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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update love ARIYA moments In angry mode Riya hurt Arjun by Roshni's name OMG Arjum slap Riya and Riya got fainted So in the next update Pritam's entry Pls continue soon If you have no problem then pls add me in your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...


bt why is this pritam coming???


ariya ka kya hoga??
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Posted: 12 years ago
so shrees aa re pritam pyaare is coming in next update interesting very interesting... And arjun fight wow i love tat... And arjun slap riya pouts how dare he
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
loved the quote you wrote :)
ouch arjun tied riya's hand to the bed
and riya was actually wearing arjun's shirt
awww how sweet arjun didnt want to hurt her thats why he tied her hands with silk cloth :)
finally riya freed herself from the knot
oh no riya reminded arjun of roshni
both arjun and riya are so stubborn
arjun is really so mad at riya
thank god riya realized what she did was wrong
oh no those idiotic guys slapped riya
but thank god arjun reached on the right time and saved riya
awww finally both arjun and riya forgave each other
love the guy you chose were for the role of pritam
can't wait to read more
please continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii Dii.. Firstly, REALLY SORRY FOR SUCH A LATE COMMENT!! M VERY VERY VERY Sorry.. I was following it from the start and I even had a LONG comment but osmein koi word tha jo dictionary mein nahi tha to my comment wasn't posted..! (Grr..!!)😡

Anyways.. So here I am typing it all up AGAIN.. (iss baar word mein ek copy rakhoongi!!)😆

So.. Part 1:

Dii.. I AM SPEECHLESS..!!! Sachi... (lekin abhi aage aage padho kitni badi comment aane waali hai.. Socho.. speechless hoke ye haal hai.. agar speechless na huyi to kya hoga...😉)

"Sometimes you need to get a little smoke in your eyes; in order to get your vision cleared."

So true dii... Absolutely right..!!

OMG.. Ree bhaabi.. Kya baat hai.. Pehle hi propose?! WOW bhaabi.. Bahut courageous nikli😉!!!

Come on Bhai.. Say YES!!

Gosh.. Just because he is a widower doesn't make him a non-human.. he deserved a second chance!

I agree bhaabi.. acceptance or rejection is one thing.. But hanging in the middle is more painful!😭

OMG...! BHAI!! HOW CAN YOU?! Come on! U hurt her feeling so BAD!!😡

AND you have NO RIGHT to say that to her..! 😡

Aw.. Sh-Ai-Tu are so AWESOME..!! LOVE them!!

Ha ha.. Riya- the peace maker.. Well.. Baki ka to pata nahi.. But Ree k saath bhai na kya kiya ye jab Sh-Ai-Tu- Sam ko pata chalega na.. To Bhai.. U r dead-meat!😈

Haw.. Ree is NOT like that u dumb A*S!!!😡

OMG.. SHE is ENGAGED!!😲

Dekha mere DUMBO!! Issi ka dar tha..! 😭 Yaa yaa.. Go into shock now.. But ab kahe pachtawat ho Arjun.. Jab chidiya chug gayi khet.. Oh Sorry... PRITAM Chug gaya khet!!😡

OMG..!! They are teasing her so MUCH!!

Aa re Pritam pyaare.. ha ha..!!😆

Ha ha bhai.. Be jealous... Aur kya reh gaya hai karne ko?!😡

Hayee. Bechaara Shree...! Superb Pic dii!!😆

OMG.. The kiss!! It was so HAWT!! Come on guys.. U r meant to be..!!!

hayee.. Mere WILD bhai pe pehli baar mujhe proud feel ho raha hai... Claiming what is his..!

OMG!! I can't beleive I just said that!😲 tauba tauba.. HEY bhagwaan.. Bhai-Bhaabi.. Aap dono k romance mein mera dimaag currupt ho raha hai... Muskaan dii... Aapko bhi iska aadha shreh jaata hai!!😉

Part 2:

"Love is unexplainable, if you can explain it in words, it isn't love."

- Shaleen Malhotra


Hayee.. Baby.. This is why I am in love with U!!❤️


Anyways.. To the update..!!


Bhaabii.. fight back all u want to.. a) u want this too.. b) U r fighting THE ARJUN RAWTE.. And this is a FACT that he ALWAYS wins..!! Sorry.. That's the way it is!


Even if he is wild and not-in-senses.. His actions still scream LOVE and not Lust!


Really woman? Outrun THE Arjun Rawte.. I don't think so! The more u run.. The angrier he is gonna get.. Why don't u let destiny take over?!


"I am not desperate for the one I rejected, I am desperate for the one who got over me so easily."


Ok.. I was with love.. But it seems that this also has EGO all over it.. Bhaabi.. M back on your side..!!😡


Guys.. One emotional outburst and you r set.. Ye kya Tom-and-Jerry khel rahe ho?! But on a second thought.. Continue.. M enjoying it!!😉


Aw.. come on.. U r PERFECT for each other..!!


OMG.. He is so possessive..! And I love possessive guys.. but only till a certain degree.. Like Arjun! Actually.. I like Possessive guys.. NOT Obsessive!!


Oh..!! I am confused what to say.. What is happening is right but the way it is happening is kind-of wrong! 😭


Part 2 B:


"People are scared to accept love coz it tends to cross all the boundaries, but least they know, love gone beyond the boundaries, is real love, the love that keeps you in limits, isn't love at all. Coz once you cross all the limits, you reach a level much needed to deserve to be in love. Its like, either you can be in limits, or in love. Its your choice, as simple as that."


Wow dii.. U have given my thoughts words..! LOVE u!!!


Well.. He did put a shirt on her.. He isn't that bad!


Aw.. The man is back! Only.. I like Scott better.. He was cuter😉


Woah..! They would burn each other with their anger and passion!


