Ariya FF :: Jine Ki Wajah..part 15 pg 71 on 20 june(completed) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
nice story continu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun:-u may go now..

Karan : Dekh Tu Hai Sheron Main Shera ...Kal Tak Mumbai ETF Mein Betaaj Baadshah Aur Main Arre Galiyon Mein Hi Sahi Lekin Crime Aur Criminals Ko Podhne Mein Champion Hoon Champion...Aur Agar Hum Dono Mil Jaye To Society Ka Faida Hoga Arjun...Karan...Karan...Arjun Oye Aisi Block Buster Na Kabhi Bani Thi Aur Na Kabhi Banegi.

Arjun give him look..

Karan:-firse ek bar soch le yara..aur agar tera faisla badal jaye toh..tuze pata he ke tuze kaha aana he..(looking to anjali)chal anjali..

Anjali look to arjun in disappointment n somewhat angry as she thought arjun is a rude person..Both karan n anjali leaves..

Arjun fall in thinking..

Next morning:-

Arjun dont realise when he fall in sleep while thinking Arjun woke up with his usual scary dream of roshni..

After sometime at the time of jogging..he still remembering the dream..He stop in middle..He remember one of his past incidence..

Flashback:-

Arjun:-oh ho rosh..tum samaz kyo nahi rahi ho..mein iss mamle me kuch nahi kar sakta..

Roshni:-lekin kyo arjun?

Arjun:-rosh mein janta hu..tum apne frnd ke liye bahot pareshan ho..lekin jab tak tumhari frnd police me complaint nahi karegi..mein kuch nahi kar sakta..

Roshni:-par tum insaniyat ke nate usaki kuch toh help kar sakte ho..

Arjun:-lekin..

Rosh:-agar tum police wale nahi hote toh kya criminals se nahi ladte..?crime hote hue dekh kya bhag jate?

Flashback ends..

Roshni's word are echoing in his ears..He take a photo of both of them in hand..

Arjun:-rosh..ab toh mere jine ki wajah yahi he ke mein kisi tarah tumhare katil tak pahochu..aur usse saja diladu..Aur jab tak ye kam pura nahi ho jata mein jinda rahuga..Thik he rosh..tum chahti thi na ke mein hamesha crime ke sath ladta rahu..Ok..i wil..i wil..

At karan's garage:-

Karan n all other are sitting helplessly..

Karan:-anjali meine puri koshish ki..tumhari frnd priya ke bare me kuch pata nahi laga paya..

Anjali:-uff ab kya karu kuch samaz nahi aa raha..

Sim:-karan..kya koi aur rasta nahi he?

Karan just nodded..

Suddenly a taxi stop infront of garage..one handsome,young man wearing a black jacket..black gogles..step outside..

Sim(without blinking eyes):-oye hoye..ye hero kyon he yar?

Karan:-arjun suryakant rawte nam he iss hero ka..(looking to sim..)aur isako aise mat dekho ye koi romantic hero nahi..action hero he..

Arjun come to karan..

Karan:-welcome mere sher..

Arjun:-address?missing girl ka address?

Karan:-wah yar kya bat he..hi hello kuch nahi..sidhe kam ki baat..

Arjun(looking to garage):-apni energy aise bakbak karne me waste nahi ki hoti..toh aaj iss garage ki halat ye nahi hoti..

Karan(mutter):-tere taunt sunane se toh accha he ke thoda kam hi kar lu..

Arjun:-kya?

Karan:-kuch nahi yar..chal..ham log chalte he usake address par..

They both headed to priya's home..

After sometime they both return to garage again..

Anjali:-kuch pata chala..?

Karan:-kuch toh gadbad he..priya ke ma bap bhi ghar se gayab he..
Edited by ariyabestfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun:-kuch toh aisa he jo hamse chupa hua he..

Anjali:-par usake mammi papa kaha gaye?

Arjun:-kisine unhe railway station jate hue dekha tha kal rat..

Karan:-woh kaha he kaise pata kare?

Arjun(bang his hand on a car):-kash kisi tarah priya ke papa ke phone ki location pata karle..toh sab pata chal jayega..

Anjali(confidently):-i can do it..

Arjun(look anjali from top to bottom,n give her unbeliveble look):-huh..tum?

Anjali(angrily):-me jitni choti hu..mera dimag utana hi clever he..agar 15 minutes ke andar meine aapko location nahi batayi..toh mera bhi nam anjali nahi..

She leaves..

Arjun(in mind):-ek 8 sal ki ladki muze tevar dikha rahi he..

After sometime,anjali comes..

Anjali:-phone ki location aamaspur,rajastan he..(imagenary name)



Karan look impress by anjali..

Sim run to anjali..n kiss her cheek..

Sim:-haye..kitani intelligent he re tu..

While arjun is looking to anjali with almost open mouth in suprise..

Anjali:-abhi bhi 3 minute baki he 15 minutes complete hone me..aur meine aap ko phone location trace karke dikha di..

Arjun just keep looking to her..

Anjali:-dont underestimate a girl ever mr.arjun..

She walked away..

A voice starts echoying in his mind..

