Ariya FF: Jab Tak Hai Jaan(ch6,7,8-pg11) 28.03.2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
nice part...
riya ne bachaya arjun ko thanks bolne ki bajai suna diya...

arjun and his gussa...

rathod worried for riya...

update soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awsome blossom amazing update..just loved it...want 2 read more..plz continue soon.. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awsumm Re Zee!! Hailaaa!!!! 😲😲 Aey Kaye??? Riya!!!! Marathi?????? Aey Kaye Zala Pori??? *rubbing my eyes!* But I lovd it!!! Kya dhoya hai re ladki ne!!! Mazaa aa gyi!! 😆 🤣 ACP Arjun pe goli chalana koi ainwayi baat h kya??? Huhhh!!!! Ohhh...So Riya injured nd all r concerned fr her!!! But yeh Arjun!!!!! As usual..daant diya na meri dimple doll ko!!! Uggghhh!! Yeh humesha aisa kyun karta hain????? Sameer Bhai too concerned!! But who is this Anamika?? Very Mysterious!!! Continuee Soonz!!
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
it was awesome and amazing update zebbie.
just loved it.
interogating part was awesome.
omg riya beat that guy very badly.
wow riya cursed that man in marathi..
amazing.
all of them were quite surprized for riya behaviour.
yayyy finally they solved the case.
what the?
the father killed his own son so that he will not reveal his true colours in front of the world..
thats disguesting.
ohh riya got hurt in her hand and rathore was worried for him but love the way he consoled rathore.
yeh arjun ki problem kya hain? faltu main riya ko daat diya.
continue soon.
and thanx anku for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
too good ,next time thora lambi update karna or jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Part 3.

Except Rathod and Arjun,everyone left for their home.

Arjun was leaning on a window frame and thinking about the recent events.

Rathod came and put his hands on Arjun's shoulder.

In a concerned voice,Rathod asked Arjun,

Rathod: kya hua,Rj? Itne tensed kyu ho? Kya main jan sakta hu?

Arjun: pehle Riya ne meri jaan bachayi case k investigation k dauran aur aab main gusse mein aarh mein najane kya suna diya usse.mujhe aise nahi karna chahiye thha.

Rathod: Woh toh hai,Rj. Kal jab woh office aayegi,usse,pyaar se sorry boldena,thhik hai? Waise,tu kab ghar ja raha hai?

Arjun: bas,thori der mein niklunga.waise,Sam, Riya tujhe bhai sa kyun bula rahi thi? Kya woh teri behen lagti hai kisi aur rishte se,as in bua ki beti ya phhir kaka sa ki beti???

Rathod: nahi,Rj. Woh meri behen zarur hai,par khoon ke rishte ki nahi,magar dil se. Tujhe toh pata hi hai,chutki k jaane k bad,main hasna bhul gaya tha,tab,uss waqt,Riya hum sub logo ki zindagi mein kadam rakkhi aur tab se maine Anamika ko apna behen bana liya hai. Tab se mujhe woh rakhi bandti hai,har saal.

Arjun:woh toh hai,Sam. Waise,teri aur Ayesha ki shaadi ki date fix hui hai ya nahi?

Rathod: arey,yeh toh main maasa se puchna bhul hi gaya thha.Thanks,Rj,for reminding me.agar tu nahi hota,toh mera kya haal hota?

Arjun:Chal chal,maska maat laga. Ghar chalte hai. Kal milte hai. Bye.

Rathod:Bye.

Meanwhile,Shree,Ayesha and Chotu talking on phone. Shree:yaar,Riya k liye bohut bura lag raha hai.aise kaise Arjun sir ne usse daat dia? This is nt fair.

Chotu:u r ryt,Shree. Mujhse Riya ka uthra huya chehra nahi dekha jata.kya karein ki uski mood phhir se thik ho jaaye?

Ayesha:ha yaar.baat toh sach hai.chal,kal usse surprise dete hai,whats say? Shree and Chotu:BINGO...

Shree to Chotu and Ayesha:toh kal milte hai office mein.bye everyone.

Meanwhile,in Riya's house.

Riya opens the door of her house and goes inside.

She throws her bag on the couch and sit over there.after a while,she went to her room,bandaged the wound and freshened up.

After a while,she talks to Ayesha. Ayesha:ghar pohoch gayi tu?

Riya:Haan,tu?

Ayesha:yup. Tune tere haath pe dressing ki ke nahi?

Riya:ha Ashu,maine acchi tarha se dressing karli.khana bhi kha liya.tune khana khaya?

Ayesha:ha,abhi abhi khake uthi hu.mujhe teri fikr ho rahi thi,isliye cl kia. Tum thik to ho na,Riya?

Riya:ha baba,main bilkul thik hu.vhal,abhi phone rakh.kal milte hai.bye ritika. Ritika:bye darling.

Next morning. Everyone is in the office,except Riya.

