...ladkiyon ke saath flirt karna...sabko tang karna uski hobby hai...usse dur hi rehna tum.

Sakshi looked at the photo and matched the description. Somewhere Sakshi also agreed to the description of the two boys given by Aisha. They were busy in talking and discussing that they didn't that the next class has started. Aisha looked at the watch after five minutes.

Aisha:-Oh No...next class start ho chuki hogi...agar aur late hogaye toh tumhare first day barbaad hai samjho...

They almost ran from there to reach the class and the Sir was already present there.

Aisha (in mind):-Jiska darr tha wahi hua...(looking at Sakshi)...yeh toh gayi aaj...Oh god jii help karna plsss...

As they entered the class after taking permission, Arjun saw both of them and he was unknowingly happy to see "her" in their class.

Sir:-Can you plss tell me Ms.Aisha...Why are you late??

Aisha:-Actually Sir...

Sir (cutting her in between and shouting at Sakshi):-Ohh so you are the reason behind it...you tell me...who are u???...and Where were u both??

Sakshi who was not used to that type of tone got scared. She was not in a situation to say anything.

Sakshi (stammering):-Sss...iii...rrr

Sir (loudly):-Speak clearly.

Now Sakshi was at the verge of crying and all of them were having a good time except the three besties.

Sir (angrily):-Silence class...

All were laughing inspite of the warning from their sir and now this was enough for Arjun.

Arjun (standing):-Guyss jab sir keh rahe hai chup hojao...toh chup hojayo...

But there was no effect so this time Arjun shouted," SILENCE" and this time there was pin drop silence. All of them looked at Arjun as what happened. Sameer forcefully made Arjun sit.

Sam (whispering):-Abe pagal ho gaya hai kya??...itni zor se kyu chilla raha hai???

Arjun:-Chillau na toh aur kya karu...woh usse bolne nahi de rahe yaar.

Sam:-Phir bhi...shaant reh mere bhai.

Aisha was also feeling bad for Sakshi so she came in between," Sir may I?'

Sir:-Hmm...go ahead.

Aisha:-Sir yeh new admission hai aur mai usko poora college ghuma rahi thi...isiliya late hogaya...Sir I assure you this will never happen again.

Sir:-Okk...sit...and you...(pointing at Sakshi)...come here with your file.

After that everything was sort out and class got over. Sameer and Arjun were waiting for Aisha to come outside. Aisha come with Sakshi.

Aisha (happily):-RJ...

Arjun:-Ash...

Sam:-Oye...mai bhi hu yahape...

Arjun:-Tujhe kaise bhul skte hai yaar...

Arjun and Aisha (together):-SAM

The trio started laughing but Sakshi was feeling weird.

Sakshi (in mind):-Agar Aisha iss ladke ko itna like nahi karti toh iske saath khush rehne ki acting kyu kar rahi hai?

She was all confused by what is happening. The description and this scene was totally different. Suddenly a boy came and said,"Sameer...Mahira...woh..."

Sam:-Kya hua Mahira ko??

Sameer went from there. He was tensed about Mahira.

Sakshi:-Yeh Mahira koun hai?

Aisha (slowly):-Unwanted girl.

Aisha also ran behind Sameer. Now Sakshi was left with Arjun. She looked at him and turned opposite and started walking.

Arjun (after thinking something):-Suniye...ji...woh jo kuch bhi hua...subah...woh unintentionally tha...maine woh jaan bujh ke nahi kiya...I am really sorry...

Sakshi (without looking at Arjun):-Its ok

Arjun:-Ji...aapka naam??

Sakshi was feeling awkward and Aisha's words ranged in her ears "Usse dur hi rehna tum" so she went away without saying anything.

Arjun (confused):-Miss No Name...

On the Other hand, Sameer and Aisha reached canteen. They were shocked to see Mahira sitting and eating "Pani puri". Aisha was really angry so she grabbed the collar of the boy.

