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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay... 1stly people... plz dont kill me.. i will be very honest... i am deleting the previous one... reason.. i have comletely lost track of d story... Not disappointing u all , i decided to start afresh... so please don't be sad...
so here i post d 1st part... after this , the updates may be shifted to the blog... so when you people give baaddee wale comments😆 plz mention your email id too.. so that i can add you all... Mind You.. only the good children will get the access to the blog😃😃😃 I am not that big fool.. i know people give dil kholke reviews on d 1st part... then starts their laziness😡😡😡 Aisa hua,.. toh i too will become lazy and STOP updating.. phir jisey jahan morcha nikalna hai nikalo...😡😡😡
So here i go...😳

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A usual morning at the office... The usual Monday gossips... the usual chatting...the usual rantings about "When will we get a holiday?" ...

Shree- Listen... aj Monday hai...

Chhotu- oh thanks shree... mujhe to pata hi nehi tha...

Shree- abbey nehi,... sir ne Saturday ko bola tha na... ke humari team me koi naya member ayega... yaad hai??

Chhotu- arey han... tujhe pata hai kaun hai?

Shree- as if mai Chief ka PA hu.. mujhe kaise pata hoga??

Chhotu-(thinking something)- toh PA se hi puchte hai na...

Shree and chhotu gave a wicked smile and nudged a visibly busy Aisha who was too engrossed in her laptop and files ...

Shree- sun na...

Aisha- hmm..(still typing)..

Chhotu- tujhe pata hai kya??

Aisha(confused)- kis bare me??

Shree- ke humari team me kaun naya member anewala hai aj??

Aisha- no...(again busy noting something in the files)

Shree- yaar isko PA kisne banaya?? Isko koi khabar nehi hoti...

Chhotu-wohi to...

Aisha- kiska PA??

Shree-(pointing to their chief) unka..

Aisha(glares)- shree.. mai koi PA nehi hu.. phir se shuru kardia tumne??Chup chap kam karo na.. khud bhi daant sunoge...mujhe bhi sunwaoge...

Shree(pouts)- okay...

Their chit chat was broken by an Angry Arjun entering the CR ... muttering something to himself...

Rathod looked up at a furious arjun and sighed... Nothing NEW...

Shree raised his brows at chhotu asking what might have happened...

"Kya hua rawte?? Subah subah kiski jaan lekar aa rahe ho?", Rathod asked ...

"ye ladkiyan kab dekh ke chalna sikhengi??? Lagta to hai aakhon ki jagah button...aur pairon ki jagah roller skates lage hue hai!!",Arjun muttered to himself... not intending to reply to his chief..

Rathod would have asked to elaborate when his phone rang... he said "okay...let her come" with a bright smile and disconnected...

"HER?? Kaun aa rahi hai be?? Inki GF hai kya??",Shree asked chhotu almost whispering..

"Ho bhi sakti hai.. dekh na ..kitne khush lag rahe hai..",Chhotu nodded approving his idea..

"OMG.. Aisha.. teri PA ki jagah koi aur lene wali hai..",shree chuckled and immediately screamed an AAAhhh... which made all heads turn towards him..

"Kya hua shree??",Arjun asked irritated..

"Machch...aar.. hai...si..r",Shree mumbled looking down at his thigh in which Aisha was poking her pen...

"Shree.. stop behaving like an idiot!",Rathod glared..

"Good morning everyone!!",a chirpy voice broke their conversation and they turned to find a young girl with a bright smile..

"Good morning Ria... come..welcome to ETF!!",Rathod got up to greet her..but what followed next was totally something least expected...

The girl... aka ria ... put down her files on the table and nearly pounced on Rathod and hugged him tightly...

Rathod was about to say something when the girl began.." U dumbhead... u r so mean... aap mujhe pick karne kyu nehi aaye? Aur late mai bas apke wajah se hui... kitna traffic hai yha... upar se is office ke kisi gadhe ne mera aur time waste kardia... ek to khud dekh ke nehi chalta... upar se mujhe sunane laga... maine bhi suna dia ache se... sab aapki galti hai.. mai...mai Badi maa ko bol dungi... aur phir kya hoga ye aap jante ho...aur is baar mai bachaungi bhi nehi!!"

Aisha,shree and chhotu seemed confused while arjun was nearly on the verge of blasting!

"Wait!!.. Ria... I am only your BOSS here! So ye dhamkis nehi.. aur... inke samne to bilkul bhi nehi...now meet my team... rishtedaari hum baad me nibha lenge... This is Shree..our tech expert... Chhotu..commando...Ye Aisha.. humare team ki ammunition expert... aur ye Arjun...second in command...Team...this is Ria Mukherjee... humari team ki research specialist... and..umm.. my cousin too...but yaha no cousingiri ria... tum sirf kaam karogi...and keep your pranks away..."

Ria flashed a smile at everyone starting from shree to Aisha.. but her heartbeat nearly stopped when she saw Arjun... she forced a smiling apologetic face...which Arjun returned with a hard glare...

Rathod asked Shree to brief Ria about her work and show her the office...which he did happily...

