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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting n on raisha concept
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hey nyc thought..
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nice concept continue soon😊😊
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lovely concept
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Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

nice concept continue soon😊😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely concept

always there for ur support
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thnx pinku n i knw u r always by my side.
Luv u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful concept dear.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Beautiful concept dear.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.


thnx.
And i vl cont soon.
U r welcme dear.
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*******A Love Story*******
of
****Long lost Lovers*****


She is dancing on the dance floor surrounded by a lots of boys. And den a gunshot was heard. She looked at the direction of shot and found him staring at her with mixed feelings. He tried to reach her but she escaped frm his hand.
He shouts to loose her again "DAMMIT!!"
He was here to nab d drug dealing nd didnt knw dt after so much year he wud face his love once again.

Both of them thinking abt past.

Girl's flashback:

Man to Girl: Dekha yahi tumhara pyar hai. Aaj milne bulaya tha par wo nhi aaya aur ek letter bhej diya ki woh tumse pyar nhi karta.

Boy's flashback:

A boy holding a letter in hand.

Boy to himself: Why u did it to me. Why played with my feelings. I hate u for dis but never stop loving u.
Agar tum yahi chahti ho ki main tumhari zindagi se door ho jau to yahi sahi.

Flashback ends

present

Same Girl to herself: Mere sath aisa kyun kiya?
Mujhe kyun choda Sameer?

Somewhr else

Same Boy in mind: Tumhe mere sawalo k jawab dene honge.
Tum mujh se bach kar kahi nhhi ja sakti.
Main aa raha hu Aisha.
Its time to ans why u left me.

Next Day
ETF OFFICE.

Coehlo: Team meet ur new member Aisha kapoor, Amunition expert.

All welcme her but chief of etf Sameer Rathod moved away.

Soon they engaged in cases nd it take their whole energy to solve d case. Around 11:00 pm Rathod called off. All headed to their nest now only Rathod and Aisha left alone.

Rathod was feeling restless to knw his ans of betrayal nd wen he saw Aisha all alone in her desk he marched to her but stopped in her track wen he heard her sobbing while talking on phone.

Aisha also sensed his presence so she quickly wiped her tears nd waited for him to blast on her for her dad's mistake.

Sometime before her dad called her and told her dt how he created misunderstanding btwn them to separate. He is taking last breath so he want to confess his grave mistake of his life i.e. Separation of two pure soul. Now Aisha knw Sameer didnt left her but how she vl tell him dt she is also innocent.

Present

Sam: Apne ye aansu ko pocho aur mere sawalo ka jawab do. Kyu mujhe choda? kyun mere pyyar ko badnaam kiya?

Aisha is abt to ans him but he cuts her.

Sam: Khair chodo jo bhi bologi ab uska koi fayda nhi. Main apni zindagi main apni life me aage badh chuka hu.

Their convo stopped by Sameer's phone call. He picked it up and ans d caller.


Sam: Hello! Ha baby i m cming. Wat happened? Ok. I m cming.

Aisha in mind: Aage badh chuke hai. Matlab unhone shadi kar li.

Her trance were broken by his stern voice.

Sam: Chalo tumhe ghar chod deta hu. Mere liye mere TEAMMATE ki safety mayane rakhti hai.

She didnt prolonge further and followed him to suv. She is in lost state but he all ignored in anger. He dropped her at her place nd turn suv towards his nest.

Aisha in her lost state moved in her home nd directly moved inside her room. She opened her closet and bring out her scrapbook. She opened first page and admire d pic of teenager Sameer and Aisha staring lovingly at each other.

A lone tear escaped frm her black eyes. And she went to flashback how they first met.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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We were both young when I first saw you.
I close my eyes and the flashback starts:

(Aisha look at scapbook and closing her eye went to flashback)


I'm standing there on a balcony in summer air.
See the lights, see the party, the ball gowns.

( she remember their first meet at her 18th b'day party.)


See you make your way through the crowd
And say, "Hello,"
Little did I know...

(How he was lost in her beauty dt he nervously wished her.)

(Dan reminds hw he used to call her throwing pebbles at her bedroom window nd his dad caught him nd warned him to stay away)


That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles,
And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet"

(Remebers how she cried for d first time for him)


And I was crying on the staircase
Begging you, "Please don't go"

(Dan she runs to him and cried her heart out)


And I said...
Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all that's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess,
It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."

(he wiped her tears and promise to meet her)


So I sneak out to the garden to see you.
We keep quiet 'cause we're dead if they knew

(dan she remember hw they met at her garden to spend their time)

So close your eyes... escape this town for a little while.
Oh, oh.
'Cause you were Romeo - I was a scarlet letter,
And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet."
But you were everything to me,
I was begging you, "Please don't go."

(and once again they caught by her dad and took her forcefully inside house. She ran to her balcony nd saw him down in garden.)


And I said...
Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all that's left to do is run.
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess.
It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."
Romeo, save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel.
This love is difficult but it's real.
Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess.
It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."
Oh, oh.

(Remembers hw everyone didnt let dem meet. Dan she got a letter saying i dont love u. Forget me. She shattered aftr reading.)


I got tired of waiting
Wondering if you were ever coming around.
My faith in you was fading
When I met you on the outskirts of town.

(remember their face off after heartbreak.)

(dan remember her dad's confrontation on phone and sceamed in her heart)

(Suddenly she saw him at her place. At first she thought she is hallucinating but wen he hold her hand and speak.


Sam: I m sorry Aisha for not believing u. For not trusting our love. I cme to knw abt ur dad's plan.

Aisha: But its too late. U r married now.

Sam: Who said dt?

Aisha: it was u who was talking to ur baby.

Sam: oh god Aisha she was my baby sis Zebbie. And she gave me ur dad's msg. ur dad called at home to tell me d truth.

B4 he can tell her more she hugged him md he also respond by tight hug)

(Now she sings)

And I said...
"Romeo, save me, I've been feeling so alone.
I keep waiting for you but you never come.
Is this in my head? I don't know what to think."

(dan all f a sudden he knelt and ask hr for marriage nd she happily modded hrr head in yes)


He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said...
"Marry me, Juliet, you'll never have to be alone.
I love you, and that's all I really know.
I talked to your dad - go pick out a white dress
It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh.

(Now they r engorsed in deep eyelock dan lead by a passionate kiss. He r speaking their inner turmoil through their soft swt intense passionate wild kiss.)


'Cause we were both young when I first saw you.

Now thy r out of kiss session. And feeling d warmth of each other.

After dt reunion nyt they never felt alone. Next mrng they married nd goes to meet her dad who is at hospital. He blessed them nd left d world happily aftr returning life to his daughter.

And Sameer Aisha happily live after.


THE END
Edited by Harshamara - 11 years ago

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