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pango

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

wonderful update

loved it

thanx for pm

continue soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Wow dear...

It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Awesome...

The whole chapter is superb..

Beautiful...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm

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sonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

awesome update.plz update soon.riya ko choti roshni k bare me pata nehi hay?

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Right now i just give you teaser...bez the update is half written ...and tum ho mera pyaar bhi half likh liya hai...
May be monday ko doon...
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TEASER PART 10

Arjun:-Mujhe pata hai,tum kya kehna chahate ho..maine ye news TV main dekh li hai..
but icant leave Roshani alone..

Sameer:- Roshani..??
Oh to ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte cant leave his GF..
Perfet...

Tum ek kaam kyun nahi kerte rawte .. tum eft chhud ker apna sara time ,apni GF ke sath kyun nahi spent kerte...

Arjun: shut up..!!
Arjun yelled loudly...
Roshani is my daughter...aur meri daughter ke bare main ek bhi ulte shidhe word mat bolana...

I cant leave my daughter alone...first i need to findout one nany for my daughter...

Sameer still in a shock...
Kya kaha tune daughter..??
Vo kab huye..?

Arjun: kal aur kuch..
Sam: Ahum no..
Arjun tum ek kaam kyun nahi kerte...apni beti ko ETF kyun nahi le aate...
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Hey beautiful kya main tumhen janta hoon...?
She snapped when she heared on male voice...
She turned and saw one young man, long curly hair,specks on his eyes staring her, with ammused expression ..

Riya: Excused me... maine aapko pehale nahi dekha...( tring to hide her nerous)

Man: Are you shure miss..?
Riya: y...yes I..i.m ..,
Will you please excuse me I m getting late...?

Man: If I say no...?
Riya glup...

What do you mean..? Look Mr. Whoever you are...don't try to flirt with me..

Mujhe karete aate hain..aur mujhe pata hai use kaise use kerten hain..

Man laughed...ohhh... !!
You look like a small kid when you are scared...
Actually nota kid, preety sexy kid...
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Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Awesome teaser..

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Shivani P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

awesome teaser... is ka update de do.. update soon

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unisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

interesting teaser..

Thanks for pm..

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rvss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Mind blowing teaser. .

please next part jaldi. ...

update soon. ...

I am waiting for this part...

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

uff ye Sameer bhi na bina soche samjhe roshni ko arjun ki GF bol diya 😒 😒
Sameer got shocked when arjun said she is his daughter 😲 😲
poor riya got scared when shree try to flirt with her
loll she told him she know karate 😆 😆
shree called riya pretty sexy kid 🤣 🤣
continue soon