Aisha:-Isse kya hua hai??...yeh toh yaha pani puri ka mazza le rahi hai.

Boy (scared):-Wahi toh...race lagi thi sabse zyada pani puri khane ki...woh harr gayi...aur ab keh rahi hai ki woh practice karegi...tabse khaye jaa rahi hai...

Aisha:-Pagalon ki kami nahi hai iss duniya mei.

Sam (sarcastically):-Yeh baat keh bhi koun rahi hai...Pagalon ka Maharani...

Arjun came and listened everything. He started laughing at the Sameer's dialogue and Aisha glared at him.

Sam (to Arjun):-Tu bhi kam nahi hai...Pagalon ka Sardaar...

Arjun:-Humse bada pagal toh tu hai jo yaha humare saath baat kar raha hai...jaake usko rok.

Sameer went from there and Aisha looked angrily at Arjun.

Arjun:-Kya??

Aisha:-Kyu bheja Sameer ko waha??...khane dete na ussko.

Arjun:-Woh toh kha leti...par dusro keliye nahi bachta na...isiliye bheja...udhar chal na

They went there. Sameer was sitting beside Mahira on a chair. Mahira was having tearful eyes due to the spice in "Pani puri". Atlast Sameer said," Please...ab aur mat khao Mahira."

Mahira:-Nahii...Sammy...mujhe jeetna hai.

Sameer:-Mahira...plss...mere liya...tumhe aise dekh ke mujhe rona aajayega...plss leave this.

Mahira (with a cute look):-Agar tum kehte ho...toh mai chodh deti hu.

Sameer made Mahira drink some water and they went from there.

Arjun:-Waah...Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi...Ek Gadha...Ek Ghodi...

Arjun was laughing and Aisha was fuming with anger. Aisha don't like Mahira's presence near Sameer because whenever Mahira is there with Sameer, Sameer don't pay attention to anybody else. That's what Aisha think and hopefully the reality is far away from her thinking.

...

At Sakshi's home,

Sakshi reached home as she didn't want to stay there anymore. She was not happy. Her family asked her about her first day and she said "It was good and she is so tired" and went in her room. She don't want to see her family tensed because of her. She got freshen up and took a photo of a beautiful girl from her cupboard.

Sakshi (to that photo):-Pata hai aaj mera din bilkul accha nahi gaya...aaj mujhe lag raha tha ki kuch bura hoga...par itna socha nahi tha...yahape log sirf apne baare mei sochte hai...koi dusro ke baare mei nahi sochta...aaj mai kuch logo se mili jo ek dusre se bohut alag hai phir bhi ek saath hai...woh ladka...uske baare mei sochti hu toh kuch ajeeb lagta hai...Aisha...woh ek acchi dost hai...usne mujhe support kiya...par darr lagta hai kahi woh bhi tumhari tarah mujhse dur hogayi toh...(tears started forming her eyes)...woh dusra ladka...simple and sweet...but hai toh uss ladke ka dost na...mai phirse akeli hogayi...MISSING U SO MUCH MERI CINDERELLA...

Now she can't stop her tears and she started crying. She hugged that photo tightly and slowly drifted into a peaceful sleep.

Precap:-Second day with some problems

Here I end the 2nd part...sorry for any grammatical mistake...hope u all liked it...plss do comment...

Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Waise aapko yeh gift kal milna chahiye tha but i can't help myself.I will update this story when possible...Hopefully in between or after the end of my first story.No sorry for that Appiii.

Special thankss to MY STARDOLL (ShadesOfNature) for giving such beautiful title to my story😃
Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice
sakshi simple sweet middle class girl
samjun rock stars to honge hi
superb
aisha hayee dabang to hogi hi
sam aisha cute
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
love prologue n CS
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon😊
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Awesome
Awesome
Awesome
Plz continue soon
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all of them in college interesting 😊
thanks for pm
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Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved It
Supperbbb CS
Wow! all of them are in college
Very Interesting
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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