"aurat ki kabiliyat pe kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye.."

A small smile crept on his lips..

Arjun(in mind):-tumhari hi tarah he..agar tum hoti toh tum dono ki acchi jamati

Karan:-hmm toh ab hame rajastan jana padega..

Sim:-mein bhi chalu tumhare sath?

Arjun raised his eyebrow..

Karan:-are intro dena bhul gaya..



Ye meri frnd he simran..

Are aise mat dekh..frnd hi he..gf nahi..

Simran:-oye..teri gf banane ka muze koi shauk nahi..

Karan:-oye..mere pas kya gf ki kami he jo mein tuze apni gf banauga..

Simran:-huh..gfs..?teri konsi gf tuze 5-6 din se jyada bardast karti he..?

Karan:-oye..5-6 din me mein hi usase break up kar leta hu..

Arjun:-muze lagta he..muze rajastan akele hi jana chahiye..

Both karan n sim stop fighting..n keep quite..

They goto the village..where priya's father..

They go there as undercover..karan n sim become a rajastani couple while arjun n anjali becomes tourist..

They started gathering information..

N finally they found that priya's marriage is fixed..n the marriage is on tommorrow..

Sim:-kaise log he ye..?8 sal ke ladki ki shadi?

Arjun:-yaha par salo se ye bal-vivah ki rituals chale aa rahe he..hame isse rokna hoga..

Karan:-lekin kaise?sara gaon hamare khilaf ho jayega..aur police bhi kuch nahi karegi..

Arjun:-ek tarika he..

He call a social organisation..which work against bal-vivah..

Next day:-

Arjun n his team with the help of that social organisation stops priya's marriage...

Priya become very happy..her parents were very much angry specially on anjali..because anjali told everyone that priya is missing..

But arjun samzayofy to all in his own way..

They again come back to mumbai..they all come to garage..

Arjun(to anjali):-keep it up..tum toh enstine ki nani ho..

He smile n about to leave..

Karan:-are shera..kaha ja rahe ho..?

Arjun just turn n look to him..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Karan:-mana ke mera garage tere ghar itana luxirious nahi he..par bura bhi nahi he..

Arjun:-chal..mein akele saman shift karwau kya..?help kar meri..

Karan smile n leave with arjun..

Sim n anjali headed towards their home..

After sometime..arjun n karan come..they shift arjun's luggage to garage..

At night:-

Karan get a call..when he finishes the call..he becomes very upset..

He leaves to somewhere..

When he comes at morning..he has a bag..

Sim:-karan kaha chale gaye the?

Karan:-tu yaha kya kar rahi he?

Sim:-mein toh bas aise hi tum logo se milane aayi thi..

Karan:-tu ruk..muze abhi nikalna he urgent..

Arjun:-aisa kya kam he?aur iss bag me kya he..?

Karan:-kuch khas nahi..mein chalta hu..

He was about to leave when some childrens come

N they almost collaps on karan..

(the childerns whom he gave money 4 their study..)

Due to this..the bag from his hand get escaped..

The bag get open..

All get shock to see it..

The bag was full of money..

Arjun(in stern tone):-ye kya he karan..?itane paise kaha se aye..

Karan:-bad me shera..abhi me jaldi me hu..

Arjun:-kaha se laye tum ye paise?firse koi chori ki he kya..

Karan(in mind):-muze jaldi se ye paise hospital me submit karne hoge..warna woh unn patient ki treatment rok denge..

Arjun:-mein tumse kuch puch raha hu karan?

Karan:-muze der ho rahi he..

He leaves..

Arjun(angrily):-karan agar tumne galat tarike se ye paise laye he..toh bhul jao ke mein tumhare sath hu..i will leave..

Karan look back once..n leaves..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
It is wonderful amazing superb
Anjali tooo gud misss shre dre

Riya 's dialog by Anjali waooo grt 1

Thanx Sonu fullfill mine wishes love u

Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Loved it dear awesome
Bahut maza aaya
Tashan of both karan n arjun awesome
N our angali intestine ki nani was also good
Loved the case
pathetic child marriage impossible
Thanks for the PM
Continue Soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awesome update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
wow, nice update
whose that patient?, kahi wo riya hai ya nahi?
continue soon dear
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part di...bal vivah!!! hw disgusting...glad arjun n team stopped it in time...aurat ki kabiliat pe kabhi saqh nahi karna chahiye ...miss riya so much...koi chamatkar kijiye na di...taki riya arjun ke life mein wapas laute...n simmi n karan are meant to be together...how did karan get d money...hope he didn't do something wrong...continue soon di eager for next part... . 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dr...!!!!!
FB was beautiful...!!!!! Wow he decided to help thm coz of Rosh...that's lovely...!!!!!
Loved Karan n Simran's nok-jhok...!!!!!
Awww Arjun was surprised tosee that wonder kid...!!!!! Wow she made him remembered Riya...!!!!!
The way thy both solved that child marriage case was fab...!!!!!
OMG Karan again stole money but he did all this for a good cause...!!!!!
Will Arjun understand that n stay with him or just leave him for this act...!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!! Continue soon...!!!!

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