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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Another Brilliantly Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It Sooo very much
Speechless I'm just speechless
You described every emotion so perfectly
Sasha's outbrust
Arjun's pain
Ayesha-Arjun convo
Loved Neel
Finally he is back to her his love his life
Hope he will be able to make her trust on hin again
Wonderfully Written
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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sairam175

@sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome part

Your writing skills is superb

No words

Feeling bad for arjun and sakshi

Arjun realized is mistake but it is too late

Neel is really nice

Arjun come back great

Con soon

Thanks for pm

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

why do have to make everyone cry so much 😭😭 wahan sakshi and arjun and yahan hum sab
but best part is neel he is a magician in their life in one stroke he made sam see his mistakes and also helped arjun
now its upto arjun to make himself strong enough for his love for his sakshi or he wants to be escapist just like how he has been till now
thanks for pm

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

oh and one more thing oflate u r making us all cry so now ur punishment is to write something which brings loads of laughter and happiness
write a new ss ,os on arakshi and that too a very happy wala no crying no sadness abb sys 😈

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

I don't know why everytime I read the update of this story I travel back to my Psychology classes regarding management issues and counselling.love how emotions become the Satan and create havoc in the sweet garden of Eden.. Neel acts a glimmer of light in otherwise obscure dark climate.hoping for something positive to take place in their rumbled world.

the lines and the thoughts are worth applauding.👏

thanks for the pm and keep writing.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

OMG

What an update dear

Awesome

I'm speechless

It was full of emotions

All the emotions were described beautifully

Let's see aage kya hota hai

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Yey me first 😃

Shit shit shit...
Why can't I describe what I felt in words?
U r just being so generous!

That was just...
Shit here it goes again

😳 😳 😳 😳

Di I am in love with your talent and you
You are soo amazing

I am so glad... thank u!

The way you define arakshi's lines

Arjun-Aisha's talk

Nell a brotherly figure who comes for sakshi but ended but mending a broken friendship a little

Well Mr Rawthe's conversation manadge to left arjun thinking what was he doing??

He was unknownly becoming the person he hates more than anything

I am so happy you loved every character and angle!

Finally he's back to his love... His life
He's trying to make her understand and trust him, she's beganing to built a new bond and trust on him...

Thank u so much that you got this stuff right!

Thanks for the pm

Please do write more soon
Eagerly waiting to read what's next

Thanks for ur comment dear!

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Awwssmmm update!!!!
Just loved it...
Hope everything willl be fine sooon...Neel's character is just too good!!!👏
Con.sooonnn!!

Thank you so much princess dear!!! Hope u love this part!

Originally posted by: Devangana
Thank God for giving Arjun-Sakshi friends like Sameer, Aisha and Neel. Even if is a little late for Arjun to realize what is right and what is wrong it is still not too late to try and make amends. Sakshi will take time after being through so much to trust him and let him know what she feels. She has been doing that since the beginning of the relationship and now it is his turn to do the same. Your writing makes it all the more worth it. Please update soon.

I so wait for your comment! A perfect-ish summary but then u've got a few places wrong... I truly hope that you like these stuffs! I am glad you love my story, mean a lot to me <3

Originally posted by: shurtiekta
awsm update
o god fllng sad fr both
plss make dm hPpy
thnx fr pm
update nxt soon..

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Another Brilliantly Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It Sooo very much
Speechless I'm just speechless
You described every emotion so perfectly
Sasha's outbrust
Arjun's pain
Ayesha-Arjun convo
Loved Neel
Finally he is back to her his love his life
Hope he will be able to make her trust on hin again
Wonderfully Written
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Aww thanks for this wonderful summary and comment! Means a lot for me! So looking forward to hearing your views on the last part!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome part
Your writing skills is superb
No words
Feeling bad for arjun and sakshi
Arjun realized is mistake but it is too late
Neel is really nice
Arjun come back great
Con soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much for your compliment! It means so much! Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
why do have to make everyone cry so much 😭😭 wahan sakshi and arjun and yahan hum sab
but best part is neel he is a magician in their life in one stroke he made sam see his mistakes and also helped arjun
now its upto arjun to make himself strong enough for his love for his sakshi or he wants to be escapist just like how he has been till now
thanks for pm

Well this is a part of of life! I am sure the other part makes you happier <3 Thank you for everything :)

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
oh and one more thing oflate u r making us all cry so now ur punishment is to write something which brings loads of laughter and happiness
write a new ss ,os on arakshi and that too a very happy wala no crying no sadness abb sys 😈

Oh... a SS is on its way 😉

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
I don't know why everytime I read the update of this story I travel back to my Psychology classes regarding management issues and counselling.love how emotions become the Satan and create havoc in the sweet garden of Eden.. Neel acts a glimmer of light in otherwise obscure dark climate.hoping for something positive to take place in their rumbled world.
the lines and the thoughts are worth applauding.👏
thanks for the pm and keep writing.

Oh dear I always wait for your comment - it so acts as a booster for me. Especially that you go into the deep bit while commenting. I am glad you loved it - do stay tuned for the last bit 😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
OMG
What an update dear
Awesome
I'm speechless
It was full of emotions
All the emotions were described beautifully
Let's see aage kya hota hai
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Thank you so much dear, I really look forward to your response on the next part.

@ Rasika : Dear i have always loved your comments! Hope you love this like always 😳

@ Eeshu : Your comments always means a lot, yeah for some reason I am getting into the mood for angst *laughs* Love u loads!