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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

LOVED IT YAAR hahaha arjun trying to be rational and that he and sakshi can't be together and sakshi taking the situation so lightly hahaha don't expect anything less from her
And the Milan of tear two without the influence of alcohol was superb WELL DONE :-) xx

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Awesome ending
loved the whole convo of arjun and Sakshi...and the way u described their feelings was really amazing
the end part was romantic
beautifull..loved it
thank you so much for the amazing story
thanks for pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome update
loved it
beautiful ending or as they say a new beginning

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

That was such a great ending to a perfect journey!
Loved it!!!!1😊

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Girl,you know what,none can beat you when it comes to expressing love beautifully that takes one to an altogether different dreamland.His fear was justifying to some extent but how can he expect her to back off.If he loves her too much to go away from her for her safety then how can she move away who loves him equally.

"Aur agar aaj hi aapne humse mooh pher liya, toh na aaj hoga, na kal aur na yaadein.Clean bold in a mere sentence.

Finally the two are together keeping aside the insecurities and fear most importantly to be together no matter how short life is😃

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Hi Avani di🤗...

sorry😳...!

so Miss Publicist finally made him agree to be with her 👏...

Arjun and his reasoning was very Impressive no doubt😆😆 but yeah again conditions😆😆 impossible😆

and couch pe macchar ke saath😛😆...achha hai...

do i need to tell you again your writing brought me another Land...

Arakshi❤️❤️...

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

😉Fcking Awesome Gabbar😉

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Loved the update Avantika

awesome part

waiting for next

update soon

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Oops...sorry ...Just now only I noticed that I didn't give
a ' response ' for the last part..I had read it days before...
I m so sorry... 😕

And the update,
I think it was the way too intense and passionate yet extremely beautiful...
An awesome ending for the story and a perfect beginning for the not so
'made for each other' couples' journey of life...

Thank you for this beautiful piece of work...
And please dont give up on Arjun-Sakshi... 😉
Keep writting...