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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

*unres*
finally... U updated this...
I was eagerly waiting for you to update this...
Awww...
This update was really beautiful and lovely...
Purva loves Riya just like her own daughter...
Love their sweet and loving bonding...
Love Riya's antics...
Arjun aur noodles ka naam suntehi madam ka gussa chhu mantar hogya...
Arjun thinking abt Riya...
Nice convo between Arjun and Riya...
Aww...
Riya addresses Arjun as Rj while both of them call eachother by sweetheart..
Both of them are really lovely...
Arjun cares for Riya a lot...
Riya also cares for him...
Case going good...
Loved Shree's antics and his shayari...
Sach mein...
Shree ka kuch nahi hosakta hai...

Continue very sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Fab fantastic awesome update
loveitt
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

AWWW This was again a cute update!

I loved Shree and his usual antics. God! Kuch heezein sach mein kahbhi nahi badalti and that sher he said! Lol 🤣 it was indeed hilarious even though no one laughed but still I found it funny. POor Shree hamesha becahra wo hi phaas jata hai. Haha.

And Of course then the ETF in action. That was nice to read.

And Riya was so damn cute and innocent again. Literally she is so full of innocence it makes me smile. I love how Purva tried to manofy her. It was indeed really cute and sweet and Ice-cream meri bhi favorite hai. Muhaha. I scream you scream we all scream for Ice scream! 🤪

But I just love How Riya jumos up when Arjun;s name is mentioned. It's really cute!

And the way Arjun talks to her is even cuter I mean...I just kept awwwing at every phase he said to her. And Riya calles him RJ...that's soo sweet and adorable.

I have to say this...your writing is full of innocence and purity. I mean...serioulsy It always makes me smile. Especially Riya's character. The way you portray is just superb.

I just loved the update!

Thank you sooo much!

CContinue soon😃

and Thanks for the pm

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

really thank u for updating...

riya is tooo cute.. bechara arjun, har baar riya kuch new bolti hai uske liye... 😃

plz update soon..

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

First of all welcome back dear...

And finally you update this...

Thank you so much..

And it's awesome and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

So arjun is thinking about riya...

Love ariya bond...

Hahaha...

Shree bhi na..

Kabhi nahi sudhrega...

Doll song..

And that shyari...

It's too funny...

Loved riya and her antics...

It's so cute...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm..

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

awesome update dear

loved it

bechara shree! fas gaya..aur phir kya arz kiya hai..mazaa aa gaya!!

arjun thinking about riya..how sweet!

ariya talks were cute!

purva n riya share beautiful bonding!

thankx for pm

continu soon!

ps - welcome back!!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Glad to see you back..🤗

Awesome update. ...

Loved ariya bonding. .. and riya purva scenes were cute...

Continue soon

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awesome story...

Read in one go...👏👏👏

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
Welcome back🤗
Finally u updated this!
Nice part...
Ariya bonding is cute...
Purva taking care of Riya aww sweet
update soon

thank u dear so much,,,