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Posted: 11 years ago
Atisha too good dear
Goga ke dil ki aag & jawalamukhi was fab 🤣
So addu his still trying hard
Lets see how ETf reacts to their plan
thanks for teh PM
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. Nind ki goliyo wali chai peter ne pi li.. A big poly bag..???? Hope they r not going to do something bad with addu.. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lliked it...
awesome..
contd. soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
ithni sachi kidnappers sab ko mile
Jasmine is speaking as if she is his nanny
ab yaha kaun aya?
is it going to be show time?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 21.1:

In ETF office.

Shree was keeping his eye on the kidnapper's car. All were waiting for their call to start their action. And the much awaited call came in Arjun's phone. He picked it up and listened, he agreed with all of their demands and conditions and cut the call. Rathod instructed everyone for action.

On the other hand, the trio was too tired and exited about getting rid of this little problem, they failed to catch the odd, how Arjun accepted their demands without any bargaining and Roshni didn't try to interfere. In short they didn't even realize the trap.

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Goga stopped the car in front of a shopping mall.

Goga : Billu aab kya?? Billu??

Billu was sleeping like a log in the front passenger seat. He didn't reacted on his call. Then Jasmine called him. After a great effort, Billu opened his eyes.

Billu : (in sleepy tone) Why you are disturbing?? Are we arrived in docs?

Goga :We have enough time...& the food court at the top, they make excellent pizza...

Jasmine : Now you have appetite to have pizza!!

Goga : I'm hungry. You know when I'm tensed...

Billu : Ok..you go..let me sleep.

Goga : arre nahi!! We can't leave you alone here...& this car...we can't keep it, it's stolen remember!!

Billu : Hmm..let me sleep...he dozed off again..

This time Goga opened the door of his side and pushed Billu.

Goga : Utho!!

Billu : What happened??

Goga : Nothing..it's not time to sleep..come..have some coffee...we have to call Rawte's..yaad hain na!!

Billu : Hmm...you go..let' me sleep.(he again closed his eyes)

Goga : (irritated and started yelling) Are you kidding Billu?? You are leading this operation...we too didn't sleep for whole night...are we doing such drama!! Come.

He almost dragged Billu from the car, billu again hugged Goga and started snoring. He again dozed off. Goga was amazed by it, he couldn't believe someone can sleep like this!!

Goga took the sleeping Billu to Mall's lift and with a great effort, he took Billu to the food court. They found the court almost empty and took a far corner to sit. Once settled...Billu again slept off like a log. Both Jasmine and Goga glanced at him with disgust. They couldn't believe somebody can go too far for his sleep!

An waiter came to to took their order and looked at Billu. Goga gave the order and warded him off.

Goga : jasmine, what is Billu doing??

Jasmine : I can't understand!! He's not like this!!

Goga : Haan...he always scold me for oversleeping..but today..look he's sleeping like Kumbhakarna!!

Jasmine : Do one thing...wake him up forcefully, make him wash his face and feed a cup of strong coffee.

Goga : I think one cup is not enough! (eyeing Billu)

Jasmine : Then make it 2 cup...but go...all are looking at us suspiciously!!

Goga again pushed Billu to wake him up. Billu woke up with great effort. Goga took him to washroom andaskd him to wash his face, leaving Billu there he came back to Jasmine.

Jasmine was hell worried when Addu was thoroughly enjoying the situation. He loved the sleeping Billu...& uber-tensed Jasmine and Goga. Jasmine thinking of the operation, during hostage delivery, all three of them should be alert, but now Billu was behaving ridiculously. He was the coordinator, & Peter would contact him, but now he is sleeping. Goga came and about to ask something, but Jasmine stopped him.

Jasmine : Did you noticed something?

Goga : What?

Jasmine : Those people, they're looking at us suspiciously.

Goga : It's obvious, isn't it?? Just look at us, we are looking like cartoons.

Jasmine : Iss Billu shayed hum sabko phasayga...

Goga : Let's do one thing...let's call Rawte's here...

Jasmine : Are you mad?? Peter will...

Goga : Peter only need that file & Lala, right? & it's 11.00, Lala is freed already...& Billu is of no use now. Look at this place..It's a mall, too many people around, let's call them and tell them to keep money under that replica in ground floor, you keep this boy in kid's corner and go to the car with Billu..I'll bring the money and..

Jasmine : We already dumped that car...& don't forget Peter had given some instructions to Billu...

Goga : Arre haan..Billu se puchna parega! Wait..I'll bring him.