Sab log uski chinta kar rahe thhe.

Rathod to shree:Shree,Riya ko call karo aur pata karo,kaha hai woh.

Shree to Rathod:yes sir.

After a while, Riya's phone buzzes.Shree's name flashed.she answered the call.

Shree:Hello,Riya.kahan ho tum? Rathod sir tumhare baare mein puch rahe thhe?kab tak aaogi?

Riya:Shree,main city hospital ayi hu.woh,kal raat mera haath cut gaya thha na.uski dressing ki maine kal raat ghar jaake.office ane keliye taiyar hoke aa rahi thhi,tab mere haato se bohut khoon behne lage.aab main thik hu.stitches leni pari.sab thik hai,dnt worry. Rathod sir se jaake bolo,thik hai.

Shree: ok,Riya.tum apna khyal rakhna.bye.

Riya:bye shree.


After a while,in conference room,everybody doing paperwork.suddenly Shree came and told Rathod sir the whole story.They were worried for her.


After sometime,Riya came in office. Evryone looked at her and asked,


Everybody: are u ok,Riya?


Riya: yeah.main bilkul thik hu.bas subah,office aane se pehle,khoon behna shuru hogaya tha.city hospital gayi thhi stitches lagwane.ab main ekdum thik hu. So,koi case aaya hai kya?


Arjun:nahi,abhi tak nahi.waise,Riya,I am really sorry about last night.


Chotu and Shree are hell shocked at Arjun's change of mood.


Riya(going to Arjun and pressing his hand firmly to make him believe): its ok,sir. Aapka concern jayaaz thha.aapka gussa bohut jayaaz thha.its ok,sir. Aab samjhhe ya main samjhau?


All in awe... Arjun:wah,mera dialogue aur mujhe suna rahi ho????


Riya:woh kya hai na Arjun sir,aapki sohbat mein rehkar seekh chuki hu. (gives hi5 to everyone).

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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#37

Part 4.

Rathod excused himself for a while.He went to talk with comissioner for some important work.after talking with the comissioner,Rathod talked with his mother.

Rathod:ghani khamba,maasa.

Maa:jeete rahye,beta.kaise hai aap.

Rathod:hum thik hai,maasa? Aap kaise hai? Babasa kaise hai?

Maa:hum sab acche hai,beta,aap bataiye,mumbai mein sab kaise hai?aapki ETF ki fauj kaise hai?

Rathod:sab acche hai,maasa. Accha,maasa,aap se ek baath puchni thhi?

Maa: puchiye,beta.

Rathod: maasa,shaadi ki date kab k liye fix hui hai?

Maa:ha,wohi bataane k liye aapko aaj main call karne hi wali thhi.thank god,aapne cl kiya.waise,ha,shaadi ki date 22nd january k liye fix hui hai.aap k comissioner kaka sa se humne permisssion le liya hai.woh aapki aur aapki puri team ko 2months ki chutti di hai.permission granted ki letter dopaher tak comissioner kaka sa aap ko fax kardenge.jald se jald aap aur aapki ETF ki fauj Rajasthan ajaiye.aap toh jante hai,Rajasthan mein hum aapne atithio ko traditional way me swagat karte hai.isliye aap sab keliye humne rajasthani pagri aur sherwani larko keliye bheja hai aur larkiyon keliye lehanga choli bhijwa rdiye hai.aapko aj dopaher tak mil jayegi. Jaldi se aaiye. Humari hone wali bahu ko zyada tang maat kijiye,thik hai.

Rathod:thhik hai,maa sa.ab hum rakhte hai.sab ko yeh khabar batani hai.rakhte hai,maa sa,ghani khamba.

Maa:jeete rahiye.


After a while, Rathod breaks the news of his marriage.everyone is happy for Rathod and Ayesha.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Part 5.

Everyone is happy for Rathod and Ayesha.


Riya was like the happiest soul on the Earth for her best friend,because she was going to get married with her love.


But,somewhere,she was sad.Her eyes started brimming with tears.She ran away from the conference room.She went to her cabin and locked the door from inside.All were worried for her.Just as everyone started to go to Riya, Rathod signalled everyone to stop.


Rathod,being her muh bola bhai,went to her cabin.He heard cry her heart out.Rathod thought of not disturbing her,so he came back.He knew the reason behind these tears.


After a while,Riya realized where she was.She quickly washed her face,dabbed some powder on her face and was about to come out from her cabin,when she realized,that she had something in her bag.


She took her bag in her hand and took out a box from her bag.It had two pairs of beautiful diamond studded bangles.she went to a flashback.


*Flashback of Riya's last conversation with her mother*.


Maa:Riyu beta,idhar aiye.

Riya:jee Maa,kahiye.


Maa:yeh lijiye.

Riya:yeh kya hai iss do boxes mein,Maa?


