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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part -1

Ik ladki Apnay cabin Mai file Mai dubi hue hai .talk to herself

Girl: jaldi ker beta late ho jayge Ager ho gae to vo tujhay mar dalega

Other girl knock her cabin's door

Knock!knock!knock

Girl: come in

2nd girl: yr tu abhi v file Mai dubi hai yr kab sodherge tu

1girl(just check fil and speak) Ayesha ! Kya yr attay he complaint

Just give 5 min fir hm chaltay hai.

(2nd girl is Ayesha sen sit on chair)

Ayesha : just 5 min ,5min matlab 5 min Riya

Riya see her face

Riya : me knw 5 min 5 min hota hai Ayesha

( handsome guy coming in her cabin he is very handsome boy)

Boy: kya ho rha hai girls shadi attend krnay ka irada hai ya nahi

Ayesha : mera to hai per is madam ka pata nahi Sam

Sam: kya Riya abhi v files Mai chodo yr Aaj shadi hai hmay Aaj

Jana hai next year nahi Jana ???

Sam goes near her and file ko table Mai rakhta hai

Riya: ok boss chalo chaltay hai,

Sam and Ayesha : yepiii

Riya and Sasha goes to their homes

Riya 's home

Riya ready hoker nichay atti hai vaha per uski step mother hoti hai

Komal Roy : jao ! Jao marriage Mai kahe tumay bhi vaha koe

Pasand ker lay hmrai kismat bhi Khul jay kam sai kam tere shakel to

Nahi dekhni padhege hmri zindage mai grayan hai tu society Mai

Tumari vajay he tara -tara ki hmray baray batay hotti hai

Riya Kush nahi kehti hai per pishay sai ik avaj atti hai

Boy: ha ! Ha! Batay ho rhe THI kal Riya de Aunty keh rhe THI jin k

Bacha nahi hota shadi k baad usko banjh kehty hai

Komal : just shut up shree😡

Shree: mom Mai to apko batay bta rha tha Ismay Bura q man rhay

ho ,aap bhi Riya de ko bta rhay thay so mainai v btaya aapko

Riya : shree chup raho

Komal : ab q chup kerva rhe tab nahi kerva sakti THI jab vo mujhay

Keh rha tha tab to tamasha dekh rhe THI grayhan hai tu ! Kalmohe

Shree Kush bolnay lagta tabhi Riya usko Kush na bolnay ka ishara

Krti hai

Goes 4m there

Shree: de aap jawab q nahi deti q Aisa sehti ho

Riya has tears shree hug her Riya wipe her tears and ussai phlay

Kush bolti us ka phone bajta hai

Ring!ring!ring!

Riya : hello

Voice :kaha hai tu ready ho gae? Hm bahar w8 ker rhay hai

Riya : Ayesha Mai ready ho gae bs aa rhe ho vaisa Tum gher aa

Sakti ho to aye q nahi ?

Ayesha : yr mera mood bhut asha hau karab krnay k mood Mai nahi

Ho is say asha hai us sai dur raho

Riya : asha g , Mai abhi atti ho

Riya to shree: shree Mai shadi per jaa rhe ho dad k sath Khana

Kha Lena Or so Jana anay Mai dery hoge shayad

Shree : ok de by enjoy the marriage


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Mai thak gae ho is lea sorry 4 short update and enjoy the reading

Sorry 4 mistakes and error

If u like hit like bottun and comment on it

Miss u all and love u my buddies

Mishti



Part 2 ------10 page







Edited by Mishti_k5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

CS is mind blowing n the update is awesome.

Loved Samsha's bonding with Riya.

Hate Riya's step-mom for the way she behaved with her.

OMG wht a curt reply Shree gv to her.

Waaooo wht an amazing brother he is!!!!!!

Loved her convo with Aisha.

👏 👏 great work dr.

🤗 to u.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome cs and amazing update.

riya and sasha friendship bonding was amazing.

love the way shree give answer to komal.

i just hate her.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome

Love it

Awesomely written

Total u that u will do amazing job

Cont. soon

Hug for u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Harman987

Awesome


Love it

Awesomely written

Total u that u will do amazing job

Cont. soon

Hug for u


Hugs u tooo dr🤗

I will

Glad u like it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ila_tanwar

it was nice update soon


Thanx dr

I will
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesome thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice start i hate Riya's step mother,
COntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nice start.. Thanks for pms dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: NainaSM

nice start 👍🏼👏❤️



Thanx dr

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