ARIYA OS lAMBI UMAR ( PYAR KA )last part3 page 4

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I am writing a Os on Ariya . Wo karwa chouth me bridal missing case me Riya ko IN volve Karke. My AAj bhi har case pe Riya ko hi Imagine karthi hoon. So aaage
Lambi umar
(pyar ka)
As that case ek auto wala ladkiyon ko kidnap karke unlogoko dulhan banake shadi karke maar detha hai. Arjun identify kartha hai ki wo ek auto wala hai. Arjun ko pichale wale ladki ki freind se ye patha chaltha hai ki wo aadmi ke sir se kuch tel ka smell aarahi hai. Us din Rathore aur sree kuch aur kaam ke liye gaye hai. Yho chotu ,Ayesha ,Sakshi Arjun ki help karrahe hai . Arjun kaam pe ithana involve hothe hai ki unko ye yaad nahi hai ki us din karwachouth hai.
Evening hojaathi hai lekin us khathil ka patha nahi hai. All are serious kyoonki usko nahi pakadatho kithani aur ladkiyonki jaan chali jaayega patha nahi.

Ihane me Rathore aatha hai unko case ki baare me patha hai. because as ETF chief updates jaathi hai. wo bhi case ko lekar pareshaan hotha hai. Kuch der baad Sree bhi aajaatha hai.

Arjun unkiwor dekhkar " Tum aur Rathore milke gaye haina ? Tujko ithana late kyoon? Kaha gaya ? Situation ithana serious hai phir bhi ? Myne tujhko jaldi aane ka liye kahana ? yeha tumhara nahi tumhara technical knowledge ki jarorath hai. "

Sree " sir... Yes sir...sir"
Arjun " WHAAT?"
Sree " wo my Ri se milne gaya hum sir. wo phone karke bulaayi hai"
sakshi " Ri kuan "
sree " Wo Ri Ar.."

in the middle Arjun " Ye dosthose milneka waqth nahi hai Sree . Kaam karo samjhe ya samjhaooo?"
Sree " Yes sir bolke " kaam pe dyan detha hai. lekin unki mooh se paseene aarahe hai. wo baar baar poochraha hai.

Liza " Aaj tho aathe hi Sree ko aathe hi SYs sunna pada bechara "
wo log smile karthe hai . Tabhi Arjun Sakshi wor Dekhtha hai. Wo uski maang me sindoor aur gale me mangalsutr pehani hui hai"
Arjun " ye kya hai . Tum ye kyoon pehani ho"
Sakshi " Wo kahatil unmarried ladkiyon ko maar raha haina ? for saftey" shi winkles her eyes at Ayesha . Ayesha smiles back.

Arjun looks at her as unbelievble. Tabhi Sakshi ki phone pe message aathi hai . wo padke " Ye log bhi na karwachouth par bhi wishes bhejh rahe hai "
Arjun " What karwachouth. kab ? aaj hi na ? Wooo NO 😒" bolke ek baar time dekhatha hai.

Rathore ye dekhkar smile kartha hai.

Arjun unki wor dekar gusseme " Shayad tum ye bhool rahe ho Rathore .Aaj karwachouth hai"
Rathore muskuraathe " Mujhe kaha pathachaltha hai . mera shadi nahi hue hai." Glares at Ayesha . Ayesha blushes . Sakshi " hoye "
Arjun irritate hoke " my tera sahdi ya mera biwi ki baare me baath nahi karraha hoon . aaj karwachowth hai tho .Ye khatil aaj jaroor kisi ladke ko pakhdne ki koshish karega. hum kuch karke usko rokhna hai. "
Rathore comes to serious mode " Sree shahar me saari auto drivers kaha kaha duty hai info nikaalo "
sree nahi sunraha hai. rathore " SREE " Sree " ha sir " Arjun sree ki wor dekhtha hai . wo baar baar paseene poch raha hai .

Arjun ko unko dekh ke shak hotha hai . " Kuch tho chootraha hai " Thab unko yaad aatha hai ki wo office aane se pehale Riya se milne gaya hai.

Wo immediatly Riya KO call kartha hai .SWITCHED OFF Phir wo ghar ka number dial kartha hai . NO RESPONSE .

