T2: ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA COMPLETED ON PG 91 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful...Finally they are back at home..

Loved the way Arjun tried to made Ri comfortable...by sharing his past with her..then the little walk...nice work!

Do continue..& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry dear like button not work
superb dear thanks for pm
plz cont

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Posted: 11 years ago
Congratulation for new thread dear. Read two updates togather. Love them. Shree told the whole truth to Riya. Love Ariya convo. Thanks a lot for pms. Pls conti soon. Sorry for late and short comment dear. Actual i am busy with my external exams.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Loved ariya
Waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update
Nice part
Ariya are very uncomfortable with each other
Their convo is nice
Wow arjun likes the nick name kept by ria
Precap looks interesting, cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates
loved it...
thanks for the pm
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Comment for part-9
first of all sorry for late comments as these days i am very busy.
I know you are waiting for my comment but kya karron was stuck in some personal works plus office works.
Now come to update.
And as usual it was awesome, blossom and mind blowing update.
Omg riya heared that arjun was saying that he was her husband.
Omg riya got fainted because of shock.
Hope riya will fine.
Now arjun comes to know that now riya was fine and she was coming to meet him but when he says that he was her husband riya hears this and was shocked and thats why she is fainted.
Yayy riya is fine.
But what the?
Riya missunderstood arjun and she says hars words to arjun and he was hurt.
Arjun was really heartbroken.
But love the way sam consoled her.
Omg shree slapped riya.
But he was true friend.
Loved the way how he calmed riya and tell her all the truth.
Finally riya knows all truth but she was shattered because of her mom death.
Love the way all consoled riya.
So riya ask arjun forgiveness and arjun forgive her.
Yayy..
Precap looks interesting.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
P.S. Part-10 ka comment raat tak post karti hoon.
Once again so sorry

thanks Megha dear
Glad u liked it
Well really shree is a true friend & handled well
please read part 10 soon hope u will like that too
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome update di
loved it
wow..riya's entry in arjun's house with all rituals
so sweet of kaki
beautifully written
loved arjun n riya's convo
aww..riya embarrassed at her deeds
loved the way arjun explained everything
continu soon
thankx for pm

thanks Neha
Glad u liked it dear
Haan wo to hogi aisi harkat jo kari thi 😆
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awsumm Goldie! Soo..Kaki welcumed Riya wid all rituals..😊 Both ArIya feeling akward! Riya feeling awkward is justified...But inna hot pati ho toh..😉 But still..Har ladki ko awkward feel hota hai..😊 But seriously love the way how Juno Boy is making her comfortable..❤️❤️ Love you Junooo...!!!! Really? Khana BanAna?? 😲 Dekhte hai Meri Story me Juno ki tumhe sacchi khana banana aata hai? 😆 Chai to mere haath ki peete ho..😉 But haan..I know Juno is a good cook! Riya shocked to know Juno can cook..🤣 But coffee toh acchi banayi na..👍🏼 Arjun remembering Roshni nd his parents..😭 He too has a tragic story!! Poor Boy..😭 Loved how Sumitra kaki consoled Riya nd assured her that she will be her mother..❤️ Loved ArIya walk!! Bechari Riya embarresed..🤣🤣 The last part was really funny! Intresting Precap..Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!

Love u shanu dear 🤗 glad u liked it
Hmm dekho aage kya hota hai
bhagwaan ne chaha to tum bhi tumhare juno boy ke haath ka khaaogi 😉😆
Riya aise harkat karegi ti ye to hona tha na 😆
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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