FF||24 hours (Ariya)||Part 1 Updated-Pg 13 (30/11) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Hey I'm so glad tat again u thought to continue it
Luv u so much for dis
Eagerly waiting to read
So jaldi update karona
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jeharshu

Hey I'm so glad tat again u thought to continue it

Luv u so much for dis
Eagerly waiting to read
So jaldi update karona

Yes, I m going to continue it😉
@ bold: Aww..that's so sweet 🤗
Will update soon
Maybe during the upcoming week,
I will be updating by Wednesday

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hello all,
So as promised, I am going to be updating this FF. I want to thank all who have liked and commented. Thanks for your overwhelming support and patience.

Thanks to all those who had liked the prologue:


I love you guys❤️




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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will PM only those who leave at least a like on the parts. I do understand that some of you may be held up at times, and you don't have time to comment, but at least leave a like to let me know that you have read the part, I'm cool with it.

I highly encourage those who can, to comment because I highly value your comments and they motivate me to go further on. PMing is a tiring thing, and to start with, I will be PMing all those who hit a like on this post.

If you see see that I forgot to PM some of you, then please scrap me. My PM box is almost full, and if you also need to communicate, you can scrap me.

That's all, I have to say regarding PMs.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update on next page 😉
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Disclaimer- All events taking place in this story is purely fictitious. Company names and character names are haphazardly chosen and bear no resemblance to any person in reality. Any coincidence is purely accidental.


Any part of this FF is not to be reproduced or plagiarized or posted on other social sites apart from India Forums.

Part 1:

-All of the events taking place in this part are between 00:00 to 01:00 on Friday the 13th-

"This is going to be a memorable day for all of us," Shree mumbled as he stretched his arms above his head and let out a yawn. The ETF team had landed in Dubai a few hours ago and they were taken to 'The Atlantis' where a suite was booked for them by the fashion company, 'Day and Night'. They would be mostly carrying out their discussions regarding the case over there.

Ria smacked Shree and signaled him to keep quiet as Rathod looked at Shree with an 'Oh really' look. Arjun was already scrutinizing the suite in which they all were currently in. It was a lavish suite with the finest material and furniture placed. In fact, the hotel was itself majestic and it could have been added in the list of the wonders of the world.

Shree had placed his laptop and other electronic devices on the opulent coffee table in the room and was loading the list of the victims and suspects of this case. Ria was sitting next to Shree and was noting down the names of the models that were supposed to walk the ramp tonight.

Chotu was off to the site where the fashion event would take place, which is in the hall of the hotel and he had gone to meet the security guards which would be there for the fashion show.

Back in the suite, Rathod remarked that Arjun was busy examining the room and he said," What happened Rawte? Planning to come here on your honeymoon?" Shree tried to control his laughter while Ria smiled but she felt a little prick, ho was she supposed to imagine the man whom she loved going on honeymoon, apart if that lucky person was her, but that was zero possibility that it would happen. Arjun glared at Rathod," I don't owe you any explanation regarding my work, and it is high time that you stay out of my personal life." Arjun said bitterly as Rathod had an angry look.

Ouch. Shree and Ria knew that there would be a feud between the 2 of them and they decided to intervene.

"Rathod sir, the 'Day and night' models' list has been obtained. " Shree said and Rathod diverted his attention from Arjun. Rathod looked at the list visible on the ipad screen," So there are 12 models in all and with the showstopper included we, have 13,"

Shree nodded and Arjun also took a glance at the list. Arjun queried," That's all right Shree, but how are we supposed to know which model will get kidnapped and we still have a long list of suspects, "

Rathod for once agreed with Arjun," We still have long to go and time is running out, we have to meet Mr Raj, the owner of the fashion company,"

Rathod then started to distribute the tasks," Shree and Ria, try to go and converse with the models, examine their attitude and if there is anything fishy, then report it to me, Arjun and I will go to talk to Mr Raj. "

Shree suddenly said," But Sir, look at the time..."

Rathod interrupted him," Nobody would be asleep, they must be rehearsing but in case, they are not available, then return to their suite and try to find more details, and I'm sure that Mr Raj will be awake. . Let's get moving team!"

"Yes Sir," Shree and Ria said in unison and they set to work. Arjun stuffed his gun at the back of his jeans and he and Rathod walked along the corridor and got in the elevator. Arjun pressed a number on the number board and the doors of the elevator closed.

Rathod and Arjun stepped out of the elevator and walked to Mr Raj's suite. The knocked on his door and waited for a response.

At the same time, Riya and Shree had no luck in talking to the models so they had to get back to the suite and they did some research on the backgrounds of the models and Mr Raj and the fashion company as well.

Chotu was done with speaking with the security guards and he was returning to the suite with some information.

And, a person's back was also shown and he is looking at the photographs of the models of the Day and Night' company and he crosses one model's face with a red marker.

The screen splits into 4 showing the four different events and the time is 01:00, which means that only 23 hours are left now.


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The next part will be updated only if there is a high response 🤓

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Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Phew! I finally updated.😆

The part is short but there are not many things that can happen within 1 hour, but I will try to include more events in the upcoming parts.

Do let me know how the part was, I highly recommend you to comment, because comments motivate me and I might update faster with the more comments you give and if you are unable to comment, then at least hit the like button. 😊

I love you guys❤️


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Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
wow...
awesome start...
loved it...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update though after a long time.
Pls do continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

Thanks a lot dear
Will continue soon

Take care...😊

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