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On the other side. Shree as continuously watching the kidnappers and found them stopping near a cottage. He informed his seniors about it. Rathod sent chotu and Riya to raid that place on his instruction.

They received the call from Billu, ETF released Lala with that fake file. They put a GPS in the file cover's lining and followed him with help of it. Rathod also sent a team with Aisha to keep an eye on him, so that they can arrest him again. They were waiting for the call for exchange from them.

Another team was following the kidnappers, who reached to the mall, they were watching their movements from a distance & waiting for a green signal from Rathod. Some of them were wondering to snatch Addu from them and run, but a light scold from Arjun silenced him. They just kept looking at them, without warning them.

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Goga went to washroom and found Billu sleeping on the washbasin. It amazed him...Till this date he thought he could sleep in any place or in any situation..but today he felt he was totally wrong!

Goga tried to wake him up by shaking him, sprinkling water on his face, but in vain. He was sleeping like a kumbhakarna!! Finally he started slapping him hard, after 3-4 slaps, Billu stirred up.

Billu : (groaning) Main kya kiya mere baap? Kyu maar rahe ho!

Goga : Utto Billu...we have to go...it's 11.00...and Peter will call us...

Billu : Toh tum dono manage karlo...don't disturb me...

Goga thought something and poured some water on him.

Billu : (irritated)Aab kya hua!!

Goga : Bahar chalo..aur tell us everything...(he took Billu out)

After drinking a cup of coffee, Billu was able to open his eyes, but he was still dizzy.

Billu : Yaar jaldhi karo..I want to sleep...

Jsmine : haan toh tum plan hum sabko bata do...

Billu : Call Rawte..aur give his son...that's it.

Jasmin : That's it? Then we call him hre?

Billu : Jaha mann chahe bula lo...mujhe disturb matt karo...(he kept his head on the table)

Jasmine : (shook Billu) Aise hi de doon? And ransom...Peter ne kuch special kaha tha...kya tha??

Billu : (still in same position) wrap this baby in a polymer bag... put it into a gift box...and give the gift box in Mrs. Rawte's hand...Rawte's ko baccha zinda nahi milna chahiye...aab jao aur mujhe disturb matt karo... (this time he started snoring).

That instruction was too brutal...it made Jasmine numb for a minute. They would have to kill this kid!! But Goga didn't get that...and Addu couldn't understand Billu's words completely. Gift wrap? Why? If they give mom me gift pack with a sorry card, would my mom gonna forgive them?

Goga : Loh ho gaya...aab Mrs. Rawte ko ransom ke saath yahan bula lete hain...unko baby pack karke de dte hain..then we all be free...( he looked at jasmine and found her in deep thought, staring at Bilu) ...Jasmine...Jasmine!!...

Jasmine : Haan!! Haan...Call Mrs. Rawte...Aur Billu ko leke bahar chale jao...wait for me...main baby ko chor ke aaungi...

Goga : But Billu ko kaise...yeh toh so raha hain.

Jasmin : thought something) let him sleep for sometime...finish your pizza...phir bulayng toh shayed utth jayega.

Goga : Agar nahi utha toh?

Jasmine : Arre utthega... phir se dhakka dene pe zaroor uthega.

Addu smiled at Jasmine's statement. Little she knew what this kid did to Billu. He thought, " Nahi ,meri jaan, yeh mowakkel aaj nahi utthega...maybe tomorrow, who knows?" he chuckled at his own thought.

At the same moment Jasmine was worried, she never thought of such brutal instruction, they have to kill this child. But why? This boy did nothing...Peter has a problem with ACP Rawte or ETF... but why he pawned on this kid? She looked at the boy playing, and chuckling on her lap. God! He's too cute...but after a few minutes he would be a deadbody...They have to kill him for their payment...but looking at that innocent face jasmine decided something, something she never did before.

Goga's voice brought her into now and here.

Goga : Jasmine, those people, they are looking at us suspiciously...

Jasmin : Isn't it obvious?

Goga : But I have a negative feeling...that man at the far corner..I think I saw him somewhere...h was in the lodge!!

Jasmine followed his gaze, yes that was a boarder in that lodge. She just ward off Goga's words.

Jasmine : May be came here to buy something...don't notice it..let's concentrate on it...Tum Phone karo..aur Billu ko leke vaagne ke liye erady raho...

Goga : But ransom kaun pick karega?