Wo Sree ki wor dekhke " SREE , " Sree gabharake place se uttha hai "
Arjun " KYa chalraha hai"
Sakshi " matlab , may bhi he is tired . isme chillane ki baath kya hai "
Arjun " yoou don't interfier " Sree se "😡 BATHANE KI KAST KAROGE SREE. kya mera shak sahi hai. ye math bolo "haa"
Sree ka body shivers . wo ankhe band karke " haa ...😕haaa..sir "
Arjun 😡 Detail me batha sakthe ho?
FLASH BACK :

Sree office aane ke liye aarahai. Tabhi Riya phone karke" Sree ko ek baar ghar aane ki liye bolthi hai tho Wo Ghar jaatha hai.
Sree " kya Ri iswaqth kyoon bulaya mujhe office jaana hai emerjency hai Warna tera samjhe ya samjhayoon mujh samjhhaaathe hi rahege"
Riya " Kya emerjency ? what happend " she asked as a ETF officer "
Sree Riya ko case ke baareme bathatha hai . Riya upset hoke " Oh GOD waha ithana serious hai my yeha ghar me bithi hoon . patha nahi my phir kab office jaasakthi hoon .Ithane maheene hogaye hai"

Sree " kya kare . ek chotasa vitamin goli liye tho uska asar poora din hoga . Tum tho Jhansi ki raani tharah Badasa Xora ki goli koyi golgappe ki tharah khayi ho. Tho uska asar maheene hoga na. waise aur kuch din ki baath hai .tum waapas tumahari stats sunaane awogi mujhe poora yekeen hai hamari boore karm per."
Riya " what? Shut up " bolke kuch der sochke suddenly " IDEA "
Sree " What " Riya uski plan batha thi hai "

Sree jump karke " 😲NOOO😲 mujhe Arjun sir ki haathao me nahi marna hai.

Riya" Sree please. mujhebhi is case pe shamil hone ka moka do pleease . I will take care about my self please "
Sree is in dilama " Ok . BUT take care ok "
Riya "pakka wala Promise"

Dono milke plan banathe hai. FLASH BACK ENDS
Sree teeno boys ki wor dekhtha hai teeno 😡 😡 😡

How is it ?


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Meri Ariya in my dreams (My Ariya srories index)


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INDEX

part1-----page1

part2-----page 2

part3-----page 4
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesome start yar...!!!
very interesting ...
so glad u decided to write on the actual episode taking riya in it...!!😉
ye riya ke dimag mai kya chal rha hai??? kya plan bnaya h
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow this is awesome yaar

riya is alive this a good news...

but arjun want to hide this i think except boys no other girl know about her

but what plan she made

and what will happen if arjun come to know about it


and that criminal is still free...

update soon dear cant wait more to read...


continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Beautiful dear continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
please please please update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part-2
All are shocked . In girls mind " Who is this Riya? "
sakshi asks Chotu " Ye Riya kuan hai?"
Chotu " She is the first girl in ETF. She is in medical leave now"
Arjun " Tum ek baar bhi mujhe bathana jaroori nhi samjha . Ye nahi socha agar if any thing happends to her. She is Your friend sree. Aage kya hai . kya hai uski PLAAAN"
Rathore " speak out sree"
Ithane me sree ki phone bajhthi hai. Sree call id ko dekhke Speakers on kartha hai. Waha Riya on line .

Riya " Sree my darling. kya karrahe ho? Tujhe patha hai ? my tumhari liye karwachouth ka vrath rakhi hoon."
Three girls sar uthake dekhthe hai with open eyes. 😲😲😲
Arjun Sree ki wor apne eye brow rise karke dekhtha hai 😡
Rathore and chotu Arjun ko dekh ke😆 Now Sree's expressions are🤢


