PRAIKRAMA - THE CIRCLE OF LIFE [COMPLETE] - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago

First I am extremely sorry for being sooo late...but you know na why..

Now about the updates...read all the four pending parts...they are awesome ones..😳

Kritika karan convo was the highlight in the whole update..πŸ˜ƒ

Kritika is still skeptical about Aisha and sameer's relation...its so real and spontaneous..😊

Finally Sameer comes to know about aisha...

The story was heart breaking...specially coz the one breaking her trust was her cousin and she couldn't even fight for her own self...she lost her child too..thats really sad..

Sameer understood her pain..coz he has also lost roshni from his life...but didn't it get too fast??

Sameer and Aisha hardly spoke or gelled with each other..except realizing their disheartened faces...

That isn't enough na...I wanted a bit more glimpse into their relation here..before they confess their heartaches...some helping or caring scenes may be..

How and when did roshni die? That part is still under veil will look forwards to reading it..

Next comes the outing spree with the kiddos...eagerly waiting for that now..

Continue soon...thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

First I am extremely sorry for being sooo late...but you know na why..

Now about the updates...read all the four pending parts...they are awesome ones..😳

Kritika karan convo was the highlight in the whole update..πŸ˜ƒ

Kritika is still skeptical about Aisha and sameer's relation...its so real and spontaneous..😊

Finally Sameer comes to know about aisha...

The story was heart breaking...specially coz the one breaking her trust was her cousin and she couldn't even fight for her own self...she lost her child too..thats really sad..

Sameer understood her pain..coz he has also lost roshni from his life...but didn't it get too fast??

Sameer and Aisha hardly spoke or gelled with each other..except realizing their disheartened faces...

That isn't enough na...I wanted a bit more glimpse into their relation here..before they confess their heartaches...some helping or caring scenes may be..

How and when did roshni die? That part is still under veil will look forwards to reading it..

Next comes the outing spree with the kiddos...eagerly waiting for that now..

Continue soon...thanks for pm

Thanks Dear rimi
glad u liked it
well I will surely add your suggestion of showing concern more if it does not look repetative & stay formal 😊
y it was heart touching as apno se insaan kaise lade?
Roshni part will come soon too
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's aawesome update dear
sameer aisha ke ghar gaye the
aisha ki halaat dekhne keliye
nd aisha sameer ke wallet me in roshini ki pic Dekhi this
Its nice improvement between them dear
nd they become to feel comfortable with each other
love karan he was supporting aisha
nd also love damini
nd the outing with kids was so nice
sorry for late comment dear
stuck with my exams
nd this was my first long comment
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon nd thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It's aawesome update dear
sameer aisha ke ghar gaye the
aisha ki halaat dekhne keliye
nd aisha sameer ke wallet me in roshini ki pic Dekhi this
Its nice improvement between them dear
nd they become to feel comfortable with each other
love karan he was supporting aisha
nd also love damini
nd the outing with kids was so nice
sorry for late comment dear
stuck with my exams
nd this was my first long comment
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon nd thanks for pm dear

Thanks harshita dear
glad u liked it
I knoe dear koi baat nahin
love u for bada waala comment
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


waiting!!!
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Bas wait for 20 minutes 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
GUYS updated PART 9 of PARIKRAMA on my blog 😊
Hope u all will enjoy it 😳
here is the Link

http://ff10parikrama.blogspot.in/p/praikrama-circle-of-life-part-9.html


Well guys I have already send the invites to those who have given me their Email Ids & Pmed them as well 😳 please accept the invites from your mail & you can start reading as still 8- 9 people are left & attention next Pm rule simple you need to comment on the previous part 😊
HAPPY READING TO ALL OF YOU
Rgards GOLDIE ❀️
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me first...πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³
Awesome update...

Aisha made pasta for Damini...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Kritika & Shyambhavi are like 'bichdi-hui-behene'...dono ki dono bewakoof hai...😑😑😑
How can Shyambhavi say about Aisha...😑😑😑
Raesha forgot their pains with kids...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
And kids enjoyed a lot with their kaka & bua...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sameer decided to go for outing in every 15 days...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aisha got hurt remembering her own child...
Kritika & Shyambhavi hurted Aisha & Sameer...😑😑😑

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

me first...πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

Awesome update...

Aisha made pasta for Damini...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Kritika & Shyambhavi are like 'bichdi-hui-behene'...dono ki dono bewakoof hai...😑😑😑
How can Shyambhavi say about Aisha...😑😑😑
Raesha forgot their pains with kids...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
And kids enjoyed a lot with their kaka & bua...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sameer decided to go for outing in every 15 days...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aisha got hurt remembering her own child...
Kritika & Shyambhavi hurted Aisha & Sameer...😑😑😑

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks Dear sneha
glad u liked it
yes great minds think alike 🀣
haan wo apne maa hone ka haqq jata rahi hai
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Aisha made pasta for DaminiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Shyambhavi and Kritika😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
kabhi nahi sudhar sakti
Raesha forgot their pains with kids
Shyambhavi and Kritika hurt Sameer and Aisha😑
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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