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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept...
supeb update...
continue soon!!!!!!!!
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nice update dear... continue soon... thanks for the pm
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Awesome and superb start.
Loved the beginnig.
Continue sooonish..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept and part... Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looking good. Filler chapter but a nice intro between Riya and the ETF team. Lolol, typical Sakshi blabbering on without listening. Nice job! Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2
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all moved out of office towards the parking lot .
rathod and arjun were going to drop them .
rathod: aisha . liza and sakshi , u guys come with me i will drop you and arjun you can drop shree , chotu and riya as they live on the street near yours
arjun looked at him and nodded
aisha beamed happily while sakshi making sad face made her way to rathods car .
shree: hahaha potte sakhz lol
chotu: ha serves her right always wants to stay with arjun sir like her security
riya: yeh kiya Barbara rahe ho tum log huh
shree:chal suv mei baith i will tell you all
arjun:agar tum logo ka chatting khatam ho gaya ho toh ajao
riya:kharoosh kahi ka
chotu:aiilaa riya marwana hai kiya
they quietly made three way into the car at the back seat .arjun turned and looked at the trio and said '' kiya mei tumlogo ka chauffer ho ''
shree: huh sorry sir
and they pushed riya infront , she sat three without saying anything .shree and chotu at the back wishpering to them selves
suddenly riya fone starting ringing
'' kiya huwa tera wada . woh kasam woh irada , bhulega dil jis din tumhe woh din zindagi ka akhri din hoga ' ''
arjun ek jhatke se riya ki or dekhta hai surprise with the song she kept as her ring tone . well to be honest aj kal ke young larkiya aesi purani gana thoro apna ringtone rakhti hai .. but riya was different , from the moment he saw her ,he felt alag type of clsenes with her as if he knew her , but how ...
here riya answered her fone '' helloo darling , kiya haal hai .kidhar ho
caller :...
riya: huh ha mei bas ghar pahuch ne wali hu half an hour mei , u come and pick me up ok
caller: ...
riya:bye ..love u two
after disconnecting the fone she looked at arjun and said '' sir ''
arjun : huh riya yeh tumhari ring tone i mean itna ppurana
riya:ha sir woh yeh mera aur mere jaan ki song thi
arjun raised his eyebrows
while shree piped in ; jaan , oho riya , tumhara boyfriend .acha wahi tha jisse tu abhi baat kar rahi thi
chotu:hailla riya tum ne bataya nahi hamme
riya laughed at three antics
'' guys stop it no , no he is not my borfriend , but he is my best friend ... aur mera jo jaan hai woh hai is duniya mei kahi saahi salamth bas interzaar hai uss waqt ka jab unse mulaakaath hogi , tab tak mei usski har chizz apne jaan se jiyada sambhaal kar rakti hu ''
shree:matlab
arjun: waise uska naam kiya hai
riya:kiss ka
chotu:sir mera ghar gaya. thanks sir ,and bye shree , riya
both shree and riya waved chotu bye while arjun just nodded and drove again
shree: kabse chakkar chal raha hai tera
riya:jabse hum chotee thee
shree:matlab
arjun was driving but his ears were listening to the twos talk.
riya: woh hamari shadi tai ho gayi thi
shree shouted:what ,
riya smiled and sais '' haa par hum mil na paye , shayad kismet ko manzoor nahi tha ...
kitne purani baath hai yeh riya ,'' shree said
riya: huh 15 years purani
shree:what
arjun lost in his thought
''riyu riyu , yeh lo meine tere liye yeh gana likha hai
little riyu; aajuu really wow , gao nah
arjuuu: kiya huwa tera wada , woh kasam woh irlaaa da ''
little riyu :uffo arjuu ilaada nahi , iraada
arjuu holding his hand says soooliii
soddenly shree shakes arjun and he comes out of his thoughts and says '' ha shree kiya huwa ''
shree: sir mera ghar aagaya
arjun : oh ok
for few minutes arjun drove in silence and then said '' toh riya kiya tumhe yaad hai uska naam ''
riya smiled at him and said '' sir kiya aap saas lena bund karte ho ''
arjun:huh samjha nahi
riya:sir woh mere saanso mei basa hai and yes i remember his name .its arjuuu
arjun shocked and stopped the car in a jerk .
riya shouts : kiya huwa sir
arjun:haa woh tumhara ghar agaya
riya: oh thanks sir , saying this she gt off the suv and turned towards her home but arjun called her and said '' riyu ''
riya turned s quickly and looked at arjun and said '' what did u said ''
arjun; riyu meine tere liye ek gana likha hai , bolo toh ga ke sunao ''
riya in tears smiled and nodded
arjun: kiya huwa tera wada , woh kasam woh illlaaada
riya: uffo arjjuu illladaaa nahi , irada
and they shared a laugh and riya ran to arjun and they hugged each other tightly
they were so happy ,kisko koi andaza nahi ke kitna
ajj unki muraad puri ho gaye . bechre yaar milgaye ...
arjun: m so happy riyu , ajj meri dua puri huwi , tum mujhe mil gayi ...
riiya:crying said haa arjuu meri bhi , meine hamesha bas tumko milne ki dua ki aur hum milee bhi kaha
they hugged again ,and arjun said chal u are going tto stay at my place from noow on wards chal abhi chal mere saath
riya:are arjun par meri baath toh suno
arjun:no mei kuch nahi sunna ek bbaar bol diya toh bas .abhi ke abhi chal packing kar aur chal , ab samjhe yah samhao
riya laughed .ok chal packing karte hai
note: pliz friends dont mind my mistake . fone se update kiya hai .toh adjust kar lena ok
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Amazing!
Loved the cute flashback scene and the way Arjun called her "riyu". This was a sweet update, enjoyed it thoroughly. Except I'm still confused as to who was on the phone with her. Hopefully no one comes in between them now that they've found each other after several years.

EDIT:
Just realised I was first to comment. 😃😃😃
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
omg they finally meet
awesome
ab ek hii ghar mein
wow
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Amazing!

Loved the cute flashback scene and the way Arjun called her "riyu". This was a sweet update, enjoyed it thoroughly. Except I'm still confused as to who was on the phone with her. Hopefully no one comes in between them now that they've found each other after several years.

EDIT:
Just realised I was first to comment. 😃😃😃

thnks dear 😊😊😊
oh no that was her friends bf n her best friend lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome update
loved it
FB was cute
So finally Ariya found each other
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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