Riya " He sunrahe hona ? my ye meri mumma ko bhi patha nahi chalne diya. and meri request hai ki tum aaj raath mere chat per aake mujhe tumhara haatho se paani pilaana hai aur khilaana bhi hai . Ok na baby. ... Imiss you darling ( srees expression) ...( beech me nahi bayya. thankyou . she is talking to auto drivers) ...nahi tumse nahi baby. Auto wala se baath karrahi hoon... nahi nahi unlogoko kuch aur sawari mili hai. wo baby tum kithne acheho isi liye my tumse pyaar karthi hoon. ... ha my ghar aadhe gante me pahunchi hoon. mandir pass hi hai. ... wo hamari ghar ki kuch der dor shiv ki mandir haina jo tum sham ko kaha tumhare maa wahi mandir jaathi hai wo mandir. ( jo mandir khatil harbar kis rasthe pe le chaltha hai us ki paass wala mandir sreene usse kahatha hai. Ye sunthe hi Arjun ishara kartha hai ki chalne ke liye . sabhi log us mandir ki wor chaltha hai) ...nahi mujhe nahi chahiye... are aap aur sawari lona mujhe baath karne ki baad jaana hai ...Ha darling my ghar pahunch ne ke baad missed caal dethi hooon ByE ... Are aap abhi bhi yeha hai... ( still phone on ) .

autowala " ha madam apki phone pe baath karna hogayina chale" Kuchder silence ke baad " Ye aap ki baalose tail ka smell jyada arahi hai. aap chaliye my ek aur auto leke chalthihoon.
(Isse Wologonko patha chaltha hai ki Wo wahi admi hai. Arjun wants to stop her. but for duty sake wo chup hotha hai. In any condition uskhatil ko pakadna hai. so he remain silent. under bahuth gussa aaraha hai Riya ki is step per😡. )
Autowala " Kya madam, sirf tail ka smell haina . kuchder ki baath hai.bathayiye kaha chalna hai?"
Riya " teeck hai jaldi chalao . mujhe chakkar aarahi hai .upar se tera tel ka smell. mujhe sai brundawan colony chalana hao. ( Fake name) teekh hai maadam bolke gadi start kartha hai.
Etf ki SUV ' bhi tej se bhag rahe hai. kuch der baad Riya " Are hum bayi wor chalna haina aap dayi wor kyoon lechal rahe hai?"
She is giving info for team. Autowala ." us taraf raod band hai madam"
Riya " kyoon , my us taraf se hi aayi hoon"
AW" abhi aadhe gante pahale waha ek accident he madum. isliye "
Arjun sreeki wor ishara kartha hai. silently sree check kartha hai. to confirm wo sahi aadmi ke peeche yanahi. sree nods his head negitive.
Riya" teek hai . mujhe chakkar aarahi hai. aap colony aane ke baad mujhe uthayiyega" bolke ankhe band karthi hai lekin wo road obseve karthi hai.

wo suddenly " Are ye kya aap mujhe milatary acadamy ke peche kyoon lejarahe hai. aur ye koyi complex jaisa dikhrahi hai. kya ye Auto labour colony " Aap mujhe yeha kyoon le aayi .mere liya mere ghar me wait karthe honge "
AW " gabharayiye math hum apko kaha pahunch na hai waha pahunchadenge . aur apko mere tel se allergy haina ye lijiye perfume ." bolke Riya per perfume spray kartha hai.
Riya behosh hojathe hue aap ya kaya kiya . mujhe apka auto number yaad hai 8743 " bolke behosh hothi hai.

AW " mera auto number se kuch tab karogi jab tum jinda hona ha ha ha😈.
Ye sun ke all Etf members shivers agar use kuch hogaya tho. Arjun ankhe band karthe hai. Choree apne dosth ki sahisalaamath ke liye they prays GoD. The Three girls are in shock. Ek mujlim ko pakdne ke liye mouth ke aage jaana. They are not digesting. they want to see her.
Rathore gaadika SPEEED BADATHE hai.
HOW is it?

for part 3 click here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3760988/ariya-os-lambi-umar-pyar-ka-last-part3-page-4?pn=4

Meri Ariya in my dreams (My Ariya srories index)


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3823710/meri-ariya-in-my-dream-world-my-ariya-stories-index-note-pg19aug22

Edited by SATRISHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super amez update
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yes my riya is back..
bt again she had put herself in trouble..

loved the part..

waiting eagerly for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow. Superb
Riya is so cute.

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