Dhai Akshar Prem Ki E.T.F/C.B.I Update On Page 3

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Hello everyone I am Mohini, I am such a big fan of Arjun and Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Behna Hai, so I thought of mixing them together. In my story it will be Ariya and Virman but also other couples so I will give all of those couples equally attention. I hope that my first writing FF will be loved (finger crossed)
So I will give you all first prologue and after that Character Sketch
So here is goes

Prologue

Yes, it happens

This way it happens

In everyone's life, it surely happens. At least once'

When the first ray of the sun spins dreams'

When waves in the sea makes music'

When ecstasy is in the air, ... wayward times

How I wish I could swing on a rainbow of colors!

What they say is true. At this age it happens

In walks a stranger, and becomes dearer than life itself'

And he convinces me that I was made for him

---------- Riya Mukherjee

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It is a strange passion mixed with shame, I am tongue-tied

There is a strange longing in the heart.

These emotions I cannot express in words

Maybe this is being in love

Someday, from the land of my dreams,

A prince will come'

To take me away in a palanquin

Someone, somewhere, God has must have made someone for me

----------Maanvi Mukherjee

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Enough enough don't get it that way. Riya and Maanvi, hmm how can we describe them? If one is fire then the other is water. If one is day the other is night. Riya older then Maanvi, just 2 minutes, but love each other very dearly. They may love romantic novels, love stories, poetries and romantic movies but when they have to handle these kind of situation on their own, they would just blast the person with a bomb to be precise.

Riya and Maanvi in the final year of academy

Maanvi hates her Pinky Chachi because of her Chachi she has a heart broken past and is trying to get out of it. She is trying to get out of it, but whenever she talks to her Chachi or someone asks her about marriage she loses control.

Riya on the other hand is trying all her best to keep Maanvi away from her Chachi, but while doing that she comes in trouble and tries to solve it on her own.

Both have to go back to Hosiarpur because they are done with their training, they will join the C.B.I where their brother works and will be solving their first case with the E.T.F of Mumbai

Riya will be the first one to go and then after some days Maanvi will join her

What has destiny for these two? Will Maanvi come out of her past? Will Riya get out of the troubles she is in? What will happen when Maanvi and Riya will meet their soul mates?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love and losing is not in Arjun's dictionary

Everything is fair in love and war; oh please for me everything is fair in Life and War

And hell no that love starts with friendship

If it would be true, Virat, Sam and me well we would be Dostana for sure.

So I would say don't ever take a chance to fall in love.

Love has a lot of problems and ups and downs.

So dudes for me no love and a little heads up, don't fall in love

---------Arjun Suryakant Rawte

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There once was a mad girl, who was utterly devoted to a certain boy

Eyes downcast blushing she wandered the streets, she would write letters in

Perhaps there was something she just had to say, who knows who she was afraid of

Whenever she met me she would ask me, quote what is love like quote and I could only say

Girl are you even for real? Love and Me? The Virat SingVadera?

She must have lost it, I only believe in making love just once a day, not for always

Man I just feel sorry for all those married men, thank god I am not pheww

Love stories are stupid and so are those people who believe in it

I would just say enjoy the life man and stop eating my head

-----------Virat Sing Vadera

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Yeah you are right then we have these two, unbelievably hot and handsome cops

Super sexy hunks, while Arjun is against love then Virat is making love

Nobody knows that Virat is a virgin because of his I am so cool attitude, and Arjun, well he is just too angry young man type to be asked this question to.

The whole E.T.F gets a case in Hosiarpur to work together with the C.B.I

Arjun and Virat will be the first one to go there while the other members of E.T.F will go there after solving a case that was pending

What will happen when destiny brings Arjun to a someone who will break all the barriers he has made around his heart? What will happen when Virat will meet the someone who will make him fall in love? Will they be able to accept the love that comes in their lives without knocking? Will they have soul mates that they can trust with their lives?


TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index

Prologue-Page 1
Lead Character Sketch-Page 3

Edited by VirMan505 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue dr.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the story yaar
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar .../
awesome start...
wow ariya and virmaan together...
intro was amazing...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome CS..
nuc cncpt.
waiting for mcg update...
cont soon..
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interesting looking forwrd to it...
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awesome concept and cs.
continue soon.
and please pm me when you update and also accept my buddy request.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept continue soon if possible then pm me

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