Always and Forever...

Okay.. 1st a small lecture😆 This is an advance Birthday gift for my dear gabbar... aka Snehajain... i know..too early...but i dont trust my INTERNET connection at all🤢 Gabbar... mai itni nirdayi nehi hu...isliye apna promise nibha rahi hu..humari DOSTI ke khaatir... if I don't get a return gift... mujhse phir kabhi baat mar karna😡

res





aisha ko bolo court marraige kar le..😉

unres...

sorry for getting late...but here i am finally...😊

well...as i have already told you about the first two parts...its a nice OS...very well written...

Frankly i am not too fond of college romance or teenage love stories...but since this OS was written in a different manner i loved reading it...😳

the story wasnt new but i am read your other works...this could be one of the best in the list...you had put your heart while sketching the characters...and every line showed your comfort with them..👏👏

it somewhere reminded me of Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam before the interval...i mean if Ash had not got married to someone else and her family had supported her love...it would have turned out something like this...

the journey from enmity to mad lovers was well potrayed and sequential...it didnt go off the board...

even when you planned to use Arjun to entangle the lovers...👍🏼
that was a nice move...👏

Brilliant work done...specially the part of tom boy Aisha...shy quiet Sam...😆

thanks for the OS...👏

Unresed on Pg:- 1...😳😳😳

Awesome update
loved it
Aisha was superb
mind blowing
Sam-aisha fight were just awesome
Their friendship was described beautifully
really loved their bonding
Sam sach main dumb head hai
thik se propose bhi nahi kar sakta
Jealousy game was awesome
great OS
just loved it
Happy Birthday Sneha

Originally posted by: laila1994

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">unres...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">It was a really cute OS.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Ayesha's memories & the description of event were very well written.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">From mere strangers to Jani dushman then friend & finally engaged...it was lovelyjourney.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Ayesha's character was the best thing. The only word that comes in my mind to describe her character is "Jangli billi"</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Ayesha's pranks care-free nature. Jhalli pana all was the cherry on the top.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Poor sameer. he was the poorest soul in this whole OS. He suffered a lot.🤣</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Arjun-Ayesha's plan was smart. Sameer was feelingjealous & confessed his feelings 'again'😃</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Overall it was a fab OS. With some really cute & entertaining FBs.👏</font>

thank u so much laila... m so glad that u liked it... :-) :-) mmmwwaahh

arre baapre...kitna scary story...upps aisha hain...hihi..
your couple &their antics were really cute ...but aisha's bugs bunny wala attitude was really entertaining..and your bechara rathod...harr baar aisha se pit jaata hain..
their jouney was really well written...and mazedaar too...
annd sam's rukha sukha proposal...it was the best pRt of this story.
loved this cute piece of writing.
thanks for pm...and extremety sorry for being so late.
keep writing.