Maa:yeh humari khandani churiyaan hai.bohut sambhal k rakhhi thhi aap k liye aur aapki chhoti behan k liye.Lekin,uss hadse k baad,apne aapki choti ko kho diya aur humne humari beti ko...


Riya:Hum jante hai,Maa.(tears in her eyes).


Maa:ek box aap k liye,aur ek box aap ki dost,Ayesha,k liye.


Riya:Ayesha k liye,par kyun?


Maa:Ayesha hume Maa kehkar pukarti hai,hum jante hai,usske jeevan mein itna bara hadsa huwa thha,jis k karan,woh kitni tootsi gayi thhi.us mein hum apni choti ki jhalkiya dikhayi deti hai.


Aap humse ek wada karengi,Riya?


Riya:ha boliye,Maa?


Maa:jab Ayesha ki shaadi hogi,tab tak mein nahi rahungi,kyunki mere paas waqt bohut kam hai,aap hi isse Ritika ki haathon mein pehnaiyengi.


Riya:aap aise kyun bl rahi hai,Maa? Aapko aabhi bohut jeena hai.


Maa:jeena toh main chahti thi,par,sab Bhagwan ki marzi hai. Beta,main ja rahi hu.aap apna aur Ayesha ka khyal rakhiye ga.Aur Ayesha ki shaadi mein koi kasar nahi choriye ga.

Al...vi..da...

Riya:Maaa...


She screams "Maaa..."

she comes out of the flashback...

And keeps looking at the box.

Riya promises to herself,that,i will keep your Promise,Maa. Aapki Ayesha ki shaadi mein koi kasar nahi chorungi.


She comes out of her cabin and saw Shree standing outside of her cabin,having worried looks.

Shree asked her,

Shree:tum thik ho?

Riya:ha,main thik hu.kyun,kya huwa?


Shree: kuch nahi,bas tujhe rote huwe dekha,mujhse saha nahi gaya,iss liye?

Riya: hmm... Sab log kaha hai?


Shree:conference room mein tera intezaar kar rahe hai,chal.


Anamika:tum jao.main aati hu.


Shree nods.


After a while,Riya enters the room.


Everyone worried for her.


Rathod: are u ok,Riya?


Riya: yes Sir,um ok.dont worry. Waise,Ritika,mere paas tere liye kuch hai.


Ayesha: kya hai tere paas,Riya?


Everyone thinks what is it...


Riya took out a box and held it out in front of her.


Rathod:Kya hai iss box mein,Riya?


Ayesha:bol na,Riya?



Riya opens the box out to her and everyone is amazed to see those bangles.


Ayesha was happy and sad,at the same time.


Rathod sensed Ayesha's sadness and came forward to console her.


Riya took the bangles out from the box and helped her wear the bangles.


Arjun,Shree,chotu and Rathod were amazed.


Riya:yeh tere liye Maa ne banwayi thhi.yeh hai humari khandani churiyaan.yeh aapne paas sambhal k rakhna.Maa ki yaadein hai.Aapne dil k paas humesha isse saath rakhna.


Everyone had tears in their eyes,Except Arjun. He was following their expressions.


Ayesha hold Riya tightly and cried.


Ayesha: tujhe aur Maa ko meri itni fikar thhi.kash Maa aj yahaan hoti.


Riya:arrey,pagli,mujhe toh teri fikar abhi bhi hai aur humesha rahegi.Chal pagli,aab aansu bahana bandh kar.abhi se itni aansu bahaogi,toh bidaai k waqt kya karogi.


Ayesha chuckles and punches Riya lightly and both of them hugged again.


Everybody were amazed again to see such a strong and unbreakable bond they shared between them.


Riya:Rathod sir,vaada kariye,meri Ayesha ka khyal rakhenge.usse duniya ki saari khushiyaan denge.usse kabhi bhi galti hojaye,usse maaf kardijiye ga.


Rathod:vaada raha tumse,Riya.main Ayesha ko bohut khush rakhunga.


Riya:thank you,Sir.



Shree and Chotu clapped for both Rathod and Ayesha.



Arjun was observing this and stood a little far away.


Riya sensed his presence and when she looked at him,she saw him with a gloomy expression.then Arjun went away to his cabin.


Riya followed him to his cabin.



She saw him leaning against his cabin's window and looking in the sky. Riya started her convo.


Riya:Arjun,aap thik hai?


Arjun:ya,um ok.mujhe kya hua hai?


Riya:aap jhooot nahi bole toh behtar hai,kyunki mujhe jhoot pasand nahi hai aur mere saach ugalwane ka tareeka aap ko pasand nahi hai,aap samjhhe ya samjhaoon?


Arjun:u stole my dialogues?


Riya:maine kuch chori nahi ki hai.maine sirf saach kaha hai.


To be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Loved it zaibee it is beautiful
Loved bonding of riya n aisha
That was soo pure n strong
N riya using arjun sys on him that was lovely
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
nice story and all the
update is fab update soon
and send pm

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