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hey , guys was feeling sad from mrng & don't knw how this concept come in my mind. so just posting it. and plss tell me how is it ?? and it's my first os tin he forum too.
a new mrng in mumbai
in a beautiful house a guy was sitting on a bed. caressing a girls hair who seems to be in a deep slumber unaware of the world around her , it seems like she don't have any relation with this world or people here. she was lost in her own world.and the guy was looking at her with all the love he had for.
guy : gudmrng jaan , hmm i knw u wouldn't reply abhi tk naraz ho na mujhse pr mein bhi dekhta hu ki kb tk naraz rahogi tum mujhse wise dekho aaj tumhne bhi white pehna hai aur maine bhi waise tumhe pta hai white dress mein tum bilkul ek angel ki tarah dikhti ho yeh mein kya keh raha hu tum ek angel ki tarah dikhti nhi balki tum toh ek angel hi ho mere angel pr pta hai iss angel mein na abhi kuch missing hai tumhe pta hai kya voh hai tumhari beautiful dimple smile kya yrr ek smile hi toh mangi hai kya tum apne arjun k liye ek smile bhi nhi kr skti , yrr itni bhi kya naraz ho tum riya plss uth jao na mujhe danto , mujhse gussa ho i don't mind but plss wake up riya i swear tumhe koi bhi dukh ya dard sehne nhi dunga tumhari life khusiyo se bhar dunga tumhe iss duniya se chupakr apne paas humesha mehfoos rakhunga u know na riya i love you , i love you sooo much , plss ab toh uth jao meri sleeping beauty apne arjun ki itni si baat man lo . accha nhi manogi na tum agr tum ziddi hona toh mein double ziddi hu mein har roz tumse yhi baat khta rahunga jb tk tum meri baat man nhi leti , samjhi tum.( yes guys u guess it right it was our lovely couple ariya .& riya is in comma for past 6 months & it's arjun daily routine to talk to her like this & he also took special permission from doc to keep riya in his house with him & a nurse come to stay with riya )
arjun look around the room & found all his & riya's pic there & was smiling seeing riya smiling ( oh how badly he misses that dimple smile )
arjun pov
kitna kuch badal gya hai na pta hai riya tumse beintehaan mohabat krne laga hu pta hai khd se zyada chahta hu tumhein pta hai tumhari dhadkano k sahare hi toh jee rha hu wrna toh mein uss deen hi mar jata bas ek hi umeed ( hope ) k sahare jee rha hu ki tum wapis aaogi mere liye , humare liye wapis aaogi riya...(and he went into fb )
flashback
after xora case riya went to comma for 2 yrs, and when she come back after being fully fit & fine , she expected her crazy frnds to welcome her in a grand way & wanted to see them suprised & super happy after seeing her after so long but nothing like this happen when she reached etf , she found everything has changed her place was taken by the three new female officers of etf & everyone seemed to move on in their lifes . shree was with liza & as she don't like shree to talk much to riya so he started avoiding her & chotu was with her for few days but then he also got busy with his 11:30 wali & samjun were busy in their own world but nobody understood the pain she felt watching her only family so distant from her . so she took her transfer to cbi mumbai &still her absence didn't hurt much to anyone in etf or it hurted but they were unable to figure it out then.
after few months samjun & choree were blamed for revealing secrets of police department to terrorist gang & were said traitors they told everyone that they didn't did anything but no one believed them expect riya who secretly helped them in proving them selves innocent she found every clue & got to know that sik was behind all this & rosh is alive & with sik & both of them r behind all this & she wanted to tell all this to samjun & choree but got to know it too late as they fall in rosh's trap & were now captured by them, she quickly send all this clues to comm & asked for backup where as she went to rescue her love , her bhai & her frnds. when she reach there she found samjun & choree were tied to chairs & there were big tubs fill with petrol all around them, she silently started killing all the goons present there & also waiting for back up to reach
samjun : rosh , kyu kiya tumne aisa ???
rosh : aww my poor ex bff & ex hubby voh yeh ki yeh sab toh humara plan tha tum dono ne mere bhai ka encounter kiya aur mere pati sik k buisness ka itna nuksan kiya so humne tum dono se revenge liya tumhari dosti tod kr aur arjun tumhe zinda lash bna kr...
sik : hmm , aur waise bhi abna tum charo ka time khatam ho gya iss duniya mein toh ab toh tumhe mrna prega voh bhi iss traitor k daag k sath & both of them started laughing evily but as riya wass finished with goons she shot towards sik but by chance he moved side ways & the bullet miss him, he also started firing towards riya but after sometimes riya's bullet ended & there was only one bullet left in siks gun & guessing it he shot towards a oil tanker which was near samjun & choree so the four of them could die but riya came b/w the bullet & tanker & the bullet hit her near her heart & she fall down there & in the mean time the backup also reached there & arrested sik & rosh & freed choree & samjun too & as soon as they were freed they rush to riya arjun took her in his arms & they all rush towards the suv & sam took the driving seat & drove the car like a maniac towards the hospital.
in the car
riya : guys ...now ev...ery..thing will be as before...stay ha..ppy al..ways & my pr...es..ence will not eff..ect anyones life
samjun & choree : just shut up rii tu humein chod kr kahi nhi k=jayegi
riya just gave them a weak & small dimple smile of her & darkness come above her eyes
they all were crying badly & as soon as they reach hospital riya was taken to OT leaving behind shattered & broken samjun & choree
after sometime comm came there & ask forgiveness from them for not believing them & told them riya has given them all the proofs that has prove them innocent & they r also appointed back to their post with all their respect but by hearing this samjun & choree didn't felt any happiness but another guilt as they realized riya was a true frnd of them who loved them . after few hours doc come out of OT & inform them that riya slip to comma.
end of fb
arjun thoughts were disturb by the nurse who came to take care of riya while he has to go to etf .
in etf
everything was like before but nothing was like before too.
as usual they solve the cases & give justice to people but there was silence in the cf hall choree don't chat & gossip like before nor tease anyone they were too much broken to come out of the loss they just faced.
samjun has again become frnds but there was so much pain that they behave like ago in office & arjun don't taunt anyone all this guys just stay lost in their thoughts , lost in their happy memories & lost in the unbearable pain & guilt .
they always thought riya loved them unconditionaly when the whole world was against them she was with them , helped them , proved them innocent & also is in this condition because of them but wht did they do they ignored her when she come back in their life they didn't have enough time for her but now it looks she is angry on them for doing this to them & now she don't have time for her & she is ignoring them now there pleadings as she fall in deep slumber & cut of all her connection with the world. they lost one of the most important person in their life just because of their ignorance. after this when they again joint etf , the girls ask their forgiveness & they forgave them as they know if they don't their rii might get more angry on them.when she was with them they don't understand her value & when she is away they want her back in there life. but four of them knew one thing that she was a perfect sis , a ture frnd , a true lover who can do anything for her loved ones & no one can take her place in there life .
and they r living in this hope that may be one day there dimple doll will wake up from her sleep & will come back in there life to complete it . to bring happiness back in there life with her.
so , how was it ??? i know totaly rubbish as i myself don't knw wht i've typed but plss share ur honest review & tell me wht blunder i've created
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