Arakshi :- Wo Huye Na Hmare

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just beacaue I am strong enough to handle
"PAIN"... It doesn't mean I deserve it...
Sakshi[/B]
What the hell.Hmesha sunata rehta h kuch kro to mushkill na kro to mushkil.ab mai ek bachi hi to hu.mistakes to human se hi hoti h..han to kya hua agr Maine arjun ki tea gira di. OK I know yesterday I spoiled my report with ice cream..one second I made only 2, no 3 OK (while thinking) ummm tea coffee and ice cream..& ya of course last Friday I did two funny thing..arjun kya fisla tha floor pe..akdu ki sari akad floor pe haaa ha ha.. 😉 😆 😆
Miss Sakshi aanand...suddenly I hear the sound of akdu...
Think of devil or devil is here..where is reports he says.
Wo mai to I mean wo wo kuch to i mean sabkuch mai tumhe btane wali thi.but abhi to tum aa gye ho to..u know...saaf saaf kaho kya kehna h mere pas itna time nahi h tumhari faltu ki batein sunne ka "arjun says"..

Suddenly my phone vibrate and showing private message..I was checking what is in that message..it was already very late 11:30pm..

The name flashing on my screen is...and then that message
Nooo..excuse me..am running like a mad person. Tears are continuesly running down from my eyes .. 😭 😭
A car is coming very fast towards me.and then I was on the road.. One word comes from my heart

"Papa"
Plsss don't gooo... 😭 😭
I still remember the feeling I felt when I first start talking to you,listening your great thoughts and of course your fake
anger...don't go..plsss..




Am new in this forum and of course in writing also..so errors to bhar bhar k honge..but pls if u like ittu sa bhi 😭
Tell me plsss..sorry for spellings and grammar.. Because my English is very poor like kapil... 😭 tell me I continue or not...have a good and blessed day 😊 😊 take care..

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Part 2- 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first🥳🥳🥳🥳
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awesome start
interesting update
loved it
cont soon😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was nice but bit jumbled up next time try to be more clear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DO continue 😊
thora unclear hai try to write little more clearly 😊
dont discontinue it.write it because u love arakshi and by writing it u will show ur love.
start main responce b kam hoga but do continue...
thora waqt guzre ga to u will feel good and response b mile ga but have patience😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

it was nice but bit jumbled up next time try to be more clear😊


Thanku...I will try my best next time..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khanmIsha28

DO continue 😊

thora unclear hai try to write little more clearly😊
dont discontinue it.write it because u love arakshi and by writing it u will show ur love.
start main responce b kam hoga but do continue...
thora waqt guzre ga to u will feel good and response b mile ga but have patience😊


Ya next time i will try to be more clear..thanku for ur sweet
Comment..it means a lot.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

Me first


awesome start
interesting update
loved it
cont soon😊




Thanku for liking d story..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pariofmystery


Ya next time i will try to be more clear..thanku for ur sweet
Comment..it means a lot.. 😳

main ne bhi jb apni story start ki thi 4 days main bhi ek bhi comment or like nhi tha but main ne thora time guzarne diya then kafi response mila... main ne jitna socha the us se bhi zyada ...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khanmisha28


main ne bhi jb apni story start ki thi 4 days main bhi ek bhi comment or like nhi tha but main ne thora time guzarne diya then kafi response mila... main ne jitna socha the us se bhi zyada ...😊




U r right.. Have patience..but Maine aapki ek bhi story nahi read ki h..kya aap muje apni story ka name bta skti ho..I also want to read ur story...if u like. 😛 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter-2

"ETF office"

Arjun:-
aisa kya ho gya ki wo aise bina kuch kahe chali gai...Or wo message?? Kuch to h...Arjun pic his phone and dialed Shree number..

Shree:-
Arre deva, khana bhi nai khane deta ye phone to...
Ab kon h.. Arjun name flashing on screen...arjun sir... Hello sir...

Arjun:-
Shree check kro ki Sakshi ko abhi message or call Kisne kiya tha...

Shree :-
ok sir...(while thinking) ye sir ko kya ho gya h...or ab Sakshi ne kya kr diya h...

On the other side driver applied emergency breaks & the Car stops only 2 inch away from Sakshi...driver came to Sakshi and ask her ,if she is ok or not...

Sakshi:-
am ok..don't worry...aap jayiye...
( Driver waha se chala jata h)...muje abhi waha Jana hoga...auto...
Dada XYZ address par chaloge...thik h chaliye...
(While thinking) papa mai aapko kuch nahi hone Dungi...mai aa rhi hu na, mai sb thik kr dungi..you Don't worry...

Shree:-
he dialed arjun number..hello sir, Sakshi k phone par
Abhi to koi call nhi aai h..9:30 pm pe Aisha ne ki thi...But msg aaya h kisi private number se h...toh trace Nahi ho skta..highly secured h...

Arjun:- ok shree..check krte rehna...

Sakshi is standing in front of a beautiful house named " Ram Nivas"...she is scared to face the reality...After checking and submitting her pass, she enter inside the house...there is a beautiful garden and a pool near the main gate...there is fragrance of different flowers...but today her heart and mind was far from all that things...

Sakshi entered in a big room...where a person is laying having an oxygen mask and many saringe attach to the different nerves...many machines attach with his body...
Sakshi take a stool and set very near...Sakshi take his hand in her right hand...start taking with him..

Sakshi:- do you know papa, girls first love is always her Father...and I love you so much...as time goes on I love u more..your happy smile,your loving face & No one will ever take your place... I need you papa More than anything... And u can't break your Promise... Pls get up na...tear roll down from her Cheeks...

After 1 hour... A doctor entered in room...

Sakshi:- ye thik to ho jayege na doctor...

Doctor:-
mai aapko koi joothi tasali nahi de skta...sorry There is no chance of his surviving... Aapko himmat Rakhni hogi...

Two other person entered in room...
DIG Raj sighaniya... And his wife naina Raj sighaniya...

Sakshi:-
Uncle aunty aap yha...aap yha kyu aaye...papa thik h ..don't worry..is doctor ko kuch nhi pta h...
Mrs.Raj hugged Sakshi...Sakshi is crying...


Then suddenly all machines making loud noise...beep beep sound coming from machines...
Mr. Aanand takes high breathing...
Suddenly all stops...Mr. Aanand took his last breath...now There is only silence...

Sakshi's whole world shattered... Her heart and soul breaks into thousands pieces...

Outside there is dark cloud all over the sky...with high lightning, heavy rain starts...

Sakshi is now sitting on floor...and crying in loud voice...
Seems like all things are crying with her...the sky, the moon, stars and all natural things...all are feeling same...

' mai ta jiya na mra, haye wai das mai ki kra..
Dil Jude bina hi toot gye,hak mile bina hi chut gye,
Ki likhe si lekh kismat ne,

Baar baar rone akhiya, tenu jo na wekh sakiya...
Bhule aaye aaj kudrat ne...kta wai kiwe din,
Meri so tere bin, mai ta jiva na mra...
Man se Jo chutte koi sapna,
Jag suna suna laage-2 Koi rhe na jab apna...



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Pls btana kaisa lga...all type of comments r welcome... All advice r welcome... So feel free to say...take care...
Edited by pariofmystery - 10 years ago

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