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Originally posted by: virmanfan013
awesome dear
loved it
character choice is perfect
u portrayed each n every emotion brilliantly
waiting for next part
cont soon
thAnks for the pm
PART 14 A
Sameer tried to make arjun understand but he was hell bound to leave along with his team. Sameer knew he is stubborn enough & will not listen to anyone so he had to agree & took him along too. They all started the drive to sukhgao & thanks to sameers driving skills that they reached there in next 45 minutes. They all started to locate Dr Neelkant in the village but they couldnot not trace them. After searching for a while some one told them about Janki nath purohit Neelkants uncle who lives in this village & Neelkanth & katayani came to meet him today morning. They reached the house a old man of 70 years open the door & sameer asked him about Dr neelkant he told that he is out with his wife some people have took them about 20 minutes back in their van for some urgent work. Sameer asked the number & jankinath redily gave him now they started to trace the van. Shree started to trace the number as ETF was right on time they got hold of the van soon that had kidnapped Dr Neelkant & his wife. After tracing the van they started looking for Dr Neelkanth & after few minutes they saw a cottage & voices coming out from there. They attacked the cottage & Found that Dr Neelkanth & his wife were tied there. They rescued them & started to find out who was behind this. Soon they were stopped by the kidnappers but ETF was powerful enough to answer them back & soon all kidnappers were under their custody & in few blows they blurt out that they were from terrorist group & as Dr Neelkanth was a famous nuclear scientist the kidnaaped him to make nuclear weapons for them. Sameer handed over them to chotu in special security & chotu took them away for further interrogation.
Dr Neelkanth & his wife thanked them for the protection & saving them & called them to their kakas place. They moved along to Jankinath house & he too was happy that both were safe because of ETF. But one thing went wrong that was arjun wounds got worse due his exertion & fight & he too needed a rest. Jankinath himself had good knowledge of ayurveda so he treated arjun wounds properly & all made him rest. Later in the evening banjara toil came to village to stay & perform for the evening. Villagers were exicited & as Neelkanth & his wife were there too along with ETF. Jankinath was told to bring all of them so that they can enjoy too along with the villagers. Althou sameer didn't wanted to go but when Dr Neelkanth insisted so he had to agree & he promised that he will surely attend it along with his team mates. Later in the evening all went to the performance area except chotu as he was with special foece & kidnappers. It was really grand for the villagers & all were excited for the performance. After a while Toli started with the performance on a beautiful & romantic song
Zihaale masti mukun baransjish bahale hizara bechara dil hai ---Hoo
Sunayideti hai jiski dhakan tumhara dil ya hamara dil hai --2
Sameer seemed to attracted by the words & the performance he was talking to villagers but as soon as he herad the song he went to his team & sat beside aisha to enjoy the song. As soon as he sat down aisha looked at him as trying to figure out something & they share a cute eyelock while song moved on further
Wo aake pehlu main aise baithe ke shayaam rangeen ho gayi hai ..
ke shayaam rangeen ho gayi hai ...
Zara zara si khili tabiyat zara si ghamgeen ho gayi hai
Zihaale masti mukun baransjish bahale hizara bechara dil hai---Hoo
Sunayideti hai jiski dhakan tumhara dil ya hamara dil hai --2
Aisha broke the eyelock & looked apart to hide her deep red face. Here arjun was standing bit apart he remembered roshni as she use to like all this a lot. Riya saw him standing with a gloomy face & understood his turmoil & went to him & kept an assuring plam on his shoulders he looked at riya with unknown emotions & song continues
Ajeeb hai dil ke dard .. na hoto mushkil hai jeena iska .. na hoto mushkil hai jeena iska
Jo ho har dard ek heera hare k gam hai nageena iska ..2
Zihaale masti mukun baransjish bahale hizara bechara dil hai---Hoo
Sunayideti hai jiski dhakan tumhara dil ya hamara dil hai --2
Here liza was bit upset thing about her family & brother lost in thoughts ina bit gloomy way shree squzeed her plam in assuring way that everything will be fine & she passed a faint smile to him hearing the song further
Kabhi kabhi shyam asie dhalti hai jaise ghoonghat utar raha hai ..2
Tumhare seene se uthta dhua hamare dil se guzar raha hai 2
Zihaale masti mukun baransjish bahale hizara bechara dil hai---Hoo
Sunayideti hai jiski dhakan tumhara dil ya hamara dil hai --2
Here Ariya were lost in each others eyes riya broke the eye lock & lowered her eyes & tried to move away but arjun cought her wrist to make her stay back & song continues
Ye sharam hai ya haya hai kya hai . nazar uthate hi jukh gayi ..
Tumhari palko se gir ke shabnam hamari annkho main ruk gayi hai
Zihaale masti mukun baransjish bahale hizara bechara dil hai---Hoo
Sunayideti hai jiski dhakan tumhara dil ya hamara dil hai --2
Song ended after that & all the trances were broken by claps of the villagers for the performance. Sameer thanked everyone for the wonderful hospitality these villagers had shown to them & all went back with jankinath to his house.
