|| Arjun SS-Zehnaseeb || Part 12-Pg 58 And 59

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Congooo for complettiiing a whole year here sHANUUU!

😃 I am glad I got to know you heheheh !

wow,,,now what is this bizarre taskkk you gaveee us? 😆

Lol...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Congo shanu dear 🤗

Keep writing 😊

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

congo Shaanu doll for completing 1 year... 🤗 ❤️

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Well shanu dear here is your given task

Shanayas character: Well i really like some qualities of shanaya that are her out spoken nature , her contagious smile, her fighting spirit for right thing & last her attitude tit for tat loved it I really liked her calmness that she has she will never say that i know this but her actions speak louder than her words thats what I love about this girl. Shanaya is strong, confident, mature & understanding too & the way she is supporting ETF is great 👏 a true girl next dor but with a very strong head n high moral values awesome dear.

Her match with AKDU Rawte : well that is really interesting to see her tiffs with arjun are really interesting she is mature to sense something deep & all she wants hi to be happy & arjun is finding this really strange he is also stunned to see her capabilities n really she is god match to rawte I really think her contrast & full of life attitude will help our akdu rawte to understand n think about himself her contagious smiles have effected him deep somewhere i a just waiting for the day he will accept it 😊

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fairy shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

congrats for completing a whole year.
m glad to come across being yr buddy n appreciate yr fiction
thnks n yes yr story rocks dear

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

for completewhole year in if

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Wow Shanu!

That was an amazing update! I know i didn't comment on the previous part but

I am making it up with this one or else I won;t get time 😆

I loved how Rathore and Arjun were grilling Shiva...Poor soul...Kya karein police ki duty aisi hi hoti hai. We have seen plenty of that now haven't we 😆

And Lol...Shree bhaag gaya...why am I not surprised? Excuses, excuses, and excuses...See Chotu is much nicer! Lol...But thodi der ke baad wo bhi satak gaya. Har ek friend kamina hot ahai!

I liked the little conversation you and Ajrun had. So sweeettt although most of the time you were the one talking. but still it was sweet 😆 uSSE BHI BOLNE ka mauka hi nahi diya Shans

hehe!

Justkidding!

OMG...your dad came to the Elite ETF! wooohooo! That was an exciting development!

😃

I just loved the way he talked with Rathore...so niceee!

Continue sooonnn Shanu

Love you lodasss

❤️

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

super update.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm dear..

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

awesome update di
loved it
loved shanjun's convo
shan ne jun ko chotu samajh liya..hehe..
maza aaya..
cutting chai n strong coffee ka combo tha
oh wow..shan's father in ETF!!
nyc comments by him
loved his character
thankx for pm
continu soon