FF:Reshimbandh [New version link in 1st post] - Page 2

Nice concept...so you started!!

nice start...continue soon...

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nice comcept dear
too many new introduction wow
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Stylish concept.. Waiting for the next update

pink1, Shamsad1607,rimi_invisible, farana786,Harshamara, sar88

hello😊

I'm updating the chapter 1

sorry but it is little short😉

next update coming soon😊

ch-1

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Mumbai..

11:00 pm

The roads r quite empty.

A girl is driving her car but car stops abruptly.😔

Girl-[to herself]😕 Oh God! Is car ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha?

[comes out of the car n sees nearby] yahan to koi mechanic bhi nai milega..ab..😔

hmm..chalo apni mechanic skills se hum ise thik karne ki try karte he.😛

Girl checks the engine n is singing

ye kya hua? kaise hua ? kab hua ? kyu hua?hu hu hmm..

Checks some parts n pours some water.

Some bad boys gang comes there n start passing some comments.

Boy1- Madam ji! Gaddi thik karna aapke bas ki baat nahi he.

Girl - Hamare bas me kya he kya nahi ye hum ache se jaante he.😡 n thankx for ur help but NO need. I ll manage it.

Boy1- lo gi madamji to bura maan gayi! Koi baat nai hum aapki help aise hi kar dete he.[he holds her n pulls her towards him]

Boy2 - chalo aaj ki chammak-challo ka intezaam to ho gaya.

Girl - Chodo hume. Tumhari himmat kaise huyi hume chune ki?

..thaddd...

Girl gives that boy a tight slap.[slap is so tight that blood comes out from his lips.]

Boy1- tumne mujhe thappad maara?mujhe??😡

Girl - Ha aur agar tum yahan se nahi gaye to tum pe dhara 167 lagake teen saalo ke liye ander karwa denge.😊

Boy1- 😡o chokro! Dekh kya rahe ho?pakad lo is ladki ko.bhagne na paaye.mujhe jail bhejne ki dhamki deti he[laughs wierdly]

Boy2- tumne hamare bhaiyaji ko maara?ab to tu nai bachegi...

Girl-[kicks him] aap hamari nahi apni chinta kijiye..

Other guys now hold her.

She is fighting with all her force n courage.

But those boys overpower her n two of them hold her hands tightly.

Before she can counter attack,a boy hits her head with some stick.

Girl-[screams]aah..kayar ho aap sab.

Boy1- tumne mujhe iss haath se thappad maara tha na?[he removes knife n gives a cut on her hand]ye lo uss thappad ka jawab

Suddenly,they see flashlights of a car n run away leaving that girl there.

Meanwhile..

Sam is going with Aisha to drop her at her house.

They r on same road where the girl was fighting.

Sam stops the car n goes to help that girl.

She screams in pain again. Sam comes n holds her before she falls.

Girl - Sam..[n falls unconscious]

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done with this part

plz comment n tell how was it?

nice update but who is that
girl she update soon

Interesting part

@ shreyashi19mld - thankx dear

interesting start...do continue...

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