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PART 14 B
Next day sensing the danger & on the request of sameer Dr Neelkanth purohit decided to went back to Mumbai. Sameer said "Dr. neelkanth thanks a lot ki aapne hamari request maan li kyuki abhi us group ka poora pata nahin chala hai isliye aapki safety ke liye hame ye karna hoga" Dr Neelkanth said "ACP Rathod main samajh raha hoon isliye aapki request maanli waise bhi main chacha ji se milne aaya tha kyuki hame time nahin milta hai normally aur fir chachaji ab sheher aake rehna nahin chahte unhe is sukhgao main hi shanty milti hai to bas saal main ek ya do baar 2 se 3 din ke liye hum yaha aa jaate hai" sameer smiled at him & said "Dr. Neelkanth mujhe bahut accha laga aap sab se milke waise Mumbai main maine IG Sir ko inform kardiya hai aapki protection ka poora intezaam hai bas hum aapko safely aapke ghar pe pauncha dee" Dr. Neelkanth said "Aapko hamari vajah se bahut pareshani hui hai na aapka ek officer bhi ghayal ho gaya hai .." Sameer said "oh please aap chinta mat kariye that's the part of job aap loog ready ho jaiiye fir hum nikalte hai" Chotu came back after some time handing the kidnappers to the concern authority & completing all the formalities & all started their way to Mumbai. They all took next flight to Mumbai & dropped Dr Neelkanth & his wife safely at their place. They were about to drop arjun first as he was injured & his condition was not good & he had not taken rest properly & also due to lack of proper treatment as he was only given first aid. As soon as they reached Arjun apartment arjun got down but after few steps he fall down on the ground.
All panicked seeing him & took him to nearby hospital Doctor checked him & said "Ghabrane ki koi baat nahin hai inhe jis chaku se chot lagi thi uspe koi slow poison laga tha inhe chot lage 36 ghante se jayada ho chuke hai par shayad inhone koi jadibuti ya lep lagaya tha" sameer said Haan doctor wo jankinaath ji ne lagaya thawo ayurved ke bahut acche jaankaar hai" Doctor said"Haan usi lep ki vajah se body ne aisa react kiya kyuki usne poision ke effect ko kaat diya hai isliye thoda bukhar bhi hai kyuki unki body zeher se lad rahi hai 24 ghante main wo bilkul theek ho jaayenge maine medicine de di hai" All were relaxed now riya said "Sir aap sab thake hue honge aap jaayiye main sir ke paas ruk jaati hoon waise bhi aaj raat ki baat hai"sameer nodded & left riya with arjun as he knew riya will handle him nicely. Althou shree, chotu aisha & liza also wanted to stay but only one person was allowed. Arjun was sleeping on the bed under the effect of medicines & riya was sitting on the stool next to him slowly she also drifted to sleep on the stool leaning her head on the bed. In the midnight riyas sleep was broken by some disturbance in the room she woke up & checked but no one was there she thought that she is thinking to much & slept again. Next morning doctor checked Arjun & he was fine enough to be discharged so doctor discharged him but advised the rest of today. Riya dropped arjun to his apartment & after fresh up she went to ETF office.
As soon as she entered the premises of ETF his office mates were looking at her with weird & disgusted looks she could not figure it out that what was the reason. She entered the confremnce room & saw puzzled faces of her team mates that made her more restless & worried she said "kya baat hai aap sab mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai jaise main kisis aur planet se aayi hoon" Shree tried to speak "ri wo ..." but his words betrayed him & that made riya more angry & she said "guys kya baat hai koi mujhe batayega ki yaha ho kya raha hai ek to mera dimaag already kaam nahin kar raha hai aur yahape aap loog aise behave kar rahe hoo hua kya hai " Before anyone could answerher questions her gaze fell on the headlines of the news paper laying on the table which had her & arjuns photograph & headlines were "ETF ke ACP Arjun suryakant Rawte ka unhike saath kaam karne waali ladki riya mukherjee se najaaz sambandh Kannon ke rakhwaalo ne kannon ka hi mazaaq banaya" & photo was close up photo of the last night when she was sleeping with her head leaned on the bed & it looked in the photograph as she was sleeping on his shoulders. Riay eyes opened wide in surprise & she slummed down on the chair there itself. Tears started flowing from her cheeks & she could not even react for few moments. All started to panic seeing riya in such state shree Aisha liza & chotu all called her several times but she seemed to have frozen there itself. Aisha went & informed sameer about riyas state sameer in no time ran to the conference room & called her but she didn't responded finally sammer jearked her shoulders & that brought her back to senses she looked at sameer with teary eyes & broke down crying bitterly sameer tried to console her by saying "Riya please shant ho jao hamje pata hai ki tumne aur rawte ne kuch nahin kiya hai" but it could not pacify her at any cost she was really broken inside. Sudeenly gate of the conference room opened with a thud sound & all were surprised to see Arjun fumng in anger like a wounded tiger his eyes were red with anger & he had a newspaper in his hand all understood that he must have read the news & would kill that person who has done this. He in same range of anger held riyas wrist & said in a irritated voice "Riya chalo mere saath main jaanta hoon ki ye ghatiya harkat kisne aur kyu ki hai aur inki akal thikane lagana bahut zaroori hai"
P-RECAP: riys & arju into a new & awkward situation now how they will handle all this will that person will get his piece of mind & much more 😉
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