Then SAY the damn words! Say THEM!! PLEASE!!


Shree... r so dead when she sees u!!😆


Traditional Investigator? Bhaabi.. Jo dikhta hai.. Vo hota nahi!!😉


She is STILL scared of him!😆


Gosh.. SO intense!! My head is becoming light.. M gonna faint!!


Bhai.. Blackmail?! Just say that you love her.. she will call it off immediately!!


Roshni?! Uh-oh.. wrong move..!!


And Angry young man's back! Well I was kind-a missing him too!


Yaa bhaabi.. Regret..! And Apologise!!


See.. That's us girls.. We apologise when we do something wrong!! Not egoistic like some people..!


Khadoos is back!! Poor Shree...!


WOAH!! Bhai.. calm down! You scared me!!


Ya so.. She goes out at mid-night! Big deal!


Yikes.. Gundas.. Ok... Maybe it is a big deal...😲


Well.. Atleast he got rid of his frustration!


She hugged him!! Well that's a start!


OMG... He slapped her?! Woah.. Well.. Now u r even!


Thank god.. Mahabharat khatam huyi.. Ab Teri Meri Love Story ki baari!


Uh oh.. Pritam jii!! Aa gaya na.. Kabaab mein haddi!!


But he is cute..! 😉


Well.. Here is your well-deserved LONG commentwa... Ab jaldi se nice wala update..! Chalo.. Abhi k liye Hello-Hi- Bye-Bye.. Me going to sleep..! Kal milte hain... only on Arjun Forums!!😉

Edited by Arjunkibehen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi muskaan ...🤗
thanx for such a quick update😉...
hmm...arjun ke dimaag me chal kya raha hai?...he tied riya but didn't hurt her...door locked😉😆...
riya cursing shree...traditional acp se modern acp...😉😆...
uff riya touched wrong nerve...of arjun...
those goons😡...riya hurt...but arjun in action😉...riya gota slap😭...well hisaab equal😉...
arjun told riya to call off the engagement
update soon🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice parts
can't wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MastiMuskaan

"People are scared to accept love coz it tends to cross all the boundaries, but least they know, love gone beyond the boundaries, is real love, the love that keeps you in limits, isn't love at all. Coz once you cross all the limits, you reach a level much needed to deserve to be in love. Its like, either you can be in limits, or in love. Its your choice, as simple as that."

- Muskaan (aka ME!)

Well said!! Then again only those who have experienced such love can manage to write such quotes. Haha I had so much to write in this comment that for the 1st time since I stared commenting on ffs (2010) I had the urge use sticky notes while reading ur update! 😊

I could clearly imagine each and every word of this part, especially Riya's emotions 👏. U have really explained everything in great detail which adds to the joy of reading ur ff. Here the readers don't have to use their own imagination to interpret the meaning of an update but rather get to sit back and enjoy what a writer wants to convey, keeping them both on the same page. U made my day!!! 😃

I have become a fan of ur writing and creativity.

I do want to make a request' is it possible to include arjun's pov along with riya? Coz right now all I can conclude from arjun's behaviour is that he cant accept that riya moved on. He doesn't want to let her go but still doesn't love her nor does he treat her with respect. Care yes but not with respect, n that is what bothers me. How can Riya be so quick to conclude to that she should apologize for hurting Arjun's feelings when he himself doesn't care about her feelings? 😲 That quite didn't sit well with me.. no offence intended 😊. I just wanted to share with u the thoughts that crossed my mind while reading this.

Thanks for taking the time to update.

Please update soon! Will be waiting 😊

Note: this is the longest comment I have written so far 😉

Edited by roses.09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome, blossom, super-duper and mindblowing update dear.

So arjun through her shirt away and kissed her.

In morning riya open her eyes and sees her hands are tied. She wasin differt room house and she has weared arjun shirt.

Arjun called her darling.

She freed herself and running from the house but arjun shouted the doors are locked and it need password.

Arjun makes her eat pizza.

Riya phone ring but arjun doesnt give her and she says i need this but arjun says i need you.

Riya reminding him about roshni and arjun angry at this and he through her in front of her house.

Riya feels guilty of reminding arjun about roshni and she decided she would asked his forgivness.

But arjun is avoiding riya and he didnt listened her.

Some guyes are forcing riya and slapped her but arjun reached right time and fight that goons.

Arjun slapped riya but he asks her forgivness.

Awesome dear. Awsome update.

Precap looks interesting.

Pritam is coming his pics was nice.

Continue soon.

Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Incredible update dr.

Loved ur thought about love.

OMG he tied her hands to the headrest.

She tried to free her hands but couldn't did that caz the knot was behind the headrest. Its Arjun so hw can she find any loophole in his planning. Poor gal.

Wow he reminded her of Wolverine. That's shocking!!!!!!

Awww he tied her up with silk cloth. That's amazing.

Oppsss she somehw managed to free her hands n tried to ran away but the door was closed.

That dialogue of his was really scary whn he said that if u don't want..

Wow he told her to break her engagement n only thn he let her go.

Oh gosh!!!!!! She hurted him vry badly by made him reminded about Roshini. That's a wrong move.

She realized her mistake but nw its too late as she already did the damage.

Wow Arjun was in his worst mood ever.

She tried to apologized but he ignored her n even avoided her. Poor gal, felt really bad for her.

Phew!!!! He saved her at the right time.

Loved the way he fought with those men for Riya.

The way he beat the man who raised his hand on Riya was dreadful...!!!!!

Loved the way he blasted on her as it shows his concern for her.

OMG she apologized but Arjun got angry n in anger he slappen her so hard that she got unconscious.

Loved Riya's MV in the end.

Beautifully written.

Eagerly waiting for Pritam's entry.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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