Ria- ye Arjun sir... jane pehchane lagte hai...

Shree- han han.. sara din to superstar bane rehte hain na.. isliye..

Ria- nehi.. TV nehi..paper bhi nehi... maine inko kahi aur bhi dekha hai...yaad nehi aa rha..

Shree- abhi abhi to ayi hai.. kyu us samjhe ya samjhau ko leke dimag kharab kar rhi h... rehne de na...

Ria(pouts)- okay...

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I know... a very small part... but i wrote only this much just to decide who r gonna get access to the blog...n who wont😳 Nothing much to comment i know... but sometimes 2 lines are enough if they are constructive and something other than "Awesome update..love it...cont soon..thanks 4 d pm"😡 The most annoying lines😡

So what i mean is i don't mind a short comment on a short update unless it is something like the one i mentioned above...😳

Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
ria so sweet yet childish
i am confused
pls update next part
i hope its sam ariya ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm i saw the PM and was like "This should be interesting" 😆
SamIya are cousins, and Riya's heart beat already stopping seeing Jun? Very interesting ☺️ Sam the ever serious Chief, Ri the bubbly, Choree the phunny people 🤣 and they teasing Aisha so sweet. Agli baar se they will start teasing Rii too. . . miss those time in show and wait, why she felt she had seen Jun somewhere? Kuch to choot raha hain. . .

Constructive criticism? Hopefully this time readers wont have the complain what they have with last one 😆

PS sounding like a broken record still asking, is this going to be Ariya FF where they are central focus and they have proper story and NOT side tracked where in every update there are only 4 lines for them as if doing a favor by adding them😵 if it is Ariya FF then do send me PM, i am interested.

Riya

PPS all the best for this FF and hopefully you will finish it, without losing track 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG...This FF is back..yayy😃❤️
I reallyy liked this story bcoz its Ariya..I hope this tym also it will be Ariya only..But plzzz Ariya k zyada scenes likhna plzz plzz plz...
As abt update..Its awexome n superb usuallyy..
M very happy to read this story again...Plzz dnt lose track of this plz..You are a brilliant writer..
Riya's cuteness n naughtiness are soo adorable..Kesy sb k samny ssuna dia Rathore ko..
N Oh..Poor Arjun..wanted to blast..hahaha..
Is it ok if i send my email id in pm...??
plzz do check the pm ok..
Update soon n thnx fr pm..
Edited by Pisces_Gurl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Hmm i saw the PM and was like "This should be interesting" 😆

SamIya are cousins, and Riya's heart beat already stopping seeing Jun? Very interesting ☺️ Sam the ever serious Chief, Ri the bubbly, Choree the phunny people 🤣 and they teasing Aisha so sweet. Agli baar se they will start teasing Rii too. . . miss those time in show and wait, why she felt she had seen Jun somewhere? Kuch to choot raha hain. . .

Constructive criticism? Hopefully this time readers wont have the complain what they have with last one 😆

PS sounding like a broken record still asking, is this going to be Ariya FF where they are central focus and they have proper story and NOT side tracked where in every update there are only 4 lines for them as if doing a favor by adding them😵 if it is Ariya FF then do send me PM, i am interested.

Riya

PPS all the best for this FF and hopefully you will finish it, without losing track 😆


thanks... i will honestly take care not to get carried away😳 like i got the last time😭😭 so sowwwyyy😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

OMG...This FF is back..yayy😃❤️

I reallyy liked this story bcoz its Ariya..I hope this tym also it will be Ariya only..But plzzz Ariya k zyada scenes likhna plzz plzz plz...
As abt update..Its awexome n superb usuallyy..
M very happy to read this story again...Plzz dnt lose track of this plz..You are a brilliant writer..
Riya's cuteness n naughtiness are soo adorable..Kesy sb k samny ssuna dia Rathore ko..
N Oh..Poor Arjun..wanted to blast..hahaha..
Is it ok if i send my email id in pm...??
plzz do check the pm ok..
Update soon n thnx fr pm..



i will really try my best so sowwy 4 d last tym🤢🤢🤢
thanks😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...
First congratulations for new thread of this story...
And i hope this time you will not loose this track...
And update was awesome...
Just loved it..
So riya is sam cousin...
Loved samiya moments..
And also choree and ayesha...
Loved the way they were teasing her...
Do continue soon..
Snd thanks for the pm...
My id is shweta_1992@yahoo.com
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wellcome back dear with this FF
I liked it
if u put it blog then plz pm me
brilliant update
just love it
waiting 4 next
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
awesum start.
ariya ki pehli mulakat takrr k sath.
hmm... interesting vry intersting.
sam ki pa aisha nikali to etf office me tla jaega.
are jb team ki kabil officer aur chief me pyar mohabat hoga to case kaun solve karega.
ab aap sochoge mr. damn it k alawa mr. sys he to aap bhuul rahe he riya arjun ki zinddgi me a gyi he.
so masti zyda kaam kam .
so iin shoort etf ka kaam tamam.
cont soon. nd here is my email id-
nanadinioberoi62@gmail.com

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