Jasmine : Haan..do one thing..Billu ko car main bithake aajana...tum ransom le lena..main baby ko chor dunga..

Goga : Aab naya car kahan se manage karun??

Jasmine : Dekh ke aao..agar puranawala avi vi wahi hain toh usko use karr lenge...time bachega..

Goga : Hmm...ok ,then I'll call you..

Jasmine : My phone broke off last night...

Goga : (passed her his phone) meri rakhlo...I'll call you from Billu's.

Jasmine nodded. Goga Called Arjun, and instructed him to send Roshni with money in one hour. But little he knew, their plan has already failed.

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go next page for next part.

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres

Finally read it.

I guessed it right. Peter instructed Billu to kill Addu. But I the gift pack wala part was too brutal.

Billu was sleeping like maniac😆

Jasmine will save Addu yay...I like her

Though there was not much of Addu still I liked it👍🏼
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update cute junior kitne dino baad mila dehkne ko 😆
where is the scroll down wall part 😕
jasmine will not kill addu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry couldn't post due to power cut..sorry.
Here's the next part...

Chapter 21.2 :

Arjun received the call and gave Roshni the bag full of fake money. He alerted the tam already present inside the mall. And He and the entire team get ready to strike. Rathod Asked Arjun to drop Roshni in front of the mall and join the team for the attack after that, he sent Shree to the mall to coordinate with mall's security system.

In the meantime, Chotu and Riya came back with a sleeping Peter and some of his men. They checked his phone and found h was calling some numbers, one of them belonged to the kidnappers. They just added the dots, but needed to ask Peter, but Peter seemed to be under sedation, Rathod decided to deal with him later. He instructed Aisha to arrest Lala, as they found their main culprit.

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Goga went outside of the mall with Billu. He found the car they dumped outside the mall and look at the security guard looking at him with suspicious eyes. He canceled the idea of using that car and moved to the parking lot.

A couple just arrived and parked their car, they were talking about marriage planning. Goga understood they came for a wedding shopping and this couple will take time. He unlocked the door and made Billu sit in the driving seat. He called to bring Billu back to reality.

Goga : Billu..(he hit his hand).

Billu : Umm...sone do!

Goga : Listen...after we come back with ransom.. can you drive?

Billu : (sleepy voice) Haan...ransom le aao, tab tak main thora so jaata hoon...

Goga : You sure?

Billu : Haan..you go.

Goga, sighed and made a quick prayer. Then he stormed off from the car.

On the other hand Jasmine was roaming around the mall. She was looking at the display windows in jewelry shops and mentally planning for her next loot. When addu noticed the man looking at him. That was the same man who's shirt Goga took off. That man smiled and winked at Addu. Addu felt this man was planning something for his revenge and he mentally decided to help that man.

At the same moment Goga came back and that man hid himself behind a pillar.

Goga : Come Jasmine..we don't have much time...Mrs. Rawte would be here in any moment.

Jasmine nodded and followed Goga, who was searching for a suitable place for making their gift box. Suddenly Addu saw a fat lady was coming towards them, wearing a baby pink sharee. That lady reminded him of that moti Aunty and her gigantic fall, and he made a quick plan.

As the lady crossed Jasmine, Addu grabbed a corner of that lady's Pallu tightly into his fist, and the aftermath was terrible.

Jasmine didn't saw Addu caught that Lady's Sharee, she was hurriedly following goga, her speed created a strong tug onto the sharee and it came off from the lady. That lady screamed loudly at that sudden incident, which moved all the gaze on her. Goga looked back and saw the scene. He hurriedly took the pallu from Addu. Like a good boy, Addu also gave it to Goga. If it was any other time it would be very tough to take anything away from Addu, but this time, Addu knew what he was doing. And it worked. The lady already seen her pallu in Goga's hand and she thought Goga was trying to give it to that little kid. It was enough to flare her up. She screamed with double intensity, "This man pulled my Sharee".

It was enough for rise the people's rage. They moved to thrash Goga. He felt the danger and made off from that place immediately. Some people chased him, in the meanwhile, Jasmine took another way to leave that place.

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Roshni just arrived the mall and she heard a noise in upper floor, she looked up and saw some people chasing a man, maybe some pickpocket, she thought. She moved to the replica & started waiting for the kidnappers.

Arjun, sameer, Saakshi and Shree also arrived with the rscue team. They took their position, and after 5 minutes, Shree updated them about the environment inside the mall. Rathod instructed the team to arrest Goga and make Jasmine alone into the mall. Arjun went to cover Roshni, when Sameer and Saakshi went to rescue Addu.

