Ariya OS: You fill up my senses *complete*

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''Arjun,kahaan le jarahe hai aap mujhe? Yeh aakhon se hataiye please...'' Riya said.

''Uh uh,Riya... Yeh toh tab hi khulega jab main kholne ko kahunga...'' Arjun says with a smirk,carefully leading Riya to the terrace.

Arjun and Riya both reach the terrace.Her back is facing Arjun. Today,Arjun was going to propose her and is going to ask her hand for their marriage... A small cute smile crept up on Arjun's lips when he thinks about all the preparations he did for today,which they will remmeber for ever.

''Yahin khari raho,Riya.. Hilna matt,ok..'' Arjun says.

''Thik hai... Jaldi aana,Arjun...'' Riya replies and stands there with the blindfolds on.

After some time,she hears some soft guitar tune coming from the right side and a melodious voice singing a beautiful song. She instantly recognized it as Arjun's. She never thought that he will sing a song for her.

''You fill up my senses,
Like a night in the forest,
Like the mountains in spring time,
Like a walk in the rain,
Like a storm in the desert,
Like a sleepy blue ocean,
You fill up my senses,
Come fill me again.''

As she opens the blinfold,she swa that Arjun was sitting on a chair and singing along,playing his guitar.She was amazed seeing the surroundings around her,which made her feel vey special,just like a princess.She had never imagined that her Arjun could sing so beautifully... As he sang along,he noticed Riya getting emotional. He kept the guitar on the table and went to her. Both of them hugged each other tightly,with warmth,care,love and affection,as the grip tightened. He then broke the hug and kept his one hand on her waist and another on his right hand and started doing waltz.

''Come,let me love you,
Let me give my life to you,
Let me drown in your laughter,
Let me die in your arms,
Let me lay me down beside you,
Let me always be with you,
Come,let me love you,
Come,love me again...''

As the music goes,they dance like a couple,who were madly in love with each other. Riya smiled and blushed at Arjun's suprises. She was feeling on the top of the world. She felt that she has finally achieved Arjun and his love,in true means. She sent a quick,silent prayer to her Krishna Bhagwan to keep them together always and fill their lives with lots of happiness.

Riya rested her head on his shoulder and made her grip around him tighter.Arjun also tightened his grip and now,they were feeling each others' heartbeats.

As they break the hug,Arjun slightly moves away and bring a bouquet of red roses and gifts her. Riya had a big smile on her face seeing those flowers.. He knew so much about her likes and dislikes. She was really lucky to have Arjun in her Life.

Arjun then takes out a box and kneels down infront of Riya and opens the box... It had a beautiful diamond ring. She was really amazed by seeing his true love for her.

''To the world's beautiful and sweet lady from her young and handsome man... Will you be mine forever and do the honours of spending the whole life with me? I promise,i will always keep loving you and promise you a very beautiful and happy life ahead..'' Arjun asked.

Riya was amazed at such a proposal from him. She didnt expect it like this way. Tears threatened to fall from her eyes.. She bent down and kissed Arjun's forehead and replied, ''Yes,I will.. I am always yours and will always remain yours,forever. Hum dono milke humare life mein sari khushiyaan bharenge and jab bhi koi problems ho,hum dono milke uska saamna karenge... I will always be with you,till eternity.. I love you,Arjun... I really do...''

Arjun was the happiest man,now... He took out the ring and slid in into Riya's ringfinger of her left hand.. Riya looked at the diamond solitaire which now adorned her hand. Simple beauty it was! She kissed it lightly and placed it over his heart and said, ''Ab yeh jaan tumhari hogayi... Aaj aapne mujhe pura kardia... Aaj se main aapki hogayi,Arjun..''

''I love you,Riya...''

''I love you too,Arjun..''

With that,she placed her lips on his lips and kissed each other,pouring out all the love,affection and care.

Thus,they lived happily ever after...

*The End*
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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS posted.. Do like it and post ur comments... Thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow beautiful os
Loved it
Very beautifully written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS Doll! Loved ArIya! And Arjun's way of Proposing And the beautiful arrangements.. Love Juno!! ❤️❤️ Love the song as well..❤️ Beautiful!
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very beautiful os dear
lovely
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arrrgg 😡 u dint pm me 😭
actually u never pm me any of yr works so for punishment as no pm no comment from me
samjhe yah samjhao 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what a beautiful os...
Truly amazing
loved it
very well written


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fairyshah

arrrgg 😡 u dint pm me 😭
actually u never pm me any of yr works so for punishment as no pm no comment from me
samjhe yah samjhao 😈


aisa nahi hai,Didu... main pc pe bohut kam baitti hu to log in to IF... mobile se pm bhejnahi sakti.. sorry... agli baar zarur bhejungi... ab toh comment kardo,please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani.m

what a beautiful os...
Truly amazing

loved it
very well written



thank you so much,Tani..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm OS
Loved it
Beautifully written


thank you so much,Niki... 😊

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