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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
yipeee one more ariya stoey
yesss
but sheenshreesen dear i hav to tell u. u wrote fantastically even though it was yr first attempt.loved it.
aur ha next wala lambaa wala update ok.
cont soon dear
thnks for pm doll
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
interesting start
wow again ariya
lo again arjun riya like always hurt karega?
plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

PART-2

IN ARIYA'S SUV

Ar: kya hua aaj chatter box band kaise h???

Ri: kuch nai. Bas ek preshani h!!!!!!!

Ar: (Ri: Arjun mom dad humari shaadi ke li maan jayenge na?

stop the car)mere hote hue kya preshani Riya??

Ar: ha Riya maan jayenge...hum h na mane ke liye!!! Aur agar nai mane to bhaga kar le jau gaπŸ˜‰

Ri: (smile) kya Arjun aap bhi

Ar: mein kya Riya?? (Arjun cup her face nd going to kiss her but his phn rang it was from rathore)

Ar: ye rathore bhi galat time par phn karta h!!!! (pick up the phn) ha bolo rathore kya kaam h?

Ra: kya?? Kya kaam h?? tum dono kaha ho kab se hum wait kar rahe h??

Ar: ha ..ha aarahe h !!

Ra: jaldi aao(cut the phn )

Ri: kya hua??

Ar: kuch nai..hum iss bare mein baad mein baat karte h phele crime site par chalet h

Ri: thik h!

ON CRIME SITE( A HOUSE)

Ra: kaha the tum dono jo itni late ho gaye??

Ar: car khrab ho gait hi aur kuch??

Ra: chalo iss ghar ko acche se check kar lete h

All: ok sir (except Arjun)

ALL ENTERS THE HOUSE

AR: tum teeno niche check karo , mein aur Riya uppar check karte h

Ra: ok

Sh(in mind): kya baat h subha se RIYA...RIYA...ho rahi h ..kuch to chut raha h !!

Ch: chalo shree

Sh: ha..ha chalo

IN UPPAR ROOM

Ar: Riya tum room mein check karo ,mein bathroom mein chek karke aata hu

Ri: ok sir

(Arjun glared at her)

Ri:: kya hua??

Ar: SIR???

Ri: ha to abhi hum duty par h na to sir hi bulaungi na

Ar: par abhi to hum akele h

Ri: nai aise accha nai lagta...ab jaldi se kaam kar lete h warna rathore sir gussa karenge

Ar:(angrily) TO MISS RIYA MUKHERJEE AB BAATEIN

BHAUT HO GAI TODA KAAM BHI KAR LE!!!!

Ri: aap gussa ho?

Ar: mein kyu gussa hone laga yaha par to mein tumhara boss hu aur na h tumne aisa kuch kaam kiya h ki mein tumse gussa houn...ab kaam kare!!

Ri: (sadly) sorry Arjun!!😭

Ar: kya kaha ARJUN' , shyad aap bhul rahi h ki mein apka boss

hu to mujhe sir bulaiye na ki ARJUN!!

Ri: sorry sir!!

(Arjun go for checking )

Ri: ab meri kya galti h phele to khud mana kiya tha ki abhi kisi ko nai batana aur ab kisi ne sun liya hota ki meine unhe ARJUN bulaya h to sbko pata chal jata humare bare mein

INSIDE BATHROOM

Ar: (check all things very carefully. After checking he think for some time then he relaise that he talk in wrong way to riya so, he decide to say sorry to her)(he call riya) Riya!!

OUTSIDE

Ri:(hear Arjun voice) yes sir (she shout)

Ar: yaha aao jaldi se (from inside)

Ri: aai sir( Riya go toward bathroom and Arjun pull her inside the bathroom, lock the door nd pin her to the waal)

Ri: ye...ye...kya kar rahe ho aap??

Ar: (romantically) I m sorry riya!!

Ri: par kis liye??

Ar: abhi mein tum par chillya tha na isliye

Ri: its ok

Ar: tum mujhse naraz to nai ho na??

Ri: nai mein aapse naraz nai hu

ON OTHER SIDE

Ra: shree dekh kar aao ye dono kaha rahe gaye hume jana bhi h!!!

Sh: ok sir

(he go upstairs and went to room nd the was empty)

Sh: are ye room to khali h kaha gaye ye dono??

tbc...

Edited by sheenshreesen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

awesome update
love it
cont soon


THANKS ND SORRY FOR NEW THREAD!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sheenshreesen


THANKS ND SORRY FOR NEW THREAD!!!!


pls dnt say sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
OhOho!!!...bathroom wala love!!...maza hi aa gya aaj toh...ye shree ke bacche ko aur Koi kaam nhi h kya!..jb Dekho ariya ki jasoosi karta rehta h!..n Woh rathore..jab Dekho kaam kaam kaam!..urgghhh!!...lekin humara super cop arjun sabse aageh...aakhir romance krne ka tarika nikal hi liya usne!!
Loved d update..gr8 gng..continue soon!
Luv u sweetie pie..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow dear.
It was awesome and mind blowing update.
Just loved it.
So ariya are in relationship.
So riya was tensed whether her parents were agreed for there marriage or not.
So acp sahab ne to pehle se hi bhagne ka soch rakha hain.
Shit yeh rathore bhi jab dekho bich main tapak jata hain.
Aww arjun was angry on her.
Yeh shakuni shree bhi.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear.
It was awesome and mind blowing update.
Just loved it.
So ariya are in relationship.
So riya was tensed whether her parents were agreed for there marriage or not.
So acp sahab ne to pehle se hi bhagne ka soch rakha hain.
Shit yeh rathore bhi jab dekho bich main tapak jata hain.
Aww arjun was angry on her.
Yeh shakuni shree bhi.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.


thanks for awesome reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: riyaarjunrawte

OhOho!!!...bathroom wala love!!...maza hi aa gya aaj toh...ye shree ke bacche ko aur Koi kaam nhi h kya!..jb Dekho ariya ki jasoosi karta rehta h!..n Woh rathore..jab Dekho kaam kaam kaam!..urgghhh!!...lekin humara super cop arjun sabse aageh...aakhir romance krne ka tarika nikal hi liya usne!!
Loved d update..gr8 gng..continue soon!
Luv u sweetie pie..:)


THANKS SWEETY
Nd agar shree ariya ki jasoosi nai karega to uska etf news channel band nai ho jayega...;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Lovely update dr...!!!!
Awww Ariya r in relationship...!!!!
Wow Arjun tou Riya ko bhaaga kar le jaano ko bhi ready hai... 😳
Aarrgghhh Rathod...wrog timing... 😑 😑
Wht the...without any reason he behaved a bit rudely to her...😑 Chalo realize tou kiya that he was a bit rude... πŸ˜›
Aww bathroom romance... 😳 😳
I thought Shree will surely caught thm red-handed... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!

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