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Goga hid into the gift shop, and waited until the mob passed the place. He sighed and came out when two strong hands caught him. H looked at the man, it was the man whose shirt he is wearing right now.

Man : Bohot ho gaya..haan..aab chalo...

Goga : Dekho vai...I needed your shirt that time...& your car..it's parked outside the mall...

Man : I know...but it's time to go jail Goga...where is that baby?

Goga : Baby? There...

he pointed to some random direction, hat man looked at that, and Goga took the opportunity and freed himself from his hold.

Jasmine reached to another part of the floor when she saw some police already roaming around. She looked at Addu and smiled.

Jasmine : Chalo, time to go home...I'll give you to that police and then I'll go my way.

She approached to the police when her cellphone rung. It's Goga.

Jasmine : Haan, Goga..bolo.

Goga : I'm in trouble. Police came here to arrest us...They know we are here...you go to the parking lot and sit in the car... his mom is waiting for us, I'll take the money and join you.

Jasmine : Why you are taking this baby with us...I'm dropping him here...let them search for him...in the meantime we'll flee..

Goga : No.this baby is our insurance...They won't touch us until this kid is with us, understood? Iski maa aa gayee, tu vi jaa.

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Saakshi asked Shree where Jasmine was and reached at that floor, she was searching for Jasmine, and she found her talking over phone. She reached her and about to catch her when Rathod hissed into her communicator.

Rathod : Saakshi, koi gardbar matt karna! Stay back and follow her.

But Addu already saw his Saakshi Maasi and tried to reach her. Jasmine felt the Addu's struggle to reach something and she moved around. Saakshi also saw Jasmine's face and froze at her place.

Addu was getting impatient to reach his maasi, so he started wriggling and making sounds. Now he don't want to spend a second with these kidnappers.

Jasmine was the first to recover and smiled at Saakshi.

Jasmine : I think he likes you...

Saakshi : Haan...can I hold him for a second...(she extended her hands)

Jasmine looked at Addu and then Saakshi. She didn't took a minute to decide and gave her Addu. Saakshi also took him hurriedly and hugged, & then kissed Addu on his face and hands.

Saakshi : Arre mere jaan, kahan thi aap, thik toh hon na beta.

Addu chuckled and rubbed his face on Saakshi's shoulder, he held her dupatta tight and starts saying his so called meaningless, abstruse words, shooking his head, rolling his eyes and making faces. He was complaining about the kidnappers, requesting to take him to his mom, and expressing his relief to see one of his loved ones. Though Saakshi couldn't understand his words, but felt his relief, disappointment, fear, anger, despondence and desparations.

Saakshi : Bass, bass Addu...we all missed you...now nobody gonna take you from us.(she held him tight)

That was enough for Jasmine, that boy is with someone close to him, that means ETF also reached her. She saw Saakshi is busy with Addu and she started retreating from that place. But today she is not that lucky, because as she reached to the lift, some officers surrounded her. She tried to escape from them and after a good chasing session, She was finally caught by Rathod.

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Goga reached the replica and saw a young lady waiting for someone with a bag. He looked around and moved to the lady. He stopped abruptly in front of her and whispered.

Goga : Mrs. Rawte?

That lady looked at him surprised, and suddenly hr facial expression changed. Goga saw rag and hatred on her face simultaneously.

Roshni : Oh! So You are that kidnapper!

Goga : (putting a finger on his lips) Shh! Madam..dheere bolo!

Roshni : Dheere! Dheere kyun? Mre bte ko kidnap karte waqt yaad nahi tha? Aab sharam aa raha hain!

Goga : Log sunenge toh aap ki hi problem hogi?

Roshni : Kya problem?

Goga : aapka beta kisi aur ke saath hain...uska tabiyat ka toh khayal karo!

Roshni : (flared up)What! What did you just said! You filthy earthworm! Mere bte ki tabiyat! Tere yeh himmat...

Goga : Dheere bolo na madam...koi sunn lega!

Roshni : Mera Addu kahan hain!?

Goga : Aap Ransom do..hum baccha de denge...

Roshni : (gritting her teeth) Mere saath hoshiyari karr rahe ho!! You gutterworm...nalayak, gadhe...tumko kya laagta hain main bewkoof hoon, huh? Chappal se tum sabki aisa dhulai karungi na...

Goga : aap yeh sab kya kah rahe ho, madam..thora shanty rakho na!

