ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA PART 8 PG 81

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great update..
Thanks for the pm..

Thanks Radhika dear

Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Beautiful chapter Goldie!

Finally Riya came back with Arjun, and Kaki solved Arjun's adhi pareshani by promising looking after her.

Ri's family is no more..very sad...but the silver lining is, sh'll be with Ajju!

Arjun also thought about his teammates..but I doubt his decision of not telling others is right. because Ri is asking him about her friends and am-Aisha already smelt something is fishy with Arjun...

And that Ariya moment was too cute...

Do continue..& thanks for PM.

p.s. I wrote this comment last day..but couldn't post due to power cut. sorry.

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

read all parts in one go...
loved the concept...
poor rii..there is no one in her family..
sam knows arjun too well and offcourse ayesha..
contd soon
and plz plz pm me next time

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aleena

@atharin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

really nice update di

think arjun can handle riya

loved it

continu soon

thanks for pm

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 32

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

read everything together..

awesome concept di👏

loved the cs n prologue

'wo aasha...

...ek koshish'

loved these lines..they r fantastic 👏

sasha married..wowie👏

Arjun avenged roshni's murder 👏

new characters are nice..loved them too

🤗

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ch 1

sumitra takes care of Arjun like her own son😊

all r missing Riya😭

Ariya fb was nice👏

loved the way Arjun shouted at Rathod😊

drug dealing case was nicely written

Aarogya mansik chikitsalaya..I guessed that Arjun would definitely find Riya here😉😊

new character..I just love that guy

thankx for adding him di🤗

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ch 2

care taker - wo ACP arjun Rawte he..akele hi kaafi he..😉😆

so Arjun saved everyone😆

loved the way u brought Riya into the scene di👍🏼 too good🤗

loved Riya n karan's bonding😊

Ajju..cute name..sounds sweet😆

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ch 3

ariya in mumbai 👏

Sumitra welcomed them👏

loved Arjun's concern towards Riya👍🏼

sumitra taking care of Riya👏 nice😊

sam's care towards Arjun was adorable..

salamat rahe dostana SamJun ka😉😆

sam romance ka koi mauka nahi chorta 😆

precap seems interesting..continu soon di

I love Sumitra n Jayantilal..they r too nice..so sweet🤗

thankx for pms 😊

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Chap 1

it was superb start goldie...

riya's birthday..and then everyone missing her..

Riya on an undercover mission and missing...😃

arjun led to a mental hospital...i know why😉

chalo will wait for you to disclose...😃

loved the doctor...😳

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

AWESOME UPDATE GOLD 👏

ARJUN became RIYA'S guardian 😃 and the way he taking care of her is really heart touching 😃He is worried for other ETF member ,how they react to see their darling RIYA like this 😔

And that oldies the so called RAKHWALA of our society 😡

BRAVO ARJUN 👏👏👏 he gave them piece of his mind 👏 MUAAAH 🤗

Little SASHA part was beautiful 😳

BIG SORRY FOR THE SUPER LATE COMMENT 😳

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Chap 2

superb update goldie...read the second part..

you know i am a genius mujhe pehele se sab pata chal jata hai 😉🤣

but you wrote riya's state very well...

ajju nice name..shock ke baad some happy moments..

they returning back...off for the third chap now..😃

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

chap 3

finally read it completely...😃

Ajju riya bond was superb...riya is staying with arjun good..even sumitra helped him...

sam ayesha guessed his restlessness...ahaaa...

arjuun wants to keep riya away from them...but i doubt its a good idea...riya manegi??

incident ?? is it that???😉

continue soon...loved the story till now...

thanks for the pms...😃