Roshni : kyun, maine galat kya kahan?

Goga : Mujhe sahi galat nahi pata, aap paise do, puri 10 lakhs hain na?

Roshni :Nahi dungi..pehle Addu ko do...

Goga : Pehle paise dijiye..baaki baat baad me..

Roshni : Pehle Addu ko do, phir sochenge..

Goga : (annoyed) arre, aapne kavi kidnapping stories nahi padhi? Bina ransom ke captives nahi chore jaate...

Roshni : abbe gawar kahin ke! Mujhe stories matt sikha! Addu kahan hai?

Goga : (sighed) ok, If I make you hear his voice, would you give the money first?

Roshni : Pehle baat karwao, baad me sochnge..

Goga brought out his phone with sheer disgust, dialed Jasmine's number again and extended the phone to Roshni.

Goga : Baat kiziye.

Roshni : Who is it?

Goga : My partner, jasmine. An indomitable criminal...police ne sirf ek bar pakar paya tha isko...

Roshni : Haan..haan..pata hain...( put the phone to her ear)Hello?

But a familiar male voice answered it.

Roshni : (little surprised) Who...Sameer? It's you?

Sameer : Aap kaun?

Roshni : I'm Roshni...I called for Jasmine...they has my son, remember?

Sameer : (chuckled) Your son? He's fine, don't worry, but you can't talk to Jasmine right now.

Roshni : Why?

Sameer : Because she is handcuffed, and seems furious too...

Roshni : (sighed) Addu thik hain na?

Sameer : Yup, he's with Saakshi now.

Roshni : Check his nappy and tell me is it dry of not.

Sameer : Kya?

Roshni : Check Addu's nappy and tell me is it dry of not.

Sameer gestured Saakshi to check Addu's nappy and She informed it's dry. He conveyed it to Roshni.

Roshni : Good. Now tell him to pee.

Rathod : (shocked) Kya kahu?

Roshni : maine kaha, ke tum aapni bhatije ko bolo nappy geela kare.

Sameer : You mean I ask him to pee?

Roshni : Haan. Addu ko bolo mumma ne kaha potty karlo.

Rathod asked Addu to do as his mother said.

Roshni : Kia?

Rathod : I just asked him to do so...maybe he's on it..

Roshni : good..I'm coming.

Goga interrupted the conversation at this time.

Goga : Ho gaya na madam? Aab bag dijiye.

He extended his hand to pick the bag, but Roshni hit his head with it, and started beating him with it.

Roshni : nahi dungi...your partner has been arrested for second time and my son is in safe hand, now it's your turn.

Watching Roshni beating Goga, Arjun came out with his team to arrest him. But suddenly Goga caught that bag and pulled it from Roshni's hand. He took the bag and brought out his rvolbar. He threatened everyone and retreated from the place. Roshni didn't even try to stop him, because she know this bag is full with fake money and a tracker.. Arjun and his team followed Goga.

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Goga ran to the parking lot, limping. He opened the passenger seat, sat inside and asked Billu to start the car.

Billu was completely advertent on the strings, driving the car was a fly in the ointment this time. Goga shook him vigorously and he opened his eyes with great effort.

Billu : Kya hua?

Goga : Police is coming, drive fast, hurry!

Billu started wheeling the steering, changed the gear, pushed the accelerator hard and played driving the car.

Billu : Yeh car aage kyun nahi jata, yaar?

Goga : (shouted) Pehle car start kar, gadhe!

Billu : Maine start nahi ki?

Goga : NAHI.

Billu : (giving keys to goga) Tum start karlo...tab tak main thora so leta hoon...

Billu fell asleep without finishing his sentence. Goga looked around and found a number of uniformed and white dressed police was pointing their guns to them. A lady with that kid and Roshni was just behind them. Roshni's expression was saying, she was going to tore Goga's head off.

Goga ; (Punching the dashboard with frustration) Laagta hain pakde gaye.

Billu : ( opened his eyes) Really?

Goga : (gritting his teeth) aas paas dekhle Gadhe!

Billu smiled like a child, he closed his eyes and adjusted himself on steering wheel.

Billu : accha hua, aab chain se so paaunga. Tum bohot zyada disturb karte ho Goga, mujhe sone hi nahi dia!

Goga heard a thin flute like sound, but he couldn't realize, whether it was police siren or Billu's snore.

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let me know how it was, and also tell me should I continue it or end it here.

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing
Roshni was superb lol
Addu is smart
Continue soon

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